OS Amarprem - Chapter 83 Part 2 Updated Page 4

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Hi,
Just thought of posting a precap... 😳
pratigya just stared lifeless at the place where the phone was ... She had stopped seeing ...stopped crying... her mind had gone slack with horror ... her heart in throes of pain
Pratigya wrenched open the cabinet door, jabbing in the PIN , even as she felt her heart rip in pain...what r u doing partigya? u r betraying him! u r betraying his trust! ... but..but my mother! I can't let her suffer even one more sec! ... her hands frantically searched for the files ...even as a war waged in her heart
'i...' he croaked against her lips... 'I ...I think...i am falling in love with u , pratigya!'... he admitted , his cheeks blushing slightly , his lips gliding over hers, his eyes closed in bliss... He felt her shudder n inhale sharply n heard a thud behind her ...he looked down to find certain files scattered behind n to her side , which obviously had fallen from her hand ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh Dhanya what a heartbreaking Precap😭

Just when K was starting to realize that it's love and telling P, and the files oh no he is going to be so hurt that he opened himself up to these feelings. Not looking forward to his reaction it's going to be bad, hope Chandu shows him the proof soon.

Dhanya please PM if you update this week I will be on vacation.
Looking forward to the update😊
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precap is shocking di.. 😲 oh k will be hurt ...and my heart beat fasting when k said he is in love with her and files dropped from p hand 😔 update soon di and pm me whenever u update.😃
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Ohhh. Krishna admit his lov ..files fall from her hand...so hope pratigya tokd him everything ...whole truth & plead him to save her mother. .hope krishna listen all & promised her to help her...don't want any misunderstanding btwn them...
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Originally posted by: rekrn

Oh Dhanya what a heartbreaking Precap😭

Just when K was starting to realize that it's love and telling P, and the files oh no he is going to be so hurt that he opened himself up to these feelings. Not looking forward to his reaction it's going to be bad, hope Chandu shows him the proof soon.

Dhanya please PM if you update this week I will be on vacation.
Looking forward to the update😊



Thanks rekha

Yeah his reaction is going to b bad... but that is needed for the remorse part n the final realisation of love

Will of course pm u
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precap is shocking di.. 😲 oh k will be hurt ...and my heart beat fasting when k said he is in love with her and files dropped from p hand 😔 update soon di and pm me whenever u update.😃

Thanks dear ... coming soon 😃
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Originally posted by: simmi.friends03

Ohhh. Krishna admit his lov ..files fall from her hand...so hope pratigya tokd him everything ...whole truth & plead him to save her mother. .hope krishna listen all & promised her to help her...don't want any misunderstanding btwn them...

thanks simmi 😃
u will see ... 😳 a big , but short MU is there
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Here's link to chapter 82
Part 1
Dunno how it had come out, will be from P's POV n K's POV😳

Pratigya's knuckles turned white as she reeled in shock when her father's mocking face came into her focus on the screen... 'hello my dear precious daughter , uh oh! I am extremely sorry... U r now Mr. KST's slave, I forgot... Just as u seem to have forgotten that u have a mother... No problem dear, what's the use of me being ur father then , I am here to remind u about ur mother... i never knew that u were such a s**t ! ...I send u to Mr. KST to use ur body n fetch my files or ur mother will suffer... ...but u only seem to have memorized the first part ... from what I heard , u r completely his slave , but that's just that , isn't it...? let me remind u again dear'... shailendra paused with a mocking sneer...pratiya stared at the screen , shuddering in shock n horror... her love addled heart n brain seemed to be being slammed against some hard rock...' the files' he said clearly , quoting in air... 'Remembered something? May be this will make u remember why u r there in the first place...' he smiled evily n he stepped back , to reveal her mother sleeping on the bed ...with a doc n manjula near her... pratigya shouted 'no!' as she watched manjula roughly pushing her mother's mouth open n the doc inserting an iron piece across her mouth ...it seemed her mother was unconscious...' no! NO!!..pls...pls... I will do anything... I will get the files now! Pls... not my mother! No!'... pratigya screamed ,hopping n running along the room, hysteric ,as manjula , with an evil smirk turned on the switch ...

the phone dropped from her hands as she slumped to the floor in horror n pain , her heart bleeding , her head feeling like splitting ...she could hear her wretched father's voice coming from the phone...she opened her bloodshot eyes, panting...'this is just a teaser dear... But hope ur memory is intact now... Ur precious mother is under sedation n the shock lasted only 2 secs...I could have gone n just killed her or gave her shock while she is conscious , but then she will know the truth ...n will commit suicide ! which is not good for my plan... I expect u to bring me the files as soon as possible or else the same treatment will be repeated , only next time she won't be in sedation ...n she will know the pain , not to mention why she is getting it... She will know why u r there... She will know that her poor daughter is not a wife , but a mere slave...n I will make sure u watch her die!... I hope u understood , dear... u see I don't have much time n money to spend on this circus...elections r coming... So ... my files! ...as soon as u wish to see ur mother! Enough of being a s**t n try to be a dutiful daughter , dear...' she heard shailendra leer horribly... maddening silence spread across the room as pratigya lay face down on the floor, shuddering n sobbing, eyes streaming as she stared lifelessly at the phone lying inches away on the floor...

She heard the door opening n saw meera leering down on her...' I told u choti malkin! U will love my gift over malik's ! ..ah! how I wanted to see ur tortured face! a perfect gift to me when I leave this haveli..' meera giggled horribly , picking up the phone... pratigya just stared lifeless at the place where the phone was ... She had stopped seeing ...stopped crying... her mind had gone slack with horror ... her heart in throes of pain... what was she doing? why was she still alive? Her mother is suffering in hell n she is all happy , being a 'slave' ... Her mother is subjected to electric shocks n here she is ... being a s**t n dying to offer herself to a man! ... Just a man? ...its him! pratigya! ur love! ...n speaking of whom, he will be coming for u any moment!... SHUT UP! ...How horribly pathetic u can get pratigya! ur mother is is hell n u r still thinking of him! ...she pulled at her hair, a silent scream escaping her...she forgot about her mother n let herself drown shamelessly in love...love? What love r u talking about? He considers u as his slave, as ur father rightly told...for him u r nothing but a cosy slave , whom he can use when he gets home every night ! or whenever he feels like !...to have fun with!...ur mother went through hell for u here's how u r repaying her! ...she sat bolt upright , looking around hysterically ... she must see her mother! ..yes! but for that she must get the files! Yes! ...she stood up , n ran towards his cabinet , the image of her mother lying unconscious with an iron rod in her mouth haunting her ...

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'everybody is alright ... N that bitch will not be seen here anymore... Drop it , bauji' krishna said curtly , fisting his hands in his pockets ... Sajjan nodded, looking lost ...'is... he cleared his throat ...'is she injured...?' ..krishna looked at him , his jaw flexing ...'no!' ... Sajjan looked away , relieved n sighed ... Krishna turned to go ...'baba...' sajjan called, his voice loving n yet weak... Krishna turned to face him , concern in his eyes what is it bauji?' he asked , his tone tender... 'n...nothing beta..' sajjan sighed , his eyes moist... They looked at eachother for some secs n krishna turned to walk towards the haveli again...'krishna..!' sajjan called , his tone serious ... Krishna looked sideways, halting , his eyebrow raised ... 'ma sahib told me that u want a party tmw ... N u r going to announce that girl as ur wife...!' ...sajjan said , disproval in his voice ... Krishna gritted his teeth ...'u know bauji , I don't like repeating or reconsidering my decisions... Tmw there will be a party , here..' he said , starting to walk ...'u r ignoring the sec part of my question , krishna... have u stated to consider that girl as ur wife ?' sajjan said, his tone hard...' i guess so..yes!' krishna said , his tone firm... Sajjan sighed, concern clouding his heart ..'remember how n why she came here , baba... I don't want u to go through the same hell I once went through... The pain ...is ..unbearable... I don't want ...can't stand ..u in such pain..baba...' ...krishna looked around at sajjan , his eyes searching his father's face...' just don't invest ur heart beta... They r not worth it... I see that u r... addicted ...to that girl... Just..just don't let that addiction touch ur heart!... once they get hold of ur heart , they will just ..rip it apart! ...they r so selfish! They will make u lose everything u hold close to ur heart, except themselves ...n if they don't get their way, they will destroy u...completely'... sajjan said, his voice pained ...

Krishna clicked his tongue, a bit angry ...he don't want to hear it... he don't want to hear what his mind was trying to tell him too... right now he only wants to hear his heart n body... 'bauji, don't spoil my mood... I know what I want!... n its her! All the time! ...N don't worry bauji... If she is playing any games , I assure u... she will pay, dearly...' he said, hiding the fact that he will be shattered n ruined if that happens ...it won't happen! He head his heart assure him... she is so innocent ... N she loves u... n she knows very well how he deals with traitors... ! he fisted his hands as he walked to the haveli... it won't be the case of treachery with her... She will be breaking his heart n he will make sure she suffers , if she dare to play with it... Play with it KST? How? ... when did u give it to her that she can do anything with it? ...he halted near the stairs , feeling jolted ... has he already given away his heart to her? She better take good care of it!!

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Pratigya wrenched open the cabinet door, jabbing in the PIN , even as she felt her heart rip in pain...what r u doing partigya? u r betraying him! u r betraying his trust! ... but..but my mother! I can't let her suffer even one more sec! ... her hands frantically searched for the files ...even as a war waged in her heart... think pratigya! what r u doing? I am getting the files n running away! I will throw the files on shailendra's face n escape with my mother! ...ha! Do u really believe shailendra will let u two live? ...we will survive! ... we must survive...I must give my mother the freedom she deserves! ...alright! Suppose u managed to escape with ur mother, what do u think he will do? Sit idle knowing that u betrayed him? ...no! he will hunt u down n ..kill u! ... pratigya panted against the safe door ...i will already be dead after betraying him! he will only be killing it, the dead body I am, again! ... Same as I will be dead if I waste any moment in saving my mother from that hell! ...she opened random files, frantic... have u ever thought how will mother feel once she finds out the truth about ur marriage? ... surely he will be killing u , n ur mother will know that u r just a slave to him, nothing more... a slave who dared to betray him! n not a wife ! ... do u think ur mother will live with it?... no! ...she sagged against the cabinet , tears drying up in her cheeks as her head felt too heavy ... he is coming for u! have u thought what will he think when he doesn't find u here? Worse , when he finds out that the files r missing? ... that u betrayed him? ...he will be livid! He will hate u! ...he won't be gazing at u with those tender eyes! ... can u live with that?...NO! I can't...! she twisted against the cabinet door, pain severing her heart... I will die!... I will die if he hates me...

I will die if my mother suffers anymore ... ..she snapped open her eyes, panting ...atleast she could make sure her mother lives...! Yes! She will get her mother out of the hell ! send her safely to her friends ! ... n then wait ! wait for him to come for her! N accept his decision on her! ...she took out the files, closing the cabinet door ... what r u thinking pratigya? U know he is kind! Tell him! Tell him everything ... he might help! ... no! he will help u! ... But ..but... how could she tell him? Where would she begin? How could she begin? ... he would be coming to u to enjoy u n not to listen to ur rants of horrible childhood n suffering mother! ... He will be livid u spoiled his night! ... u know he has been looking forward to this night since days ...he will be bored ! ... STOP thinking about how he will feel n react! Ur priority is ur mother! Get the damn files n save her...u love him! That's ur problem! ... He doesn't! ... accept the fact , pratigya! ...n u love ur mother! Ur mother needs u more than anytime!!... She took deep calming breathes , mopping her face ...

She made to close the cabinet door, securing the files in her hand n her eyes widened in shock...what? ...her album! ...she took out her old college album, her mouth hanging open in surprise even as joy filled her heart... he kept it with him? why?... she opened it briskly , her heart dancing in joy...her eyes moistened as she saw the ribbon , engraved with the words to the love of my life' , inside the album, on the page where he said that day he liked her particular photo... she pressed the ribbon n the album to her heart, breathless with happiness ...he kept these with him! why? ... it could only mean one thing! ...could it be ? could it be true? Suddenly she can't breathe ...sumitra's words echoed in her ears ...'my son loves u beti... I have seen it in his eyes long ago...' he loves me? ...MR. KST LOVES ME!...yes! ..she wanted to scream in joy!... yes!!...she could feel her whole body heaving in an effort to get air to her lungs...she hugged the album n the ribbon to her chest more n more as she swirled in mirth...she was laughing n giggling n squealing like a teenage girl , tears of joy spilling from her closed eyes...every micro sec of tortures she has ever endured seemed dust now! ...every moment of joy n pleasure she felt in his arms , in his care, seemed to touch infinity now!!! ...Pratigya Krishna Singh Thakur! Her! ...the most happiest woman in the world!... oh! She can't wait to tell her mother!! ...she will be so happy! All her prayers r answered now! ...she ...she...n the files fell down from her hands...

she stared at them , a terrifying shudder rocking her body...her mother!how could she be so selfish? ...she could hear shailendra's ghost like voice echoing around her...' oh dear! ... I see that u have made ur choice ... U r embracing ur slave ' status with him , fooling urself that its love' ...just bec u saw some random photos n a stupid piece of cloth with him!...n u have thrown away ur mother! To suffer in hell! ... What's ur mother mean to u , when u could live happily live ever after tethered to his bed!...ah! I get it! ...ur poor mother! ...she risks her life all the while for her precious daughter n what does the selfish , cruel daughter do? Let the unwanted mother die in hell while she enjoys her life at the devil's feet...! ...u proved that u r my daughter , dear...well done!...' ...NO! ...pratigya closed her eyes in horror... She scooped up the files , feeling chocked with pain...she prised off the album n the ribbon from her chest , feeling her heart ripping apart with them from her...she threw the album n the ribbon inside the safe n closed it shut, leaning against it, files in her trembling hand, her eyes tightly closed against the pain clawing at her...she had never felt more miserable in her life!... ur mother pratigya! think only about her!...yes! she has got the files! Now how to escape from here? With 50 or more armed guards surrounding the grounds? ...

She fluttered her eyes in a panic as she heard the door click n she moved away from the cabinet , hiding the files behind her in her trembling left hand , while she frantically tucked her hair behind her ears using her right hand, her heart n body reacting to his presence ... The need to flaunt his gifts to his eyes ruled her , even as her heart beat escalated exponentially , contrasting emotions of shock n fear n shyness racing through it... the next moment sanity kicked in , the sheer gravity of the situation she is now in rattling her to the core... Her petrified eyes met his amused n lustful ones as krishna stepped in to the room , kicking the door shut with his foot, loosening his tie... as much as he loved the look in her eyes like that of a petrified deer, he could feel that she is ... Terrified? ...for all the wrong reasons, he could tell from her body language ... Slow down KST! U r scaring her! ... He smiled at her as he walked towards her, to ease her , hoping that his eyes n gait didn't look as predatory as he was feeling deep inside ... that primal feeling!... of claiming his mate! Her!... the feeling was alien, but he loved it!... he saw her taking a petrified step backwards even as his eyes raked over her ears... Oh! She looks even more beautiful ...all mine!... he snaked his hand along her back n pulled her flush against his body n saw her eyes dilate in ...fear? ...n ...did she look pale?... ...his eyes searched her pale face... n her twitching , fearful eyes ... Something was wrong! He had seen that look in her eyes only yesterday near that tree , in the rain...But that was diff... she was cutely, adorably, erotically terrified yesterday...which was a complete turn on! ...but...not now! ...now it was not in that loving innocent way! ...it was genuine fear! why? ... may be its just the nerves! She is so innocent!...

he smiled more broadly , hoping to ease her nerves , gently bringing his right hand to her forehead to caress her along her forehead n trace her hairline n down to her left ear , playfully striking the ear ring...he saw her eyes flutter close at his caress n felt her stiffen in his arms ... but she shivered when he stroke the ear ring n he sighed in relief... That's right! go slow KST! No need to rush n make her uncomfortable...uncomfortable? She was never uncomfortable with him! ...but why was he sensing that she was uncomfortable! N not bec of him! ...for some other bloody reason!...may be some one said something to her! He will kill them!... ... he coiled her hair in his hand n tilted her head back a bit , bringing her trembling lips inches to his mouth ... She was still pale... his eyes raked her face, her closed eyes...her panting breath... the beauty of her ears n neck n cheeks as the earrings glittered ...'u r so beautiful' he murmured , his lips inches from hers...something was wrong... He can't point it out, but something was horribly wrong!... he could sense it... bec her blush didn't quite minimize the paleness in her face ... He could see that she has kept her left hand behind her , may be mashing her pallu in nervousness! ...He chuckled against her mouth as he captured her trembling lips in a serene kiss... ...what the...! he withdrew back as though he had received an electric shock! She was cold as ice! ... He searched her face again, confused n frustrated, his fingers tightening in her still damp hair...

'pratigya?' he called her , trying to ease her from whatever is bothering her... he saw her cheeks tremble as though in pain, her closed eyes twitching ... what the hell is the matter with her!! ... he tilted her head more back n buried his face in the left crook of her neck, caressing her neck with his nose , snuggling lovingly , inhaling her sharply... he felt her blossom in his arms n smirked against the area where her neck met with her ear n tugged at her earring with his teeth...he heard her sigh , her body shivering ...back on track! Finally! He thought naughtily even as he latched his mouth hungrily below her lobe n sucked hard , groaning in desire, his right arm tightening along her hair n left snaking along to her back waist...he felt her writhe n arch against him with a strangled moan of his name, n felt her right hand fly to his hair... ...'u don't...need to be scared... I ..won't hurt u...ever...i will be gentle ..tonight ..., I promise...' He continued hoarsely , over her panting breathes, gently sucking at her pulse point in greed , knowing the fact that its her first time n suspecting that's why she seemed all tensed up...he hoped he could rein in his animalistic need for her n be soft n gentle with her for this one night ... suddenly easing her of her apprehensions was his first priority than un leashing the tempest of desire coiling inside him on her...for that he will have an eternity... He licked up along her throat n tilted her face to meet his as he they panted against each other , their noses n forehead touching ... he smirked against her panting lips...n...was she crying? He saw tears spilling from her closed eyes...

he could feel a suffocating feeling in his chest... just tell her! ...it will ease her further ...u will feel good too...he took a deep breath, suddenly feeling nervous ... his mouth had gone dry n he licked his lips in nervousness... why the hell was he feeling nervous? ...he closed his eyes for a split sec n opened them , gently caressing his lips with hers... n smiled in happiness to find that the cold feeling was gone as she shivered against him... 'i...' he croaked against her lips... 'I ...I think...i am falling in love with u , pratigya!' he admitted , his cheeks blushing slightly , his lips gliding over hers, his eyes closed in bliss... He felt her shudder n inhale sharply n heard a thud behind her ...he blinked ...n her shocked,pained n frightened , teary eyes came to his view ... n he looked down to find certain files scattered behind n to her side , which obviously had fallen from her hand ...

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Every time she felt that she was being helpless in front of him, every next moment just surpassed the past ones...she had just moved away from the cabinet in time... pratigya could feel her heart n body submitting to its owner even as her mind tried to remind her of the grave situation... he is here! N u have those files clutched in ur hand! He will see them! He will be livid! He will feel betrayed !...he will be angry, hurt... .. she trembled as she felt him pull her by waist towards him ... his eyes! There's nothing more blissful than drowning herself in them!... oh! Yes! Ur mother is drowning in hell n ur want to fulfill the devl's wishes ...! Her heart ripped in pain... she saw his eyes soften in concern n felt her eyes close shut , reveling in his care as he gently caressed her along her forehead n down ...she shivered in shyness as he playfully stroked her ear ring ... No! pratigya! what r u doing? ... her mother's face flashed across her mind an she turned pale in pain n shock... She couldn't find it in her to move away or even push him back as he coiled his hand in her hair n pulled her head closer to him ...she kept her eyes closed , pain wrenching her heart at her inability to do anything except just sag in his arms , feeling his ragged breath against his lips, when all her world was crashing around her... her mother was already in hell, n soon he will be livid with her...n hate her...why was she alive? ...she felt her heart flutter as she heard him say 'u r beautiful..' ...she felt his concern for her increase ...ofcourse , he must be seeing her pale face n wondering why...

she heard him chuckle suddenly n felt his mouth close around hers n withdrew at once as if he had received some electric shock... She heard him call her , his voice laden with concern n confusion ... She fought the tears threatening to spill from her eyes, feeling suffocated in pain... she felt him lovingly tilt her head back n gently caress her neck with his nose , inhaling her ... her body blossomed to his touch , n she suddenly felt all weak n tired... She could just melt in his arms forever , away from the hell burning around her ... She felt his mood shift to happy n desirous again n she moaned out his name , feeling his naughty mouth teasing her below her lobe... She felt her heart thumping in joy as he murmured against open mouth kisses along her stretched neck how she won't have to get scared , n how he will be gentle with her tonight...he is so caring..! ... oh! Yes!pratigya... he is caring...until he sees the files in ur hand! ... he will be hurt n livid! ... Throw them away now! ... Or else u will be in a worse hell! Could u take it if his eyes look at u in full of hatred n anger? No! ... just throw the files away! ...n forget about the world! ...can't u see? He is so happy...u won't destroy his happiness...yes!...but ..but... my mother! Her heart bled in pain even as tears spilled from her eyes, her hand mashing the files ... What r u doing pratigya? just push him away n run! ...better, just tell him everything! Yes!...

she was building up the courage to be able to push him away from her when she felt him caress his lips over hers ...n she sighed against him involuntarily ...n then ... her world brightened up impossibly for a golden sec only to be blacked out in sheer pain as she heard him confess that he was falling in love with her... then ...then...what happened? She tried to think through the haze of happiness n then the debris of her broken heart as the files fell from her hands... she was numb!...she saw his eyes twitch in pain as he looked down at the files n athen at her...no! ... She can't think! Where was she ...? She felt his warmth leave her as she felt him push her away with all his might n she felt her body flailing to the back ...she could feel pain over her elbow n hip where her body had hit the floor , but it was all a haze ...she blinked several times , trying to get her head cleared from the numbness it suddenly went to... all she could see was his face n her mother's face , flashing across her mind like a jumbled up sequence ... she could hear him swear , his voice wrought with pain n hurt n she felt her heart rip brutally ... He was slowly falling in love with her! N she ruined it ! didn't she? ...everything is over! ...

Her world is ending , she thought , blinking as she felt his hand coil around her hair as he picked her up bodily to a half sitting position from the floor ...she could see his face, pained n tortured , livid ... n his eyes! She will never ever forgive herself for reducing his eyes to that kind of pain...never..ever..! ... 'krish...' she tried to call him one last time as she saw the feeling in his eyes change to pure wrath but she felt her mouth chocked up by something cold n ..n metal like ...she blinked , once, feeling the cold barell of his gun pushed down in to her mouth , n she saw no mercy in his eyes , coupled with pain... She closed her eyes , her mother's sad face filling her mind... Forgive me , ma! I failed u... she thought , pain ripping her apart ... I love u krishna... she thought , feeling an eerie calm, as she opened her eyes again to meet his, choking on the gun now in her throat...

Hope u liked it 😳

Edited by dhakarn - 11 years ago
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Thanks for the pm di.. 😛
very heart touching update di...poor pratigya 😭 she loves her mother and krishna so much and cant betray both bt poor she ...now in tough situation to whome she listen and all this happened becaz of his devil father 😡 plz di end pratigya's tension and let k know the truth soon ...and hope k will listen her if she tell him why she did that.update soon di.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Intense part and excellent the way you have written it 👏👏👏
p poor mum 😭

can you clear my confusion all happened or its in her mind? k actually saw the files?
oh the thought of k holding a gun in her mouth was painful to visualize he really did that?

and another thing update next part asap pls pls pls. or give a precap pls eagerly waiting for next update.
Edited by Khushi96 - 11 years ago

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