ArYa SS: A Father's Trial - PART 5 Up (PG 22)

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

i would like to read the 3rd part please.

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priya

@priya_drizzles

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

wow.. that was a sensible yet cute update.. loved it so much.. u must do a third part.. right ?😉

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lulujjjj

@lulujjjj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

oh loving it dear with palak payal and some aarya moments good

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Pickachu

@pickachu

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

I have read ur previous FF.

Now i have read this FF of urs!!

Really very nice FF!!

Continue soonnn.

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hana_y

@hana_y

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

wow awesome fabulous amazing lovely i dont have words to say ho wit was just cont it 👏 👍🏼

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Kesha_H.

@Kesha_H.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

@kdsubs1: y can't I use this dialog in Scindia land? awww and thank u for braking it up in parts I'm sure ppl will b thankful to me for making u split up this thing into a SS 😆 Yup I think u should continue.

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saf24

@saf24

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Read both parts in one go. Totally enjoyed it and would love to read part 3. Great job on this one

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Mishtieeeee <3

@Koolsmile

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Loved it as usual 😛
Aarti seemed to b very understanding n Frank mother, whereas yash's whole part , in the diary reflects wat a father thinks about his daughter, their feelings, their insecurity,their deep emotions n a realization that she has to leave them after getting married n I feel fathers really never show wat they feel about the whole scenario of their beloved daughters marrying off to sumone n leaving but they really are affected by the reality n its nothing but painful !
But hats off to yew brilliant job 👏
n chapter 3 is defiantly needed ya 😉

Naureen 😃

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--Iqra--

@--Iqra--

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Excellent Work! I read part 1 when you put it up, just didn't have the time to comment! You write wonderfully, and you portray each characters beautifully! Please Continue, I'd love to read more! 😳

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MelodiousDreams

@MelodiousDreams

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Kat,

Yes, you got my name right! And I know I still haven't been able to comment properly on part 1 but I absolutely intend to do so for both that part and part 2, which was so beautiful!

I'll be back, I promise - and I'd love to read more of your writing, whether it's part of this story or another one!

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