Fan fic, updated...please see.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Okay guys, so, I worked on the fan fic, n I'm gonna add more to it as soon as I get our imagination gears on. So here it is. Hope u like it😃

Chapter 1

The first meeting

This fan fic starts after Sanyogita get's her churmure she and Prithvi bang into each other. Prithvi pulls her up.

Sanyogita: Tumne mere churmure giraye, ab to tumhe mujhe chumure dene honge, jaayo, mera muh kyon dekh rahe ho, jaayo aur mere liye churmure laayo.

Prithvi: Dekhiye, mujhe maaf....

Sanyogita interrupts Prithvi

Sanyogita: Mujhe maafi nahin chahiye, mujhe churmure chahiye.

Prithvi is about to say something when his friends appear.

Prithvi's friends: Arre Surya, tum yaahan ho, aur hum tuhme kahaan kahaan nahi dhunde.

Prithvi: Chalo, mujhe bhi bewakuf ladkiyon se baaten karne kaa koi shok nahin he.

He goes away and Chamki enters the scene. She talks to Sanyogita and when they finish talking Sanyogita's smirking.

Chapter 2

The first prank

This "scene" is happening when it's almost time to go to bed for all the yaatris. Sanyogita's up to something. Read more if you want to know.

Sanyo: Chamki, tumne humara shrighaar theekh se rakha hai naa?

Chamki: Haan Sanyogita, aisi jaga may, jahaan koi dundh naa pae

Sanyo: Smiling, ab Surya ka kya hoga!

Now everyone is sleeping, and Sanyogita and Chamki are in Surya's tent.

Sanyo: Jaldi karo Chamki, agar ye log jag gaye to?


Chamki: Sanyogita, mera kaam khatam ho gaya.

Sanyo: Chalo, ab to bus subhe ka intezaar hai.

Sanyo: (Laughing) ab to bahot maza ayega

ok, so that's it, hope u like it. Really, if I made any mistakes, or if u don't like it, go ahead and be beastly and tell me mean things bout my fan fic. n lastly, njoy

Edited by rajatnmughda4ev - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago
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no one likes it?? or is it that they can't be bothered to reply??
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow its great keep it up! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey are you still writing this fanfic?? plz say yes lol I'd love for you to continue cuz so far this fanfic is amazing!! :D
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gosh, nice replies, ya, I'm gonna post the part pretty soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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its fantastic 😊 plz add sum more
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Posted: 18 years ago
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its rely kool, carry on 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Okay, so, as I said, I've got the third chapter, if u wanna read it, then see.

Chapter 3
Realisation

Okay, so in the morning (the next day), Prithvi and his friends get up quickly and go outside without changing. They go to the most crowded part of the resting place and................

Sanyo: Chamki, vo dekho, vo yahaan aa rahain he. Chalo, dekhte hain ki humne teekh se kaam kiya hai ki nahi.

Chamki: Jaldi chalo.

Everyone's looking at Prithvi and his friends and trying really hard not to laugh.

Prithvi: Sab log hume kyon dekh rahen hain. He turns around and sees his friends and all of his friends burst out laughing.

Friend: Surya, tumne ladkiyon ke kapde kyon pehne hain?

Prithvi: Agar ye savaal me tumse poochon to?

Friend: Tumhara matlab ki......
Sanyo and Chamki: (laughing) yeh ladke to itne paagal hain ki ladkiyon ke kapde pehene lagen hai.

Prithvi: Nandani, tum to chup raho...

Sanyo interrupts Prithvi

Sanyo Hum par vishvaas nahi ho raha hai to khud aayine me jaa ke dekh lo!

Prithvi: Haan, lekin agar tum hamen tang ki to..

Sanyo: Kya tum yahaan kadhe hokar apne aap ko dekhoge? Jaayo, tumhe khud pata chal jaayega.

Prithvi and his friends go back to their tent and look at themselves in the mirror, they see that they are dressed like girls and music's playing from behind (the kind of tune that gets played when someone gets fooled)
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Posted: 18 years ago
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VERY good! 😆 ..........KEEP POSTING MORE! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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its gr8 exept the mughda part

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