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Posted: 16 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: sweety4jaan

Part 2


prithvi starts his car and starts miving but his thoughts werent! he was still thinking about the same girl! he felt as if she is THE most beautiful girl in this whole world! the innocence on her face was adorable!

here at the signal: that girl is still dancing in the rain and enjoynig herself without caring about anything or anyone!
prithvi starts singing song and camera is on that girl!

itna haseen chehra kitni pyari aankhen (we see glance of her face, and slowly moves to her eyes)
kitni pyari aankhen hai aankhon se chhalakta pyar (we see unique magic in her eyes)
kudrat ne banaya hoga phursat se tujhe mere yaar -

(teri nazar jhuke toh shaam dhalen (camera still at her eyes, she is looking down the earth)
jo uthe nazar toh subaha chalen) - (she is looking up the sky)
tu hase toh kaliyan khil jaaye (she laughs)
tujhe dekh ke hoor bhi sharmaye (she blushes)
teri bikhri bikhri zulfen teri mehaki mehaki saansen ( camera on moves to her black long hair)
teri koyal jaisi boli teri meethi meethi baaten ( she is talking to her friend)
jee chahe mera main yu hi tera karta rahu deedar (prithvi goes in flashback and imagine himself with er)
kudrat ne banaya hoga phursat se tujhe mere yaar (dreaming about both danicng in the rain)
kitna haseen chehra kitni pyari aankhen

(duniya mein haseen aur bhi hain (prithvi says to himself)
hoga na koi tere jaisa haseen) ( prithvi mesmersied by her beauty)
rangeen jawan madhosh badan (he sees her everywhere)
tu husno shabab ka hain gulshan (keep on dreaimng)
tere ang se khusbu barse pariyon si sundar kaya
jo kutch socha tha maine woh sab kutch tujhmein paya
teri ek adaa pe main sadke jaaun sau baar
kudrat ne banaya hoga phursat se tujhe mere yaar - 2
kitna haseen chehra kitni pyari aankhen
kitni pyari aankhen hai aankhon se chhalakta pyar
kudrat ne banaya hoga phursat se tujhe mere yaar - 2


finnaly we see her face! she is sanyogita! (camera stills on her)
(sanyogita is an only daughter on jaichand and naintara singh! her parents lives in kanauj! she came to ajmer for her further studies! she lives with her best friend Vaishali!)

suddenly, she looks at her wathc and starts panicking!

sanyo: OMG! vaishali chalo ab! aaj pehla din hai college! abhi to h ghar bhi jana hai and tayaar bhi hona hai by god! tum bhi na vaishali hamesha der karti ho!
vaishali: accha mein ne der karavayi! baarish mein tum bheeg rahi thi ya mein!
sanyo: uff oh! ab chale varna late ho jayenge!

they both hires an auto and heads off to home!

in college:
prithvi parks his car and starts moving towards the main gate! he is wearing black jeans with white shirt! he is looking damn hot! all the eyes stucks on him as he enters! he is still thinking about his girl! he is lost in his own world and suddenly someone calls him from the back!
he ignores it, but someone calls him again and again! he is getting really irritated! he turns around and see his there was a guy in jeans and blue t shirt! he is arjun! prithvi's friend!

prithvi: are arjun tum? kaisa hai yaar?
arjun: mein toh theek hoon, par mujhe lagta hai ki tu theek nahin hai? teri tabiyat toh theek hai na? kabse aawaz laga raha hoon, dhyan kahan hai tumhara(making angry face)? kisike khyalo mein khoye howe ho? meri honewali bhabhi ke? (teasing him)
prithvi: kya arjun tum bhi. kuch bhi bolte ho! waise tum akele? baki sab kaha hai?
arjun: baki sab canteen hai tumhara wait kar rahe hai.
prithvi: mera wait
arjun: haan woh, tum sab ke liye surpirce hai,
prithvi: surprise? kaisa surprise?
arjun: surprise means surprise. ab chalo.
prithvi: haan chalo!

they both make their ways to canteen!

sanyo's place:
vaishali and sanyo getting ready! sanyo looks a bit nervous as its her first day to college.
sanyo: vaishali ab chale, im really nervous by god. god plz help me(folding her hand and pray)!
vaishali:dnt worry yaar. sab kuch theelk hoga.
sanyo: hopefully!
they both heads off to college!

in canteen:

everyone is waiting for prithvi to arrive. finally he arrives! everyone is eagerly waiting to know the surprise!
camera snaps samar, pundir, chand, veer, dharam and sanjam! (camera then moves to one beutiful young lady in red, who is walking towards their table)
prithvi: (with shocking look) are Maya (arjun's GF) tum yahan canteen mein? woh bhi 8 wonders ke saath!
sanjam adds to it!
sanjam: ha prithvi, lagta hai aaj hamari kismat hum par kuch jyada hi mehrbaan ho rahi hai ( in a flirting tone)
maya: sanjam!!!!!!! tum ruko! ab tumhari kismat bahut buri hone wali hai! (runs after him)
prithvi: sanjam, maya stop it guyz. ab main poin par aao. surprise kya hai?
arjun: (in a funny tone) suspence music plz (suspence music in background)
chand: stop it now (irritated tone) ab bata bhi de.
arjun: theek hai! toh guyz, mein aur maya are getting engage next month!
everyone applause for them and wishes them good wishes!

then prithvi: (teasing maya and arjun) maya tumhari tabiyat toh theek hain na?
maya: haan kyon?
prithvi: tum ARJUN se engagement ki baat kar rahi hoon! r u really sure ki tum iske yaani mere dost arjun ke saath apni puri life spend karna chahti hoon! i mean tumhe aur koi nahin mila?
maya: PRITHVI?????????????


thats it guyz for today!
hope u like!

plz comment/critisize




love Zoah



Thanks for the update Zoah wow..lovely dear..keep it up..Well I feel u write quiet well sweetie!⭐️
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Posted: 16 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: sweety4jaan

part 3 (sorry for any mistakes)


Prthvi: are Maya mein to mazak kar raha tha! But seriously Waise tum bahut lucky ho ki tumhe arjun jaisa jeevan saathi mila hai! woh tumhe bahut khush rakhenga (he says in a serious tone looking at arjun)!
MayaI know prithvi. Mein bhi bahut khush hoon

The atmosphere became a bit emotional and suddenly then samar tries to lighten up the atmosphere.
He says: mahol kuch jyada hi emotional ho gaya nahi? (looking at prithvi)

Everyone giggles
Veer: waise arjun bhaiya (he calls arjun bhaiya as he is youngest in thr circle) engagement ke liye kaunsi date fix ki hai? (he asks with smile)
Arjun: haan woh agle month ki 31st koMa aur pa ne decide ki hai (he calls prithvis parents ma aur paa)
Dharam:(teasing arjun) kuch jyada long time nahin hai (winking at all the wonders)?
All the wonders: haan very long time!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Arjun gives SHUT UP look to them and everyone stays quiet!

Here:
sanyo reaches college!sanyo comes out the auto and looks at the college building!

Sanyo: kitna bada college hai by god!Maza aa jayega yaar(looking at college with twinkle magic in her eyes)!

Vaishali: haan sanyo, ye Ajmer ka sabse bada and best college hai!

Sanyo: waise mein bhi best hi hoon!

Vaishali:haan haan, answer copy karne se to koi bhi best ho sakta hai na? (looks at sanyo with angry look)

Sanyo: haan bas ab, gussa mat kar! Ab chale

Vaishali: please do the honour (with irritated look on her face)

They both starts walking towards the main gate of the collegeThen suddenly they stopped by a guy

He is wearing jeans and a blue t shirt with stone bracelet in his hands!He has black sunglasses on he is surrounded by girls all around! he is vikram Singhaniya aka Vicky! He is the son of college principal

he gives damn attitude to sanyo and says:

vicky: hey beautiful, college mein nayi ho?
Sanyo: haan. So what?
vicky: good, lagta bhi hai! Waise kaun se village se aayi ho? (showing attitude)
Sanyo did not pay attention to it and start moving with vaishali

vicky: are dekho yaar! Madam ko gussa aa gaya! (And he tries touching her hand)

Sanyo slaps him tightly and says dnt u dare try touching me next time otherwise tumhare liye accha nahin hoga!

vicky: (pissed off and screams at sanyo) hey girl, wt the f* do u think urself? And starts bullying her!

He and his so called girlfriends starts abusing sanyo and vaishali! They are surrounded by girls and Vicky! Vicky to takes off sanyos dupatta! Sanyo slaps him tightly again!

Sanyo starts crying! She shouts for help and nobody there comes to her rescue! As they all knew what kind of man Vicky is!


Here in the canteen everyone was having fun and suddenly then they hears someone screaming and shouting for help!

They all come out and what they saw was horrible! Two of the girls were being abused and were seeking for help!Sanyo ans vaishali were exteremely horrified!

8 wonders went out for their rescue! Prithvi was shocked to see the girl same girl being abused by college students!

Samar: Vicky just stop it!

Vicky: samar, its non of ur business, just keep out of it!

Prithvi:Vicky!!!!!!!!!!!Leave them alone!Varna tumhare liye theek nahin hoga!

Vicky: kya kar lega tu? Principal se meri complain karega? Ja ja kar le complain!
Prithvi: (he screams) I said leave them alone!

Vicky leaves sanyo and vaishali and comes to prithvi!

Vicky: prithvi, agar tu college ka security head nahin hota to tera woh haal karta mein tu zindagi bhar yaad rakhta mujhe!

Prithvi: out now(with angry face)

Prithvi picks up the dupatta from the floor and starts moving towards sanyo and vaishali! his friends follows him behind!

Prithvi asks Aap log theek hai? Aapko kahin chot to nahin lagi?

Vaishali(sobs) haanHum theek hai! thank u very very much for helping us out! (then looks at sanyo, who is horrified by this incident and is unable to speak)
Vaishali: sanyo sanyo, tum theek ho?
Sanyo does not reply!Vaishali asks again and but again no reply!

Then sanyo looks at prithvi and his friends! Prithvi is standing next to her and staring at her and looking very tensed! He is feeling sooooooooooooooo angry on Vicky! But controls his anger and asks
sanyo: r u ok?

Sanyo looks at him and was about to say something , and tabhi she faints and prithvi catches her in his arms



Thats it guyz for todayHope u enjoy!
i know its not good as the previous but tried my best!

Plz do press like button if u like myupdate(only if u like it)



love Zoah



Thanks for the update zoah..U are doing a great job honey..I just loved the update!⭐️
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Posted: 16 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: anasrashid_fan

nice update zoah👏........oh god that vicky is too much😡😡.........itna attitiude😡.........just loved the way prithvi rescued the gals👏👏.........omg i can just imagine the whole scene infront of ma eyes😳.........prithvi ka gussa aur uska chillana😳😳hayeee.........tooooooo gud👏👏......will wait 4 ur next part dear.



thanks yaar! i m so glad that u all liking my ff!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: meghaparti

<br><br>Thanks for the update Zoah wow..lovely dear..keep it up..Well I feel u write quiet well sweetie!⭐️



thanks di! i just trying my best to write but i know i can never write like u all do!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: meghaparti

<br><br><font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Thanks for the update zoah..U are doing a great job honey..I just loved the update!⭐️</font>



thanks di for appreciating my work!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: sweety4jaan



thanks yaar! i m so glad that u all liking my ff!

welcome jaan😳.......agar itna accha likhoge toh kyun pasand nahi aayega sabko........aur ha send me a pm when u update next part😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: anasrashid_fan


welcome jaan😳.......agar itna accha likhoge toh kyun pasand nahi aayega sabko........aur ha send me a pm when u update next part😳



ok kalyani dear! i will!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#88
wow zoah
its awesome
its fabulous
please continue
u okay???? so sweet of prc and sanyo fainting mindblowing
awesome
zoah...awesome...huni
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Posted: 16 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: letsrockshona

wow zoah<br>its awesome<br>its fabulous<br>please continue<br>u okay???? so sweet of prc and sanyo fainting mindblowing<br>awesome<br>zoah...awesome...huni<br>



thanks huni! im so glad that u all are liking my ff! i will try and post the next updat soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#90
wow zoah di<br>its awesome<br>its fabulous👏

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