Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130) - Page 26

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Posted: 12 years ago

yay an update and what an update👏

wait when you say the culprits were caught, did htat include prashant?
was yash really married? in 6 months?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Six months later he got married? 😳

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Edited by Kittya_Cullen - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Good ss so far but I'm confused who is Mishti??😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
@J.M. Singh: Thank you.😊


@Puvz: Thanks. Yeah...now that Yash and Mishti have come face to face, can love be far behind?😃


@Nirmala: Thank you...And thanks for asking after my son. He is well now.😊


@rachna:
Thank you. I am glad Sparsh pulled you in.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vidya29

Beautiful.❤️👏
Yash felt her,had an idea about Mrs D,simply listening to her gasp.Oh,How I wish I had someone love me like that!☺️
I loved his restlessness,him inquiring about Mrs D and his disappointment at finding that she is an old lady.
again,How can someone love a person to this magnitude?
The past was brought out well,inter weaved within the current story.The Past and Present have been correlated well.
The Fates are cruel,I tell you.Why can't love be sought easily?argh!
But reading a story that has no struggle won't be that interesting,would it?fruits of hard-work and all that jazz.
Ansh befriending palak seems like fresh fodder for ingenious story writing,goodie!
Last,yash sees Aarti (Mishti,really,but he does not know that) .
She will surely not be shaking hands with him.Or else her sparsh would give all away.Me thinks she will be joining hands in a namaste for sure.😎
This was exquisite,love explained splendidly.The love portrayed here was established through touch,words,feelings,sounds.It is still untouched by all the other superficial things.

I should stop writing now,this is becoming a thesis😳.

P.S.Happy Belated Anniversary!😊
sorry,I didn't know.




@Vidya: Thank you...for such a fantastic feedback as well as for the Anniversary wishes. Good wishes are never belated my dear...they always come with the freshness when they are delivered so lovingly.🤗

The past has a huge impact on their present mainly because this was preordained. Destiny allowed them only to cross paths six years back but tested them for six years...How? First Prashant pushed her away from Yash...and then Arpita. Now once again destiny chose the time and the place and is putting them against a test...both supposedly a widow and a widower now...Is it then time that they grab this second chance and not let go?

Aha...you ask, How can someone love a person to this magnitude? Well, love manifests in various ways and magnitude can only be gauged in that manifestation. I'll give you an example: I lost my father last year. We knew...he knew...about two to three years prior to that that the illness gave him only so much time. The last year plus of his life, he only concentrated on reliving the entire 50 years of life with her...the good times and the bad times...and preparing my mother for the life after him...he made her completely aware of her financial status, he told her how she should go and visit places, meet people, he bought her a laptop (my mom is seventy now) and enrolled her in a computer class so that she is comp savvy and stays in touch with her children and grandkids (my mom is an avid Facebook follower now, and loves to interact with all family and friends). Today, a year after, if my mom is leading a completely independent and content life, it is only because the man she loved all her life gave her the courage in that love...to lead as full a life after him as she did with him.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful my dear Indu😆


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Posted: 12 years ago
@sweetone: Thank you.😊


@Rutu: Thanks.😊 Yes...by culprits I meant Prashant as well...cause once the shooters were nabbed, it'd have been only a matter of time before they apprehended Prashant whom the police already suspected. I didn't want to get into the details of that case. Roy had promised that once he had nabbed them, he'd call so that they have their life back...and they could do that only if Prashant was behind bars.


@Kadeen: Hmm...does show Yash in a poor light, isn't it? So there has to be a very valid reason for him to take such a step, that is if he did...Did he actually marry?..He did have a life prior to the accident of which we don't know much. May be something happened when he went back...🤔


@Swag: Ha...ha...you are a sweetheart you know that?🤗 You read 5 parts and you ask who Mishti is? Well, Mishti is Aarti Sharma Dubey...She was christened "Mishti" by her sister, mentor, guide, proxy-parent who shared the same name. Aarti Di is dead; Mishti...our Aarti... still lives. I hope you are clear now.😃
Edited by InduG64 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Prasadini

Wonderful my dear Indu😆



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@Prasadini: Aww...thank you so much. You spoil me with such lovely flowers each time I put up a part...and I love it.🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Indu Di! 🤗 Forgive me, but I just read part 4. So this comment is for that part. 😳

The quote at the beginning was so beautiful that it resonated throughout the update! That was fantastic!! 👏 👏

You writing was so beautiful, that I didn't even realise I was holding my breath from the minute Yash opened his eyes! And when the news was broken to him, my heart wrenched! 😭

You had me hooked! Awesome Di!!! 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow! I was just spell-bound whilst reading part 5! Did I just read about the greatest soul connection ever??!!

Indu Di, that was pure brilliant! I'm seriously stunned at the perfect flow of words and the easy transition from past to present and vice versa!!! 👏 👏

I'm so eagerly awaiting the next part now!

In the last update, Yash got me emotional and in this one, Aarti got me emotional! 😭 😭

This very line, "She smiled through the cascading tears…"He'll be a great father.""... Ohhh...so so beautiful! 😭

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