FF: The truelove part 1 updated..

Hii,

Frnds im back with new ideas, new story...my old FFs r still pending...bt i will continue them...

Jitna pyar aapne mujhe pehle diya tha me chahunga ki aage bhi mujhe pyar dete rahe...

This story is about a couple who do so much love with full of passion..They can die for each other ...bt there is something...!!!!

thanks... 😊 it looks interesting & different...update soon😃

Part 1:

Ye kahani hai Neel aur riya ki jo ek dusre se itna pyar karte hai ki ek dusre ke liye kuch bhi kar sakte hai...dono ne pyar bhi kiya to shadi bhi ki lekin wo kehte hai na pyar karne walo se duniya jalne lagti hai..aur unko alag karne ki koshish me jut jati hai...

Neel ek middle class family se belong karta hai ...aur ek software company me manager ki post par hai..

Aaj Neel aur riya ki first wedding anniversary hai ...

Neel: "Sir, mujhe aaj ghar jaldi jana hai.,"

Boss: "Me puchh sakta hun kyu...?"

Neel: "sir, aaj meri first wedding anniversary hai.."

Boss: "Tum jante ho na yahan bahut kaam hai abhi..,wife k sath to kabhi bhi apni wedding anniversary celebrate kar sakte ho..lekin agar ye kam pura nhi hua to hame lakho ka nuksaan ho sakta hai..."

Neel: "Ok sir..to aap mujhe sirf 2 ghante ke liye jane ki permission de dijiye.."

Boss: " Main tumhe 2 minute ke liye bhi jane ki permission nahi de sakta..2 ghante to bahut dur ki baat hai...ab chupchap baith jao aur apna kaam karo...is that clear..?"

Neel: " job to meri zindagi me bahut mayne rakhti hai sir par meri wife se jyada nahi...me apni job se bahut pyar karta hu par meri wife se jyada nahi...kyunki meri wife hi meri zindgi hai...meri saansein hai...aur esiliye me apni wife k pass ja raha hu...aap mujhe ghar jane nhi dena chahte to koi baat nahi...me ye job chhodkar hi ja raha hu..phir nhi aaunga...Gudbye..!"

Neel apni job chhodkar wahan se chala jata hai...

Riya apne husband Neel ka intezar kar rahi thi...baar baar uski nazar apni wrist watch par thi...achanak door bell bajti hai...

Riya: "Kaun hai..?"

"Tumhara eklauta pati !"

Riya darwaza kholti hai aur samne Neel ko dekhkar bahut khush hoti hai..,Neel ka aaj ghar jaldi aana uske liye gift se kam nahi tha...

Neel riya ko jor se apni taraf khinchkar apni bahon me bhar leta aur usko hontho ko kiss karne lagta hai..

Neel: "Dekha jaan..maine kaha tha na main aaj ghar jaldi aa jaunga..aur tum keh rahi thi ki me nahi aa paunga...Neel jo kehta hai wo karke dikhata hai..."

Riya: "Han mere pyare patidev...tum jeete main har gayi...par ek baat batao tumhare boss ne tumko ghar jane ki permission kaise di i mean tumne aisa kya kaha ki wo man gye..?"

Neel soch me pad jata hai,..

Riya: "Kya hua.? Kya soch rahe ho tum..?

Neel: Kuchh nahi wo bas aise hi...chhodo na jaan kya karogi jan kar...main ghar aa gaya na ...aur aaj hamari first wedding anniversary hai to celebrate karte hai...chalo aaj kisi five star hotel me chalte hai wahan khana khate hai uske baad ek long drive par..!"

Riya: "Thik hai main tyaar hokar aati hun aur tum bhi tyaar ho jao..."

Neel: "Han darling tyaar ho jana par aaj tum mere tareeke se tyaar hogi,."

Riya: "Acha.! Thik hai to batao aaj tum mujhe kaise dekhna pasand karoge..?

Neel: "Aankho me halka sa kajal, Ras bhare gulabi honth, reshmi julfein bikhri hui,badan par lal saree lipti hui..,gale me sundar sa motiyo ka haar...jab aaogi aayne ke samne to aayna bhi karne lagega tumse pyaar...meri janebahar meri janebahar.."

Riya: "software engineer ko shayri karna bhi aata hai...ye to hamein pata hi nahi tha,,,sach batao ye shayari tumne kahan se seekhi..?"

Neel: "Pyar karne wale shayari khud-b-khud karne lagte hai unko seekhne ki jarurat nahi hoti..."

Riya: "Tumse baaton me sach me koi nahi jeet sakta...acha me tyaar hokar aati hun jesa ki tumne apni shayri sunakar mujhe samjhaya.."

Tabhi achanak uske ghar police aa jati hai...Neel aur riya police ko dekhkar shocked reh jate hai...

To be continued...

Aap logon ko first part kesa laga jarur batana...
If u like it then press like button...i will update 2nd part soon...
Thanks..

First part is great Abhishek...👏

Originally posted by: Muskaan92

First part is great Abhishek...👏

Please nice characterisation👍🏼

Still reading...😊

Thanks muskaan...glad u liked it..😊

really well written in hindi👏👏👏, neel and riya are a sweet jodi, great start. Neel left his job oh dear 😲 he loves riya a lot how sweet
yeh police kaha se beech mein agaye i hope their 1st anniversary isn't ruined by them

I love forward to next part please post soon.

Originally posted by: Hope2

Acha likha hai Beta.

Thanks di...glad u liked it..

Originally posted by: Khushi96

really well written in hindi👏👏👏, neel and riya are a sweet jodi, great start. Neel left his job oh dear 😲 he loves riya a lot how sweet
yeh police kaha se beech mein agaye i hope their 1st anniversary isn't ruined by them

I love forward to next part please post soon.

Thanks dear...glad u liked it...
I wil update next part very soon..

wow great start bro well written neel riya r soo cute continue soon