Choices....New part: 10' Promise' - Page 5

drat!😡 i just noticed all the grammer mistakes and typos i made... so sorry readers.. i'll make sure i triple spell check next time...

Originally posted by: Silver Screen

lovely 👏
but not long enough 😉 😉 i am fishing for more. its just mindblowing. i wish i could see it on tv, it would have been even more exciting, mindblowing and superb 👏 👏

thank u SS😊

when will u update?? i am waiting 👏

OMG! What is this? Amazing! Cannot believe I missed this FF! Yaar.. 👏

Waiting eagerly for the next part 😃

And your VM's simply excellent..like others I am not against Anas anymore..he's improving and I don't mind seeing him in the VM's..But yes, I still treasure RT-MC jodi as PRC-Sanyo 😃

Wowowo........... match-making between Pundir and Vaishali!! Never thought about it...... but sounds good.

This part was good .......As good as it gets 😉 .... but yaar long nahi tha!! It is really difficult to satisfy the greedy me.

Grammatical errors.......?? Do you think with that lovely flow and fluency we will ever notice it?

Waiting for the next parts 😳

Originally posted by: Power20

OMG! What is this? Amazing! Cannot believe I missed this FF! Yaar.. 👏

Waiting eagerly for the next part 😃

And your VM's simply excellent..like others I am not against Anas anymore..he's improving and I don't mind seeing him in the VM's..But yes, I still treasure RT-MC jodi as PRC-Sanyo 😃

thank u very much... im glad u liked the vm's.. and the story..

Originally posted by: minnie2308

Wowowo........... match-making between Pundir and Vaishali!! Never thought about it...... but sounds good.

This part was good .......As good as it gets 😉 .... but yaar long nahi tha!! It is really difficult to satisfy the greedy me.

Grammatical errors.......?? Do you think with that lovely flow and fluency we will ever notice it?

Waiting for the next parts 😳

haila minnie... that is so sweet of u to say so, just makes me even more detremined to not make the same mistakes..

anehows...i have the nxt vm ready and it will upload to youtube in a lil while and i'll post it here as soon as possible.. the next part will b up tonite or tmrw..

this is for everyone who is kind enough to comment and everyone who has the patience to read ...
lash ,ppiyu..hope this gets ur attention!


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QKOW8sTjlbA[/YOUTUBE]

nicee... pleaseee continue soonnn... its awesome.. =]

Wohoo! New trailer out..now waiting for the story 😊

BTW really loved the new trailer 😃