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Posted: 16 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: maria_awan

thanks guys 4 liking the idea of my story ,here is the starting Part 1

After koteshwar yatra prithvi and sanyogita are lost in each others thought and as usual their friends tease them and they simply said no about thoughts but their friends new what is going into heart bc the smile in their eyes show every thing.
one day sanyogita was very sad bc he wanna meet prithvi but her father doesnot let her go any where without him and she is angry about it ,seeing her angryand sad mood her friend chamki told her that prithvi father birthday is coming near and they r gonna invite jaichand family compulsory and then she can go to meet him ,after heraing this she get just too happy and start waiting 4 the invitation,
here in ajmer prithvi is making nandini memories his part of life and wishes that once he can meet her , "bhaya" pratha called him and he turned back and pas a smile to her and she comes inti her lap and what r u thinking hum ap ko kab se awaz lagarahay hain , prithvi just seeing her and after few min he told her that she is thinking about nandini that he wanna say bye to her and wanna tell everything about himself that he is kuvar of ajmer , but kismat ney muqaha hi nahi diya , then pritha said her koi baat nahi ab jab ap milay gain usse to bata daina ,"kaisay" said prithvi friends coming in his room , pritha put her tongue under her teeth thinking what she had said , every is just looking at her and she smiles and said jab who ap ko milnay ay gi and run away, everyone is thinking waht does this mean . finally sanjam said "tum yahan kiya karahy ho ik achi si khabar hai tumaray liyay "
kiya said prithvi
arjun ki shadi hai said chand
"kab" prithvi in a shocking voice
"teen din bad " arjun said with a smile
"ji lo teen din us kay bad bakra shaheed ho jay ga " siad chand
"bechari bhabi tumko jalilain gi umar bar " said pundir
"kiya matlab " arjun showing his eyes to pundir
and suddenly everyone one laughed and arjun too
next day they left 4 arjun house to help in the wedding and finally the day came when arjun is getting married shadi ki rasmain suro ho rahi thi aur prithvi chand ko daikata hai and sochta hai kay khash uski jungli billi bhi uskay sath hoti and sab usko daiktay hain uar samaj jatay hain
"prithvi tum shadi kab karo ga" said chand
"kiya" said prithvi
"maharaj aur maharani ki marzi se ya apni marzi "said pundir
"kiya bol rahay hoi tum sab , meri shadi kahan se agayi hum to arjun ki shadi mein aya hain " said prithvi
"nayi who bas humko nandini ki yaad arahi thi na is liyay puch tha tumse " said sanjam with a naughty smile
prithvi get embarris and try to make an excuse but all in vain but he got caught and smiles and said chalo wahan arjun kay pass chaltay hian
and they return making jokes
aur yahan ajmer ,mein maharani aur pura raj mehel kar sadaasiya is janam din ko khubsurat banaa chatay hain
"acha hua kay tum sab agay " said prithvi mother to all of them seeing coming in the mehal
all of them take ashirvad from maharani and she gave them her blessing
kaisay rahi arjun ki shadi aur kab aya ga who mehal wapis said maharani
shadi boaht ach thi maa aur who pita ji kay jana, din se ik din pehlay ajay ga said prithvi
acah tik hai ,tum sab thak gay ho aram kar lo uskay baad bohat kam hai tum sab ka liyay "said maharani
all of them goes to their room aur do the rest , they all came in night and goes to sleep



Wow awesome dear ..Great update..I really enjoyed reading it!⭐️
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12
thanks 4 liking it thankyou to all of u i will try to post the next part as soon as possible😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: maria_awan

thanks 4 liking it thankyou to all of u i will try to post the next part as soon as possible😊



Ohh your always welcome sweetie!😳😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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your always welcome sweetie! 😉 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: maria_awan

thanks 4 liking it thankyou to all of u i will try to post the next part as soon as possible😊

Welcome dear😳.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi everyone thanks 4 liking part 1 here is the second part and one thing before wirting it if any one doesnot like any part or see any mistake they can correct me i mean can give me advice😊
PART 2
they all went to sleep last night , next morning a boy covering his chest witha pink cloth looking like a flower who is just complete his time to come into this beautifull world to give his fragance (a boy who is fallen in love but denying the truth) is doing a surya namaskar and a small girl is looking him from a distance , when the boy complete his surya namahkar and turn he saw a beautiful girl wearing langa of pink colour with a work of silver colur at it looking like an angel came straight away from heaven to him as a gift oh his life , he comes near that girl and hugs her and says "meri piyari baihan yahan kiya karahi hai "
"ap ko daik rahay thay aur ap ka namashkar kay katam honay ka intazar kyun kay humko ap se bohat si batein karni haina "says pritha
"acha hamari guriya ko bohat si batein karni thi hum se "says prithvi
"ji" says pritha
"par kiya baatein karna hai itni subha "says prithvi
aj pita ji ka janam din hai ap unko kiya toofa do gay aur mein kiya dun unko"says pritha
" tum aur toofa .....tum to khud hamari zindagi ka sab se bara toofa ho !says prithvi
"bhaiya" says pritha with a smile
prithvi also smile in return , prithvi friends comes there and said to them " andar chalo ab sab hamara intazar karahy hain nasaty par"said arjun
they all came into mehal from the garden and sees the prepartion 4 the day every thing is looking perfect
maharaj someshwar and maharni is waiting 4 them and on seeing them coming to the dinning table maharaj says to maharani "hamara beta ab bara ho gay hai na ", maharani says "ji ho to gaya hai aur samaj dar to pehlay si hi tha apne kartavaiy ko lay kar bilkul pa k tarha hai "
maharaj hugs their kids and and all of them wish maharaj on his birthday and prays 4 thier long life and sits to do the breakfast
here in kannoj in sanyogita room she is sleeping , around her bed there are flowers and diyay which r making her room more beautifull and she is looking a moon who is gathers by stars in between those flowers, sanyogita gets up in the morning witha beautiful smile in her face bc of the thought that she is going to meet finally prithvi today and going to fulfill the promise that she has done to him in yatra about telling him about her self , she cames out of the bed and goes in front of the mirror had a look at her self and smiles
somebody came at the door and knocked , sanyogita gaves the permission to come in and chamki and vaishali comes in and says to her" aj to hamari dost aur kannoji ki rajkumari bohat hi sundar lag rahi hain "
"who to hai " sanyogita said smilingly
"aur uski wajah to hum janaty hain " just having a teasing look in their eyes
"acha jungilli billi bigray rahis ki ab ap tayar ho jayin" says vaishali
"humko aj thori dair tak nikalna hai "says chamki
"mujay tum dono ne phlay kyun nahi jagaya kam chor ho rahi ho tum " sanyogita says to them
they r smiling at her bc she said herself not to wake her early in the morning last night as she was feeling very tired
sanyogita mom cames in and says "ja gayi meri nat gat rajkumari "
"ji maa" and hugs her mother
"acha ab pyar bohat hogaya mujse aur jaldi se tayar ho jayo humko ajmer kay liayay nikalna hai thori dair tak "says sanyogita mom and leaves the room and sanyogita starts to do the prepartion for leaving 4 ajmer and have a bath and comes to the room where chamki and vaishali r taking her clothes from cupboard
she is deciding which clothes she is going to wear today but she is not able to decide and she remember about the first time they meet and laugh and says "aj hum tum to choka dain gay bigray rahis"forgetting she is not alone in her room and seeing this vaishli and chamki laughed as well ,sanyogita wears her favourite dress and the wears the blue one and came out and says good morning to her dad
"aj to hamari guriya bohat hi sundar lag rahi hai "says maharaj jaichand to sanyogita ,she moves there to kitchen to make rotis for prithvi as they have a argument bc of her rotis in yatra
sainapati came in and says "maharaj ap sab ki savari tayar hai ajmer kay liayay humko abhi nikalna hai warna maharaj kay janam din kay liay dair ho jay gi "
"ok, hum atay hain abhi"says maharaj jaichand
and they all leave to ajmer 4 the birthday of prithvi father
prithvi is getting ready in his room 4 the function when her mother came in and he sits near to his mother and say"maa aj kaun kaun ay ga pita ji kay janam din par "
"bohat log kannoj se maharaj jaichand aur unka puar parrivar "says maharani
"mein to bachpan mein mila tha un sab se , unki beti sanyogita se ap to un se pehlay bhi milay ho ga na mein to gurukul mein tha pita ji kay har janam din par"says prithvi to her mom
"janaty hai tum yahan nahi thay aonay piat kay jnam din par par koi baat nahi ab to agay ho na , mahraj jaichand kay sath unki baithi , patni aur maa bhi ayin gay tumaray pita ko shubh kamnayin dainay "says maharani
"acha maa sanyogita kay baary mein bato na kitni choti thi jab usse mili tha "say prithvi
" sanyogita chand ka who tukra hai jisay panay kay liay asman sab kuch har jana chaiay ga , sanyogita who phool hai jisi khusbhu se har koi mehakna chay ga ,who sawan ki pehli bhud ki tarha hai, jo bilkul sachi hai jaisay andar se hai waisi hi bahar se bhi ,kehnay ko bachpan hai thori shaitan hai par waqt anay par bohat samjdar bhi hai jo apno se pehlay dusron ka sochti hia , uski khubsurti ka charcha door dor tak hai uski sadgi aur khubsurti aur uski samajdari ka koi jawab nahi hai is jahan mein kisi se bhi"says maharani
"sach mein who aisi hai phir to mein bhi usse milna chayun ga " says prithvi
and get exiciting to meet her although she had meet her in her childhood once but cannoit control the exitcement
"acha ab tum humo yeh batao yeh nandini kaun hai jis ki batein kartay ho tum aj kal aur jsi ki kahaniyan sunaty ho pritha ko"says maharani to prithvi
"who maa mein to ........get quiet 4 a min and start speaking again ,"maa mein usse yarta mein mila tha bohat sidhi hai bilkul bachon jaisi uski mada se hi hum kamiyab ho pay thay ,pata hai who ik rajkumari hai aur mein yeh nahi jan paya who kahan ki hai rajkumari usse pehlay hi who cahli gayi thi bas itni hi maa janta hoon us kay bary mein"says to maharani, prithvi never lies to her mom and always tell het everything
"hmmmm........................us nandini ne bohat gehra assar chora hai hmary baity par" says witha smile to him and he smiles as well after hearingthis comment
maharaj came in with prithvi grandfather and he takes his grandfather blessing , his grandfather anangpal says to maharaj someshwar "kannoj se koi ay ga is bar " maharaj says "ji haan baba sa who sab ayin gay pechli bar jaichand nahi apaya thay par maharani naintara aur sanyogita ay thay aur is bar to who ayin gay "maharaj anagpal get happy to know that they all r coming "and they both leaves the room
note: this is all 4 this time next part will be here soon😊until then enjoy and do post ur reply and suggestion if u want to give i will loved it 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow, wonderful update.I loved the conversation between pratha and prithvi.Very well described the room of sanyogita and sanyogita.

I loved the part when,prithvi's mom telling about sanyogita and her khoobsoorti to prithvi.
very well.Next part post soon maria.
Edited by veersherafan1 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: veersherafan1

wow, wonderful update.I loved the conversation between pratha and prithvi.Very well described the room of sanyogita and sanyogita.

I loved the part when,prithvi's mom telling about sanyogita and her khoobsoorti to prithvi.
very well.Next part post soon maria.

thanks rakhi dear 😊so much 4 liking it i will post the next part after having my all friends comments , i will post the next part tomorrow or on monday actually i am going to blackpool🥳on a prty with my sis🥳and i am just too happy bc i have got a new entry in my family my cousin is just born last day i am now in the air bc of this and bc u all like my update🤗
Edited by maria_awan - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: maria_awan

thanks rakhi dear 😊so much 4 liking it i will post the next part after having my all friends comments , i will post the next part tomorrow or on monday actually i am going to blackpool🥳on a prty with my sis🥳and i am just too happy bc i have got a new entry in my family my cousin is just born last day i am now in the air bc of this and bc u all like my update🤗

Welcome maria 😳😃.It's ok, take ur time and congratulation dear😃😃.Enjoy party😳😃😃.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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very nice part di👏.........loved the way u described the beauty n personality of sanyo😳........will wait 4 next part😃

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