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elanpremi

@elanpremi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

u made me remember my father, n it is true that doesn't matter how old are we,the girls will alwiz be our daddy's little girl. The last part was really touchy

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Tejaswini

@teju1816

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

it was yet another superb update !! hey could please update part 3 soon !! 😳

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Maham

@Allbut1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Kat, this is absolutely fantastic! I was just able to catch up on both parts because this weekend has been crazy otherwise, and man it was a total treat to read!

The topic is adorable and I love how you handled it! Both the chapters have been incredible and I can't wait to see how you intend to conclude it! Oh and I thought it infinitely cute how you made a reference to Redemption in the form of those journals and the fact that Yash and Aarti still continue to write in them! That part that Yash read out in the end was heartrending because you can just feel his pain at the thought of his little girl growing up and finding another man in her life!

Looking forward to the next update! 😊

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Indu Ghosh

@InduG64

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

@Kat: This is top-notch storytelling...superb!!! 👏 You know I find this series much more interesting...maybe because you cover in it the curiosity element that we audience often wonder about regarding PV, which is, How will the kids grow up to be...and what kind of relationship will Yash/Aarti have? 😊

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luv_lvndr

@luv_lvndr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Lovely update...nice convo btwn Aarti n Palak...please cont to part 3...

n please pm me when u updating it 😉

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@ksfan2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

loved it so much...it is just amazing kat...pls update it soon. and thanks for the pm

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--HANISA--

@--HANISA--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

love the way arti talk to palak it so lovely part cont thx for pm me 👏 👍🏼

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Sunrio80

@Sunrio80

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

It's a wonderful SS so pleaaaseee update the next part😳

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Mishti13

@Mishti13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

fantastic update

thanks for pm

cont. soon

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kdsubs

@kdsubs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

@Anituram, Dancydreamer, Padmavar, Inkpen4877, Maha9, Rutu83, Priya_drizzles, Lulujjj, Gafulu14, Pickachu, Hana, Saf, Iqra, Borna, Jojo, USManeetian, Freya123, Teju1816, Piamathew, Dona86, Luv_lvndr, Rasheeda, Hansa, Sunrio80, Mishti13 - thank you for reading and your feedback. As usual, you all are so encouraging. Part 3 will come, but will take slightly longer than usual.

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