Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130) - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
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@Zet: Thanks, my friend🤗...Hmmm...poor Mishti indeed...Let's see how it goes...Mishti did meet two men on that road...which humsafar did the baba indicate????😉 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wowie. That is one heck of a family tree😆. I love where this is going Di, and I do wonder how we're going to get rid of this nuisance Prashant. Everywhere we turn he's around.🤢The glance into Mishti's past is interesting and while it starts off sad, she gains the love of a sister-mother figure, and a real family to call her own. So Aarti Sharma and Aarti "Mishti" Sharma, now Aarti Malhotra and Aarti Malhotra, family is so much more than khoon😉 Ain't it Di?🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@Kadeen: Thanks...and oh so glad you approve. 🤗Believe me...after the first four lines of the Yash/Aarti opening interaction (Part I)...the only thing I was sure of was how this will end...The in-between is happening as it is forming in my head. That's what is my biggest concern with this one...I shouldn't lose the clarity.

Oh, I changed Malhotra to Dubey...thought it best to stick closest to the original nomenclature. Identification with the characters becomes simpler.😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful as ever loved it Indu waiting for next update👍🏼🤗👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Such a beautiful update, Indu! Me "likey likey" very much! 🤗
I was pretty confused at first though...but when I re-read the story...well...it does seem sensible to me then.
Loved the way how you essayed both Aarthi & Mishti's character and their cute relationship to perfection...full of love and care.👍🏼
Please continue soon and if it's not too much to ask, could you please PM me the next?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: InduG64

@Kadeen: Thanks...and oh so glad you approve. 🤗Believe me...after the first four lines of the Yash/Aarti opening interaction (Part I)...the only thing I was sure of was how this will end...The in-between is happening as it is forming in my head. That's what is my biggest concern with this one...I shouldn't lose the clarity.

Oh, I changed Malhotra to Dubey...thought it best to stick closest to the original nomenclature. Identification with the characters becomes simpler.😳


Lol, Di first of all, why wouldn't approve?😕 I love your writing! Second of all I understand completely. Sometimes the inbetweens are never concrete. I told Vanny once that I prefer to let the characters shape their lives based on their personalities rather than me fitting everything into a box, and sometimes that means the end is clear but the middle and beginning aren't, the middle is visible but the beginning still plays in your mind, or the end is murky but the progression is clear😆. All in a day's ramblings😛

Ah, I see. She's once again back to being an ignoble Dubey🤣


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome. Loved it. Curious what will happen next.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great continuation, Indu! What a twist with Aarti/Mishti's background! It took a little time to sink in but I really love that. 👏

And your version of Prashant is as much trouble here as he is on the show. 😆 He's put her in such a bind. Intrigued to see how things proceed.

Now Aman, should I be thinking of/picturing PV's Aman, or should I be thinking of/picturing a completely different Aman?

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Posted: 12 years ago
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@Naeema: Thank you. Glad you liked it...🤗


@Sarah:
Thanks a ton, pal. 🤗 Glad I didn't confuse you too much...my habit of being a little abstract makes the readers' task little difficult at times. I do feel embarrassed because of it but can't help being myself...😳

Sure I'll let you know, about the next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@Shashi: Thank you. Please stay with me on this...Considering the reactions I have read so far, I seem to be knocking at the totally unexpected for the next one.🤔 😊


@1HappyGrl: Thanks a ton. 🤗 I understand now why this one is calling for a second read. I guess my abstractness is causing the hindrance...😳 I am so glad you are on the same page with me. Thanks.


@freya: Thank you.🤗



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