Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130)

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Ahandu

@AngeloScuro

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

I think I need to draw a chart in my head to connect all these relationships. But I think this is a beautiful story. A light into Arti's past if you will? Loved the detailing of the story!

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Mohini Singh Narayan

@MSN_Vanny

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Amazing update! Honestly, my head was reeling! 😆 But I re-read and it's clearer now!

Loved it to the core! 🤗 Poor Aarti! 😭

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aditi sengupta

@gcluv

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Wow !!!!!!

that was a wonderful update

initially was bit confused with the names

but now it is clear

story is moving in a very interesting way

somewhere i getting a feeling that yash might loose his sight

waiting for your next update

continue friend

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Sheema Rajoo

@sheema_rajoo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

OMG it's so beautiful that it brought tears to my eyes...Wonderful work Indu..At first I was like hmmm who is this Mishti coming between Yash and Aarti but you made it all perfect. Do continue and update soon..

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Indu Ghosh

@InduG64

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

@Saf: Thank you.🤗

@Angel: Thanks. Did I confuse you there? 😕

@Miti: Thank you.🤗

@Vanny: Thanks, my friend.🤗 Were the characterizations not clear? Please ask me if something bothers you.😊

@Gcluv: Thanks, pal. 🤗

@Sheema: Aww...thanks, dear friend. That means so much.🤗

OK...let me chart this out. Following is the list of characters so far:

Yash Scindia
Mishti/Aarti Sharma (now Dubey)
Aarti Sharma (now Mrs Aarti Aman Dubey)
Aman Dubey (Aarti's husband)
Ansh (Aarti and Aman's son)
Babuji (Mr Satyendra Dubey/Aman's father)
Prashant Dubey (Satyendra's (dead) brother's son/Aman's cousin)

Edited by InduG64 - 12 years ago

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Tanmaya1

@Tanmaya1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

This is a very beautiful update Indu.

You have an Art of Writing Stories that Touch Core of the Heart. Your updates make me read them again and again.

Congratualtions for your excellent work Indu

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Ashwatha

@ashGC_arja

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

A very beautiful update and so touchy... Love is such a deep feeling that it touches the other one's heart and understands every small feeling😳.

just loved it and update soon😛

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Indu Ghosh

@InduG64

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: SAnonymous
This is a very beautiful update Indu.
You have an Art of Writing Stories that Touch Core of the Heart. Your updates make me read them again and again.

Congratualtions for your excellent work Indu

@SAnonymous: Thanks, dear friend. That has to be one of the sweetest and the most encouraging compliments I have received. 🤗

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Zetter

@Zetter

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

That was a beautiful update Indu 👏❤️

Poor Aarti/Misthi 😔😭

Please let P get what's coming to him in the form of a jail cell 😉

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Indu Ghosh

@InduG64

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: ashGC_arja
A very beautiful update and so touchy... Love is such a deep feeling that it touches the other one's heart and understands every small feeling😳.
just loved it and update soon😛

@Ash: Thanks, pal. Yup...love crosses time barriers and doesn't need explicit expressions to convey the feelings one harbors for the other. 😊