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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow very ncie part maria di👏👏,..........really liked the way all frds were teasing prc😆😆.........n sanyo's naughtyness was mashaallah👏😆😆..........nice hide n seek😉😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow very ncie part maria di👏👏,..........really liked the way all frds were teasing prc😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: maria_awan

hi everyone thanks 4 liking part 1 here is the second part and one thing before wirting it if any one doesnot like any part or see any mistake they can correct me i mean can give me advice😊

PART 2
they all went to sleep last night , next morning a boy covering his chest witha pink cloth looking like a flower who is just complete his time to come into this beautifull world to give his fragance (a boy who is fallen in love but denying the truth) is doing a surya namaskar and a small girl is looking him from a distance , when the boy complete his surya namahkar and turn he saw a beautiful girl wearing langa of pink colour with a work of silver colur at it looking like an angel came straight away from heaven to him as a gift oh his life , he comes near that girl and hugs her and says "meri piyari baihan yahan kiya karahi hai "
"ap ko daik rahay thay aur ap ka namashkar kay katam honay ka intazar kyun kay humko ap se bohat si batein karni haina "says pritha
"acha hamari guriya ko bohat si batein karni thi hum se "says prithvi
"ji" says pritha
"par kiya baatein karna hai itni subha "says prithvi
aj pita ji ka janam din hai ap unko kiya toofa do gay aur mein kiya dun unko"says pritha
" tum aur toofa .....tum to khud hamari zindagi ka sab se bara toofa ho !says prithvi
"bhaiya" says pritha with a smile
prithvi also smile in return , prithvi friends comes there and said to them " andar chalo ab sab hamara intazar karahy hain nasaty par"said arjun
they all came into mehal from the garden and sees the prepartion 4 the day every thing is looking perfect
maharaj someshwar and maharni is waiting 4 them and on seeing them coming to the dinning table maharaj says to maharani "hamara beta ab bara ho gay hai na ", maharani says "ji ho to gaya hai aur samaj dar to pehlay si hi tha apne kartavaiy ko lay kar bilkul pa k tarha hai "
maharaj hugs their kids and and all of them wish maharaj on his birthday and prays 4 thier long life and sits to do the breakfast
here in kannoj in sanyogita room she is sleeping , around her bed there are flowers and diyay which r making her room more beautifull and she is looking a moon who is gathers by stars in between those flowers, sanyogita gets up in the morning witha beautiful smile in her face bc of the thought that she is going to meet finally prithvi today and going to fulfill the promise that she has done to him in yatra about telling him about her self , she cames out of the bed and goes in front of the mirror had a look at her self and smiles
somebody came at the door and knocked , sanyogita gaves the permission to come in and chamki and vaishali comes in and says to her" aj to hamari dost aur kannoji ki rajkumari bohat hi sundar lag rahi hain "
"who to hai " sanyogita said smilingly
"aur uski wajah to hum janaty hain " just having a teasing look in their eyes
"acha jungilli billi bigray rahis ki ab ap tayar ho jayin" says vaishali
"humko aj thori dair tak nikalna hai "says chamki
"mujay tum dono ne phlay kyun nahi jagaya kam chor ho rahi ho tum " sanyogita says to them
they r smiling at her bc she said herself not to wake her early in the morning last night as she was feeling very tired
sanyogita mom cames in and says "ja gayi meri nat gat rajkumari "
"ji maa" and hugs her mother
"acha ab pyar bohat hogaya mujse aur jaldi se tayar ho jayo humko ajmer kay liayay nikalna hai thori dair tak "says sanyogita mom and leaves the room and sanyogita starts to do the prepartion for leaving 4 ajmer and have a bath and comes to the room where chamki and vaishali r taking her clothes from cupboard
she is deciding which clothes she is going to wear today but she is not able to decide and she remember about the first time they meet and laugh and says "aj hum tum to choka dain gay bigray rahis"forgetting she is not alone in her room and seeing this vaishli and chamki laughed as well ,sanyogita wears her favourite dress and the wears the blue one and came out and says good morning to her dad
"aj to hamari guriya bohat hi sundar lag rahi hai "says maharaj jaichand to sanyogita ,she moves there to kitchen to make rotis for prithvi as they have a argument bc of her rotis in yatra
sainapati came in and says "maharaj ap sab ki savari tayar hai ajmer kay liayay humko abhi nikalna hai warna maharaj kay janam din kay liay dair ho jay gi "
"ok, hum atay hain abhi"says maharaj jaichand
and they all leave to ajmer 4 the birthday of prithvi father
prithvi is getting ready in his room 4 the function when her mother came in and he sits near to his mother and say"maa aj kaun kaun ay ga pita ji kay janam din par "
"bohat log kannoj se maharaj jaichand aur unka puar parrivar "says maharani
"mein to bachpan mein mila tha un sab se , unki beti sanyogita se ap to un se pehlay bhi milay ho ga na mein to gurukul mein tha pita ji kay har janam din par"says prithvi to her mom
"janaty hai tum yahan nahi thay aonay piat kay jnam din par par koi baat nahi ab to agay ho na , mahraj jaichand kay sath unki baithi , patni aur maa bhi ayin gay tumaray pita ko shubh kamnayin dainay "says maharani
"acha maa sanyogita kay baary mein bato na kitni choti thi jab usse mili tha "say prithvi
" sanyogita chand ka who tukra hai jisay panay kay liay asman sab kuch har jana chaiay ga , sanyogita who phool hai jisi khusbhu se har koi mehakna chay ga ,who sawan ki pehli bhud ki tarha hai, jo bilkul sachi hai jaisay andar se hai waisi hi bahar se bhi ,kehnay ko bachpan hai thori shaitan hai par waqt anay par bohat samjdar bhi hai jo apno se pehlay dusron ka sochti hia , uski khubsurti ka charcha door dor tak hai uski sadgi aur khubsurti aur uski samajdari ka koi jawab nahi hai is jahan mein kisi se bhi"says maharani
"sach mein who aisi hai phir to mein bhi usse milna chayun ga " says prithvi
and get exiciting to meet her although she had meet her in her childhood once but cannoit control the exitcement
"acha ab tum humo yeh batao yeh nandini kaun hai jis ki batein kartay ho tum aj kal aur jsi ki kahaniyan sunaty ho pritha ko"says maharani to prithvi
"who maa mein to ........get quiet 4 a min and start speaking again ,"maa mein usse yarta mein mila tha bohat sidhi hai bilkul bachon jaisi uski mada se hi hum kamiyab ho pay thay ,pata hai who ik rajkumari hai aur mein yeh nahi jan paya who kahan ki hai rajkumari usse pehlay hi who cahli gayi thi bas itni hi maa janta hoon us kay bary mein"says to maharani, prithvi never lies to her mom and always tell het everything
"hmmmm........................us nandini ne bohat gehra assar chora hai hmary baity par" says witha smile to him and he smiles as well after hearingthis comment
maharaj came in with prithvi grandfather and he takes his grandfather blessing , his grandfather anangpal says to maharaj someshwar "kannoj se koi ay ga is bar " maharaj says "ji haan baba sa who sab ayin gay pechli bar jaichand nahi apaya thay par maharani naintara aur sanyogita ay thay aur is bar to who ayin gay "maharaj anagpal get happy to know that they all r coming "and they both leaves the room
note: this is all 4 this time next part will be here soon😊until then enjoy and do post ur reply and suggestion if u want to give i will loved it 😊



Wow lovely dear...thanks for the awesome update!⭐️
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: maria_awan

Hi girls thanks 4 ur support here is the new part of my story

PART 3
jaichand and their family has left from kannoj to each ajmer , here in ajmer thet prepartion is going as they all planned and made look like a heaven on earth , and they r waiting 4 them to arrive , prithvi is now ready sitting with his friends
"aj kiya toofa do gay tum maharaj ko "says arjun
"unko hum kiya dai unkay pass sab to hai " says prithvi with a deep thought
"par aj kay din kuch khas hona chiayay na "says chand
"samaj nahi arah kiya sun unko jo unko acha lagay"says prithvi
"koi hatiyar jin ki unko zarurat par jay "says pundir
"aj unka janam din hai who yudh par nah jaaray hain jo hatiyar do gay tumko pundir"says arjun
"to phir kiya do gay "says chand
"nai ap apni zimadari unkay prathi nibayin yehi unka toofa hoga jo who ap se chatay hain"says prithvi mom coming into his room
"tik hai maa apni jan day kar bhi hum yeh farz nibyain gay "says prithvi and his friends
a dassi came in and tell maharani that j aichandbout to come
and she leaves 4 the prepartion of their savagat
finally after few min they arrives at the door of the mehel ,prithvi in his room suddenly feel some thing in him self that nandini is near him and he went to the window of the room and looks out side , all friends ask him "kiya hua tumko yeh achanak bahir kiya daik rahay ho " prithvi says"hum lagay kay who,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,he gets quiet "
"oh to tumko laag kay nandini hai " arjun start pulling his leg
"haan pata nahi kyun achanak hum ko aisa laga" says prithvi
"who aj kal har waqt tumko ussi ko hi to sochaty ho na isliyay"says pundir with a smile
"tum sab bhi na kahin bhi shuro ho jatay ho "says prithvi
"maar khayo kay mujse tum sab"says prithvi with a little worried look on his face
"haay...........tumaray liayay jaan bhi hazar kar daitay par abhi humein janam din ka maza laina hai aur bohat sa khana khana haina "says arjun as he always can do anything 4 food
everybody laughed at this answer and at the door of the mehal jaichand arrives with his family and maharaj someshwar ,maharani kamlavati and maharaj anangpal came to welcome them in their life big day , maharani kamlavati does the arti of everyone and ask them to come in , after coming everybody hugs each other ,maharani kamlavati ask "hamari gungun kahan hai "to maharani naintara
"who bas beechay hi thi hamaray palki se nikal thi abhi to "says maharani nainatara
"arre tp phir hai nat gat aur samajdar gungun"says maharaj someshwar
"hum yahan hai baba sa "says sanyogita coming into the mehel with a gift in his hand
"kahan thi ap hum sab ap ko dun rahay thay " says maharaj and maharani of ajmer
sanyogita comes near them and hug them turn by turn and says"hum pane baba sa kay liayay ik toofa layin hai apne haton se banaya hua"
"maharaj becomes too happy and says"sachi apnon hatton se banaya hai hamara gungun ne par kyun , itni mehnat ki ap ne ap ayi hamaray liay yehi hi to toofa hai na sab se bara , agar pa takk jati to "
"nahi baba sa ap kay liay to hum kuch bhi karsakatay haina to yeh kam to kuch bhi nai tha "says sanyogita witha small and beautiful smile
"kiya hai jo hamari gungun layi hai hamaray liay " says maharaj someshwar
"ik shall jis par hum ne apney hath se kam kiya hai pata hai ap ko baba sa is ko banay mein humko pura ik hafta laga tha "says sanyogit excitely
"bohat khub baita hum ap ka yeh toofa apni jan se bhi samabal kar rakain gay "says maharaj
"ab toofa choriya ap gungun yahan ayin hamaray pass hum ap ko daikna chaty hain kab se nahi daika "says maharani kamlavati to her
she goes near her and maharani hugs and she had tears in her eyes , seeingthsi sanyogita ask her"kiay hua bari maa ap ki ankon mein ansun kyun hai "
"ap ko daik kar hamari gungun kitni bari ho gayi hai akri dafa hum delhi mein milay tahy pooja par aur ab mil rahy hian ,kitni baar i ho gayi hain ap aur khubsurat bhi "says maharani to her , she get shy , ,maharaj anangpal say "chalo ab andhar bhi sarri batein yahin karni hai gungun se"and they came in , after sitting in the hall where the function is about to start sanyogita ask maharani "bari maa where is prithvi and pritha " cannot control his excitment to meet prithvi
"who apni kamron mein bas aty hi ho gain tum chali jayo unse milay " says maharani kamlavati to her and she left from there to meet him but in the way her feet get slip and she falls down , arjun coming out of prithvi room to see who has arrived and sees that nandini is on the floor at a quiet distance from her and he is shocked and happy to see this , he just cannot belive her eyes and goes back in to the room and says "prithvi who bahir .........................."
all of them get worried"kiya hua bahir " they says to him
"who humne nandini ko daika who gir gayi thi baihir kuch faislay par thi humse ussne humko nahi daika aur phir tumko batany jaldi se andar aya hain jaldi chalo bahir"says arjun , all of them get shocked and happy that how can she be here bc she didnot know their true indentities ,they all went outside and there is nothing
arjun gets confusen prithvi ask him"where is nandini"
"who abhi to yahin thi pata nahi kahan gayi sach mein who yahan thi "says with a weird look
"tumko bhook kuch ziyad hi lagi hai warna nandini yahan kahan se ayay gi"says pundir witha little anger ,
"bilawaja hamari race lag vadi tumney"says chand
arjun is thinking that how can he be wrong in reconizing her and says "yahan sainik kharay hain inse puchaty hain who yahin kahin hogi"says arjun
they went to a sainik standing near them and ask "kiya yahan tumne kisi larki ko daika girtay huay" ,the sainik says "nahi kuvar ji yahan to koiu nahi "
they all turn to arjun and chand says " arjun tumara baram ho ga "
arjun says with a very confuse look "shayd" they all went down to meet the guests
prithvi comes and meet maharaj jaichand and maharaj hugs him and says "kitni bara ho gay hai hamara shota sa rajkumar"
prithvi smiles in return and then he comes to maharani naintara and bent down to touch her feet and take the blessings but she stop him and says "hamara baita to hamaray galay lagay ga and he hugs and says choti maa kaisi hain ap"
she says "hum tik hian tum kaisay ho aur yeh sab tumaray dost haina anr yeh darmiyan mein chand hai jo bcahpan mein tumaray saththa "
prithvi says "ap ko abhi tak yaad hai "
"haan kyun kay tum dono hi hamein hamesha khush kartay tahy na " says to them and they all come near maharani and take her blessing
"choti maa sanyogita nahi ayi ap kay sath "says prithvi
"ayi hai yahin hai mehal mein pritha kay kamray mein ho gi"says maharaani
"hum usse mil kar atay hain"and he went to pritha room but no one is there
coming out of their room he saw nandini talking to lady in corridor and he went there running and she is not there , but pritha is talking to that lady and after seeing him running she ask her "bhaya kiay hua ap bag kyun rahay hain " he says "yahan tum thi bahi is aurat se baat karahi thi "
"ji bhaya "says pritha unable to control her smile but does it with great diffculty
"acha hamara baram ho ga "says to himself
"kiya kaha bhaya" says pritha
"kuch nahi hum abhi atay hain "say to pritha and left
pritha laughed 4 5 min and say"diij ab ap bahir ajayo bhaya chalay gay hain"
"oh shukar hai chalay gaya gun tumara bhai "says to pritha with a smile and teasing look on her face
"ap yatra mein bhaya se mili thi aut ap dono se ik dusray ko khub tang kiya par abhi ap kyun nahi mili unse diij"says pritha
"kyun kay hum tumarary bhay ko tnag karna chatay hain" says sanyogita
"shart laga lain bhaya nahi samajin gay kay ap yaahan ho who samajin gay ap unk baram ho"says pritha
"yeh hi to mein chati hoon gun"says sanyogita
"milan lain na bhaya se aur un sab se bhi warna who pagal ho jayin gay "says pritha
"aj milan gay tumaray bhayon se hum gun par thoary se mazak kay baad"says sanyogita
and they both come down into the mehal looking around them ,saving her self from bigary rahis ki toli se
prithvi comes to choti maa and says "humko sanyogita nahi mili mehal mein"
"par who to yahi hain "says maharani naintara
"acha to hum usko dunaty hain" says prithvi and goes to his friends , he was looking tense ,everyone ask him "kiya hau "
"mujay laga kay meinay nandini ko daiak tha abhi upar par jab hum wahaan gay to pritha thi "says prithvi
"arjun kam tha yaar jo tumko bhi baram honay shuroo ho gay hain agar who wahan hoti to pritha na daikti usse"says pundir
"haan yeh bhi sayi hai chalo jany do is baat ko "says prithvi
sanyogita came into the same hall standing at a distance from them and in between she made some dasiyan to satnd so they cannot see them
after a few mintues prithvi father call them and they went to him and say"kiya hua maharaj"
"kiay tum sab sanyogita se milay ho "says maharaj someshwar
"nahi pita ji abhi tak nahi "says prithvi
"acha hum milvatay hain tum sab ko usse"and give a voice to pritha and sanyogita who is standing at other corner
sanyogita turns and prithvi and all of them are shocked (thier mouth get open in shock)and sanyogita and pritha started walking toward them
maharaj say "yeh hai hamari gungun mera matalab hai kannoj ki rajkumari sanyogita " and leaves them alone 4 talking
all of them are looking at each other thinking it is their thought
"kiya hua bigray rahis aur uski toli ko"says sanyogita
they all came back to their senses that it is not their thought
NOTE: this is all 4 this time next part will here on wednesday
enjoyt it and do write ur views and comments , now sanyogita will meet prithvi in next part😃zara sabar rakiya ga friends😉



Thanks for the lovely update dear..mazaa aa gaya padhkar..no probs we will wait for the next part for PRC & Sanyo to meet sweetie!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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maria
it was awesome
sounded fab
thanks f0or a gloriuos update...ab aur intezaar nahi hotha
please update
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: letsrockshona

maria...maria....maria....maria....maria......maria...maria....maria....maria....maria.....maria...maria....maria....maria....maria.......

yah dear i am here thanks 4 calling me 😊😊 and 4 ur love and aprrecation
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: maria_awan

thankyou 4 ur support😊

Welcome dear.
Post next part dear.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Maria u didn't reply to my comments dear..I guess u missed it sweetie!😳😃

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: meghaparti

Hey Maria u didn't reply to my comments dear..I guess u missed it sweetie!😳😃

hi megha sorry 4 not replying to u comments i was not here last days thanks dear to u and everyone ⭐️ . its really feel great when u all says that u like it 😉, its me more courage to write it 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey maria! im really sorry to comment soooooooooooo late! i was busy! i have just read ur ff! its awesome! loved it! plz update soon!
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