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cynthiagem

@cynthiagem

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Hi! Asmani. I love how you presented Yash's realizations as he ponders upon his feelings and thoughts from the moment Artii became a member of the Scindia's family. I'm sure these will all happen in perfect time in the course of the story.

Since I cannot understand the beatu and nuances of your language may I request for a simple translations of the lines of the song you used if possible. Thanks.

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piyasa

@asmani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: ugababe
great job!!

Can't wait for the next part :)

Thank you😳

bt sorry dear its one part os😳

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piyasa

@asmani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: jojo1986
great job

Thanks😃

Originally posted by: amouramalika
wondeful awesome👏

Thanks dear😳

Originally posted by: freya123
nice one

thanks😳

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piyasa

@asmani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Inkpen4877
Very lovely!!

thank u😳

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Zaina

@CrazyForAshish

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

lovely OS..
Like it.
Continue it soon..

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piyasa

@asmani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: cynthiagem
Hi! Asmani. I love how you presented Yash's realizations as he ponders upon his feelings and thoughts from the moment Artii became a member of the Scindia's family. I'm sure these will all happen in perfect time in the course of the story.

Since I cannot understand the beatu and nuances of your language may I request for a simple translations of the lines of the song you used if possible. Thanks.

thanks dear😳 m glad u like it

and i have added the eng tran for the lyrics😳 so now u can read the os again.

i hope this time it will make sense to u😳

let me know how you find it

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piyasa

@asmani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: zan101
lovely OS..
Like it.
Continue it soon..

thank u😛

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Ashwatha

@ashGC_arja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Lovely OS and beautiful lyrics👏

if possible pls do continue😃

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piyasa

@asmani

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: ash_arja
Lovely OS and beautiful lyrics👏
if possible pls do continue😃

thank u😛 it means a lot😳

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cynthiagem

@cynthiagem

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: asmani
thanks dear😳 m glad u like it
and i have added the eng tran for the lyrics😳 so now u can read the os again.

i hope this time it will make sense to u😳

let me know how you find it

Thank you for the translations! Now the story has become more poignant with Yash's thoughts about feeling things with his heart and all for the "first time" with Aatii. Looking forward to your next os!

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