Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130) - Page 25

Awesome Update Indu.

@Ash: Thank you my friend...Oh dear Ash...I love you for that hand-grabbing suggestion🤗...If he does that, this story will be over in the first five sentences of the next part...😆 And again, you forget, he has no clue who she is...she is a total stranger to him...So, if she goes..."Chi, ch, chi...take your hand away...I don't touch strange men...he will have to comply."😛




@Zet: Thanks pal🤗...Trust you to notice that Ravi's baby changed Yash's course and diverted him toward Mishti...just as Aayu did to our Yashbabu.😳 A fainting spell? Nah...Our Mishti would rather sprint away than faint on him...You forget she expected this collision (it's the unexpectedness that unsettled and scared her) because she knew he lived in this town and her company is handling his brother's wedding arrangements. There was no way she was going to be able to hide away from him for long, given that she was the boss of this branch and they were the elite clients.😃

@SAnonymous: Thank you so much dear friend. 🤗I read your few-line comments and I know exactly what you want to express. You have been a constant support to me with whatever I put up here...and that means a lot to me.
Sparsh is life...we all feel this life, this warmth, right from the day we are born and lay next to our mothers to the day we leave this world after turning cold...Emotions are just variations of this warmth. For instance, we hug when we want to express love and slap when in anger; in both cases touch is required... I just wanted to touch one aspect of that sense...love.😊

Originally posted by: InduG64

@Ash: Thank you my friend...Oh dear Ash...I love you for that hand-grabbing suggestion🤗...If he does that, this story will be over in the first five sentences of the next part...😆 And again, you forget, he has no clue who she is...she is a total stranger to him...So, if she goes..."Chi, ch, chi...take your hand away...I don't touch strange men...he will have to comply."😛

Superb... Indu you're truly very talented... Hoping some romance soon

Ur sparsh rocks di...take care of ur son and waiting for ur take 2...ve a great day

Beautiful.❤️👏
Yash felt her,had an idea about Mrs D,simply listening to her gasp.Oh,How I wish I had someone love me like that!☺️
I loved his restlessness,him inquiring about Mrs D and his disappointment at finding that she is an old lady.
again,How can someone love a person to this magnitude?
The past was brought out well,inter weaved within the current story.The Past and Present have been correlated well.
The Fates are cruel,I tell you.Why can't love be sought easily?argh!
But reading a story that has no struggle won't be that interesting,would it?fruits of hard-work and all that jazz.
Ansh befriending palak seems like fresh fodder for ingenious story writing,goodie!
Last,yash sees Aarti (Mishti,really,but he does not know that) .
She will surely not be shaking hands with him.Or else her sparsh would give all away.Me thinks she will be joining hands in a namaste for sure.😎
This was exquisite,love explained splendidly.The love portrayed here was established through touch,words,feelings,sounds.It is still untouched by all the other superficial things.

I should stop writing now,this is becoming a thesis😳.

P.S.Happy Belated Anniversary!😊
sorry,I didn't know.

superb. can't wait for the next part.
please update as soon as possible.

@Indu: ha that true Mishti would rather run for the hills but knowing her she will stand tall in front of him but the moment she is alone she is going to crumble 😭