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Posted: 18 years ago
#11
😆 😆 .....wow....i can imagine pundir and arjun in girls clothes....but prithvi.....hehehehehehehe
keep it up....continue soooooooon 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
hey very creative and nice work keep going dear you deserve an applause from me sweetie 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
great update!! it was funny lol!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Chapter 4
Prank back

Sanyo and Prithvi stay away from each other for a couple of days. But Chander can't take it anymore, so he talks to Prithvi and the rest of his friends. This is the conversation.

Chand: Prithvi, aisia to nahin reh saktain hain. Mujhe pata hai ki hum yahaan kaam se aaein hain, lekin thori si to masti karni chaahiye.

Pri: Tumhara matlab?

Chand: Vo Rajkumari Chamki ki saheli Nandini, uska kuch karna padega. Usne jo kiya vo theek nahin tha. Hamain usko sabak sikhana chaahiye.

Pri: Theek hai Chander, agar tum chaahate ho to kar sakte hain. Leken hum ek yojana ki zaroorat hogi. Tumahare paas hai?

Arjun interrupts

Arjun: Mere paas hai. Unke apne kapdo aur alta aur vaisi cheezon ka bohut shok hai na? Hum unke shringhaar ke cheezon par alta laga deten hain, aur unke kapdo par gobar. Theek hai?

Pri and frnds: Theek hai, to kal raat, jab vo sab so rahain ho to......

Arjun: Lekain uske pehle hume alta laana ho ga. Voh kaise laaenge?

Pri: Vo sab tum mujhpe chod do.

Everyone smirks.
The next day, when everyone is sleeping.

Pri: Alta hai?
Frnds: Haan, ab jaldi chalo.

Prithvi and friends set to work. When they finish...

Pri: Ab to bus kal subah ka intezaar hai. Dekhte hain ki ye log kya kartain hain.

Next morning Sanyo and everyone else gets up and looks at the state of their clothes. Sanyogita knows at once who it is and decides to give him a piece of her mind. But first all of the girls in Sanyogita's tambu wash a set of clothes with the jewellery and other stuff. It takes them ages, and Sanyogita's getting impatient, so she goes outside and starts fighting with Prithvi.

Sanyo: Tumhari itni himmat kit um hamare tambu me aae

Pri: To us din tumne kya kiya tha? Jab tumne me kapde badle? Usika badla lene ke liye me tumhaare tambu me aaya. Varna mujhe bhi tumha...

Sanyogita interrupts Prithvi.

Sanyo: Bohot hua, pehle churmure, ab yeh!! Tumhe to hum dekh lainge.

Pri: Kya kar logi tum, mujhe peeto gi, dekhain to, tumme kitne dum hai. Ya phir Rajkumari Chamki ke pitaji ko bulaaogi. Voh tumahare liye kyon aaegain?

Sanyo: Tum apne aap ko bohat bada samajhte ho. Hum tumhe sabak sikhayenge, aisa sabak, jo tumhe zindagi bhar yaad hoga. Hmph

Sanyogita goes to her tambu and Prithvi stares after her.

Prithvi: Jungli billi.
Sanyogita, on the other side

Sanyo: Bigda rahees.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#15
great ff 👏 👏 👏 just write in the topic u hve edited it 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#16
oh funny..this spoilt brat wild cat theroy always work...kindblowing... 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17
great awesome gud job 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#18
omg....continue..... cant w8 till the next partssss..
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Posted: 18 years ago
#19
its great, can't wait to read the next part.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
Okay, I'm back wid another chapter. Srry, I'm tkaing a lot of time.

Chapter 5
Friendship, Forever???
Prithvi and Sanyogita fight at every oppurtunity they get and they've reached the 3rd stage of the yaatra. Sanyo is thinking what to do with this Prithvi on a cliff near the yaatris camping site

She's moving about near the cliff and Prithvi is staring at her, as if waiting for hewPrithvi is near the cliff, and Sanyo is moving around carelessly

Sanyo: Is Prithvi ka hum kya karain.

Suddenly she tripos herself and is hanging from the cliff

Sanyo: Koi mujhe bachaao, meri madad karo!!! Hey bhagwan, itni choti umar main maut.....

She shouts for help and Prithvi and a villian come running in the direstion of the cliff. The villian dude reaches first.

Villian: Oh, Nandini, mene tumhe pehle bhi maarne ki koshish ki thi. Shukriya bhagwan.

He tramples Sanyo's foot and she's just about to let go when Prithvi comes and lifts the villians foot.

Prithvi: Isne tumhaara kya bigada hai? Agar tumhe isse koi dushmani hai, to tum mujhse lado.

Villian: Teekh hai, dekh lete hain.

Villian dude and Prithvi fight and Prithvi wins. He pulls up Sanyo.

Sanyo: Shukriya, yeh aaisaan hum kabhi naheen bhulainge.

Prithvi: Shukriya kis baat ka? Yeh to mera farz tha.

Sanyo: Aisi baat hai to mera bhi faarz hai ki hum tumse dosti karien...dost?

Prithvi: Dost.

Prithvi and Sanyo head back to the camping place laughing and chatting, mainly acting like friends.Prithvi and Sanyo's friends are very surprised at this. So Prithvi's friends call Prithvi and Sanyo's friends call her.

P's friends: Yeh tum kisse baat kar rahain ho? Yeh to humaari.....

Prithvi: Ab nahi, ab hum dost hain. Agar tum isse inkaar karte ho, to teekh hai, lekin me iska dost rohoonga.

Prithvi's friends look surprised. Meanwhile, Sanyo's friends.

Sanyo's friends: Tum is bigde rahees se kyon dosti ki?

Sanyo: Kyonki isne humaari jaan bachai. Tum jo chahti ho keh sakti ho, lekin humaara farz hai ki hum iske dost rahain.

Prithvi and Sanyo look at each other and smile

So guys, how's it??? Please reply.

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