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Posted: 16 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: maria_awan

hi everyone here is the part 4 for u all and sorry kal post nah karpayi thi aj karaahi hoon

Part 4

maharaj someshwar introduce sanyogita to prithvi and hie friends and they r thinking that this might be there dream , sanyogita and pritha are watching their shock and unbelivable face
"kiya hua bigray rahis aur uski toli ko " says sanyogita
all of them came into theit senses that its not their imagination or dream she is actually standing infront of them
"tum yahan" they all says at a same time seeing this sanyogita and pritha laughed
"haan hum yahan" says sanyogita
" is ka matlab tum hi sanyogita ho aur nandini bhi "says arjun smiling
sanyogita was about to reply when a sound came from the back "gungun yahan ayo zara"says Maharani kamlavati
and sanyogita left from there , before saying she says "hum tum sab se raat ko baat karain gay"
prithvi face is glowing with happiness because her dream has become true ,
"kyun janab kiya hua " says arjun
"kis ko "says chand prithvi is still seeing in the direction where nandini left , he is not able to remove his eyes from nandini urf sanyogita
"nandini chali gayi hia bigras rahis" says arjun teasing prithvi and shakes him
"haan who nandini hi thi na y aphir se mera baram " says prithvi
everyone smiles and says " nahi who baram nahi hia such hai "
"jungli billi agayi hia ab to hum sab gay khas tor par prithvi tum "says chand with a smile
"ab hum ko kaun bachay ga nandini se " says pundir
" mazak band kar tum sab ,"says prithvi trying to chnage the topic but his smile his not letting him save from him friends eyes
everyone is pryaing 4 the pooja in the mehal 4 the long life of maharaj someshwar , maharani calles everyone in the pooja, everyone is sitting in the pooja , pritha and sanyogita are sitting together on the opposite side if prithvi and his friends , pritha and sanyogita are doing shiatanyian with each other trying not to dsiturb the pooja , prithvi and their friends are watching them , prihvi is looking that her sister is happy with her sanyogita nd nandini , pritha was jealous of nandini but it was looking that it was a prank played by her sis toward him or it was a natural feeling 4 person
after the pooja everyone was sitting in the hall . but there was no sign of sanyogita and pritha , maharaj someshwar ask about them and says where are gungun and guun , sanyogita and pritha enters the hall and maharani kamalvati says"agyi ap ki laddliyan " they both came near maharj and kisses him on cheek and says "janam din mubarik ho ab ko "
"aj ka yeh janam din bohat khas hai hamary liyay kyun kay hamarai dono betiyan hamary pass hain " says maharaj
prithvi is watching this sanyogita is so close to her father and family and he was unawrae of all this , its night now andarrangement is made 4 the guest
"hamari gungun ka kmar tayar hia na maharani " says maharaj someshwar to maharni kamlaavti
"ji tayari hai gungun ka kamra " says maharani
and she take sanyogita and pritha to her room , prithvi was trying to comtrol his exticement that he wanted to talk to her as soon as possible as he was able to control his patience anymore but everytime he was being stoip by anyone
he saw his mother coming out in corridor
"sanyogita so gyai hia kiya maa" says prithvi his friends was with him
"haan sulay diya hai meinay " says maharani to them and says 2ab b bohat raat ho gayi hai tum bhi so jayo kal baatein karlaina unse "
"ji maa" says as a obiedent son
thjey went to him room in a little angry mood as his friends are aware of his mood bc sanyogita urf nandini promise her that she will talk to him today
"nandini bhi haad karti hai mujse baat kiya bina hi so gayi aur mein hoon jo baat karnay kay liyay itni parishan ho raha tha usse" says prithvi
"koi baat nahi who taak gayi ho gi na is liayay so gayi ho gi " says pundir
"par uska wada " says prithvi in a childis ways
"koi baat nahi kal kar lain abhi to who nahi jay gi na /" says chand
they reached prithvi room while talking to him
"cahlo kal yak tum hum se guzara chala "says arjun to prithvi
"hahaha chup chap bait jayo "says prithvi who is smiling now after this comment
they all sits in their chair and suddenly they the leg of the chair break from the corner and they all felt down and heards a laughing sound from the back and they all turn down and saw sanyogita standing in her night gown she was looking so beautiful like a flower
next part will be here soon 4 u all and sorry 4 short part ,
Note: everyone call sanyogita gungun, sanyogita calls pritha guun and sanyogita call maharaj baba sa and maharani baari ma donot get confuse



Thanks for the update maria lovely update once again dear..keep it up...Well very excited for the next part..Pls. post it soon!⭐️

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Posted: 16 years ago
#52
thanks megha me too very exicting 4 next part i will do it today or on wednesday 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: maria_awan

thanks megha me too very exicting 4 next part i will do it today or on wednesday 😊



Your Welcome Maria..okkk sweetie would be waiting then for u to post the next part buddy!😳😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#54
Hey Maria where is the next part sweetie still waiting buddy!😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
#55
Pls post next part maria.Cannot wait more.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: veersherafan1

Pls post next part maria.Cannot wait more.



Me tooo rakhi.......Maria agla part post karoo dear..ur fanfic is 2 delicious to resist!😳😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
#57
Hey maria ,pls post next part dear😊.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi girls, i am sorry rakhi and shona dear i was about to post next part lasr wednesday but unfortunatey igot too busy with my job i didnot get the time, one of my colleagues has got swine flue and i am covering mine and her shift as well 😭 but intazar khatam ho jay ga aj , i am going to post my next part today 😃aj hi chuti mili hai 😆😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hello everyone sorry 4 late update here is the next part enjoy it
Part 5
Prithvi and all friends it on the chair and suddenly one ;eg of the chairs from the corner broke down and they all fell down ,as they fell down they heard a laughing sound of a girl ,they all turn around and sees sanyogita urf nandini is standing and laughing on them ,prithvi and all friends get little puzzled and get up fast and trying to stop their embarrsment
sanyogita wearing her night gown of baby pink witha little jewellery is looking the most beautiful girl in the world and prithvi is just lost in her looks ,rest of friends is watching that prithvi is lost some where ,arjun shakes him after little embarisment and says" subha ho gayi hai kuvar ji"
"kiya hua" says prithvi
all of them laugh and sanyogita too laughed on it
"tum yahan kiya karahi ho " says prithvi to sanyogita
"bigras rahis ki toli ki khabar lainay ayi thi aur kuch dainay ayi thi " says sanyogita with a smile on her face
"mujay tum se baat nahi karni " says prithvi
"who mein janti hoon pehlay se"says sanyogita
"kiya janti ho tum"says prithvi
"yeh kay tum ik bigars hua rahis ho jis ka dimag ka hisa khali hai"says sanyogita with a teasing look
arjun laughed on it and says "tum hi sanyogita ho aur nandini bhi yeh baat humko kyun nahi batayi pehlay"
"sab kuch kharay hi pucho gay tumse" says sanyogita and goes to sit on the bed , after sitting she says "tum sab bhi bait saktay ho is bigray rahis se puchnay ki zarorat nahi"
all of them sit down but prithvi is still stnading he is just behaving like a small kid who wants little pamperness from surrounding , finally sanyogita gets up and goes near prithvi and take his hand and bring him near the bed and make him sit and says "ab chup chap yahan baito aur mazak band mujay bohat kuch batana hai tum se ko"
prithvi get a smile on his face after seeing so affection from her junglii billi
"acha nandini meri sanyogita tum kahan thi istnay din "says prithvi to her
"mein apnay mehal mein thi tumko batya to tha mein ik rajkumari hoon "says sanyogita
"haan prithvi ne bataya tha yatra se ik sin pehlay kay tum ik rajkumari ho par yeh nahi batay kahan ki ho "says chand
"tum ne hum sab se jhoot kyun kaha kay tum ik amm si larki ho yatra mein" says pundir as they were all excited to hear trhe truth as they they have accepted her as a friend and prithvi have accepted her everything
"mein ik rajkumari hoon meri kuch had hai usse bahir nahi jasakti mein,bachpan se hi mehal mein rahi hoon jahan jana hota tha pehary darun kay sath hi jana partha tha aur is cheez se mein tang agayi thi,mein daikna chati ik aam larki kaisi jiti hai apni zindagi ,mein bohat si khushiyan ya achi yadd hasil karna chati thi "says sanyogita
prithvi get a smile on his face and says "kiaisi lagi ik aam si larki ki zindagi"
"thori muskil hai par bohat maza aur sukon hai "says sanyogita
"tum ne baad mein humko kuch nahi batay "says sanjam
" yatra se ik din pehlay hi pita ji aur maa delhi se wapis agay thay aur pita ji ko har waqt mein unki nazaron kay samnay chaiy warna bohat parishna ho jay hain aur jab unhon ney humko mehal mein nayi daika to sainik baij diyay thay humo lainay kay liyay aur hum ussi waqt hi nikal gay thay akri bar mandir janay kay " says sanyogita
"par hum se mili kyun nayi pata hai mein ...........mera matlab hai hum kitna parishan ho gya thay " says prithvi with alittle angriness
"hum ya tum in jay chehray ko daik kar to aisa nahi lagta "says sanyogita to him says smiling as she nearly caught his reason of angriness or love, they are looking to him gets quiet 4 a min
"haan mein hua tha parishan kyun kay meri hi wajah se is muzibat mein pari thi na"says prithvi
" yeh sab tumara wajah se hua tha ,waisay yeh sab karna tumari adat hai ya shok"says sanyogita to her
"mera ,matlab hai pehlay dantya ho khud hi musibat mein pasanay kay baad aur baad mein jab kuch dair kay liyay nazar na ayun to muj par hi chilatay ho tum . achi adat hai tumari " says to him witha teasing look towrad him
"tum dono phir shuro ho gay agay batao na nandini mera matalb hai sanyogita"says sanjam
"mandir mein kyun nahi ruki thi hamaray liyay "says chand
" janay se pehaly ik dafa milti to "says pundir
"hum ne kitna intazar kiya tumara kay shayad tumn ayu ki wahan"says arjun
"ik sath itnay sawal ruko to sayi tum sab batthi hoon sab "says sanyogita
"jany se pehlay mandir gayi thi aur mujay chamki ney batay tha kay janay se pehlay har koi yahan akri paranam kar kay jata hai mein wahan ruki thi tumaray liyay aur jab tum sab ko log lainay ayay tab mein tumoko milnay hi arahi thi aky pita ji agay thay wahan aur hum kay sath agay"
"tum ko pata thahum sab kaun hain"says prithvi
"pehlay nahi pata tha par us din mandie mein pata chala tha "says sanyogita
"to phir tumne humko batya kyun nahi ik sandesh hi baij daiti kay tum kauin ho "says prithvi
"janti hoon tumse sab bohat naraz hogay mujse par tum sab ko chairnay ka moka kaisay janya daiti" sanyogita is smilimg as she was about to get in a big mess after accepting this
"kiya"says them all together ,sanyogita laughed as hard as she can seeing this they all laughed together
"tum hamary mein akri din hi ja payi thi bura nahi laga kay humne tum se jhoot kaha tha "says pundir
"bura kis cheez ka ...........tumsab ney jo bhi kiya apnay liayay nahi baba jani kay liya aur ajmer ki praja kay liya kiya tha is nahi biuralaga ,"says sanyogita
"us yatra mein anay se pehlay humne bohat si khushiyon ki dua kay humnko hamari zondagi ka sab se yaad gar safar hoi jay yeh yatra hamari aur aisa hua bhi sirf tum sab ki wajah se aur yeh asaan tum sab ka mujay hamesha yaad rahhay ga"says sanyogita getting little emotional
"humne kiya kiya tum hi bohat shaitan ho kitni shitani karti ho tum "says prithvi
"haan ji tum sab to kuch kartay hi nahi ho meray kahany mein namak kis ne milaya tha , mujay jungle mein akailya kis ne bhulay tha ...............aur bhi bohat kuch "says sanyogita witha fighting look
"ab larna maat shuro kar daina"says prithvi
"tumne to sab bat diya hamaray baary mein kuch puchu gi "says chand
"kiya batana chatay ho tum sab apnay baray mein, chalo tum se shuro kartay hain chand , tumara naam chandar bardai hai pyar se tumko sab cahnd bhulatay hian , tum prithvi aur in sab se bohat pyar kartay ho ,tumari jaan kavitaon mein basti hai jo koi bhi unko haat lagat hai who jan se jata hia aur ab tum prithvi kay sath bachpan se har sharat mein aur zimadari mein is kay sath rehaty ho"says sanyogita
chand is looking toward her with a admiring look
"ab tum pundir ,tum bhi ik rajput ho tummko gussa bohat ata hai har baat par talwar ut laity ho aur prithvi ki baat tum kabhi nahi taltay ho , tumhay larkiyun se kuch kuch chir si hai aur tum apni bainon se bohat pyar kartay ho"says sanyogita to pundir
"arjun ko khana bohat pasand hai aur sona aur har waqt tum prithvi ki tang kaichaty ho jo kay tum bohat acha karta ho iskay sath aisa hi hona chayay "says sanyogita to arjun,everyone smiles after this comment
"ab ap sanjam ji ,tumara prithvi aur in kay aliva ab koi nahi hai yeh hi tumara sab kuch hain, ik hadsay mein tumne apna sab kuch kho diya tha us bhim dev ki waja se " says to him with a serious look
"yeh to tha tum sab kay baray mein alag alag ab kuch baatein jo tum sab ko hamesha sath rakti hian whi yeh hain kay tum sab ik dusray se bohat pyar kartay ho , ik dusray ka sath nibanay ka wada kiya hia akri dam tak, tum sab hi bhimdev se bohat nafrat kartay ho aur ajmer kay tum sab kuch bhi kar sakaty ho, sayi kaha na , yeh hi batana chaty ho tum sab ya uar bhi kuch"says sanyogita to them ,all of them are looking to her witha open mouth and look each other
"tum itnay sab kaisi janti ho hamary baray mein"says prithvi
"tumhe kiya laga mein har rah chaltay ko apna dost bana lati hoon , mein har kisi ko apna dost nahi banati par jab kis ko apna dost banati hoon uski har pal ki to kiya mein ar sans ki khabar rakti ho chay who sans beet hi gayi ho"says with a mature look
"tum to sab kuch janti ho par kaisay aur humko kabhi batay kyun nahi itnay dino mein"says prithvi to her ,but udeenly they heard a sound and saw pritha is standing and crying .all of them ran toward to her and says to pritha after taking her into his lap"kiya hua pritha "
"she get s=down from prithvi lap and comes to snayogita"ap kahan chaloi gayi thi diij ap ne kaha tha ap meray pass hi rahain gi kahainnahi jayin gi"
sayogita comes and hug her and says "mein to yahin hoon kahin nahi gayi aur jahun gi bhi kaahan ,tum se door to ho hi nahi sakti na tumari diij"
prithvi is seeing all this that her little sister is how close to her nandini,after few min everything is fine and snayogita is sitting on bed again and pritha is sleeping in her lap and rest of them are sitting at their places
Note:this part is specially 4 rakhi and shona dear 😉
i hope u all enjoyed it next part is going to come soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: maria_awan

hi girls, i am sorry rakhi and shona dear i was about to post next part lasr wednesday but unfortunatey igot too busy with my job i didnot get the time, one of my colleagues has got swine flue and i am covering mine and her shift as well 😭 but intazar khatam ho jay ga aj , i am going to post my next part today 😃aj hi chuti mili hai 😆😆

It's ok maria dear.No problem😳.

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