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Maham

@Allbut1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

That was so beautiful! I love reading things in Yash's POV because I feel like we get so little of that in the show and you have done complete justice to his changing feelings and emotions here!

And the song was used flawlessly to incorporate the lyrics in Yash's thoughts! It made for a really nice read and I just hope that it won't be long before Yash starts getting his act together in the show as well!

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piyasa

@asmani

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+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Allbut1
That was so beautiful! I love reading things in Yash's POV because I feel like we get so little of that in the show and you have done complete justice to his changing feelings and emotions here!

And the song was used flawlessly to incorporate the lyrics in Yash's thoughts! It made for a really nice read and I just hope that it won't be long before Yash starts getting his act together in the show as well!

thanks😳 we all hope that we can see Yash realizing his feelings soon in the show😳

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piyasa

@asmani

Dazzler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: cynthiagem

Thank you for the translations! Now the story has become more poignant with Yash's thoughts about feeling things with his heart and all for the "first time" with Aatii. Looking forward to your next os!

thanks😛 theses comments mean a lot!

btw u can find my othe AarYa os in the link provided in my signature

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