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Muskaan

@piyarapiyari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Omg e threadwa to 9 pg tak pohnch gaya ab sare ideas dekhne pare ge hehehehehhehehe well ka teena tumre threadwa ne to hamri watt laga dii...;)...waise gud going carry on will join u after some time...r kabe and snighda dii and veena kamal ho ap teeno muft me maje looo waise kabe dii i somehow believe k nai kar sakti bt veena and snigdha dii u bothh i don,t bleieve isi liye chalo ab jaldi jaldi kono ache ache romantic ideas dooo...

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Muskaan

@Muskaan92

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: teeena
heyy kriya arja...
.after completing it i will put it on frst page..so that every1 can read...
or vt if i post it in separate topic as os...vt u said????😊

As you find it comfortable...😊

me agreed for both...😉

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Muskaan

@piyarapiyari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Teena u and my bee muskaan r excellent in writing romantic scenes ...btw my bee pprzz me kya likha romantic ideas ...ehheheheeheheh

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Muskaan

@Muskaan92

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: piyarapiyari
Teena u and my bee muskaan r excellent in writing romantic scenes ...btw my bee pprzz me kya likha romantic ideas ...ehheheheeheheh

Thanks jaan...

Hum tumka tuitions de sakte hain...😉

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ritu ralhan

@teenss

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

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Originally posted by: kriya...arja
Pratigya gets closer to him to hug him...
Krishna waiting to hug her back and again phone rings...
Krishna extremely irritated and its again chandu...
Krishna-"Abe yaar tumka ka paresaani hai hain..??"
Chandu-"Arre bhaiya woh ekko baat batana bhul gaye.."
Pratigya laughing...
Krishna-"kya..??"
Chandu-"bahiya..oo bhabhi ko thankoo bolna tha..."
Krishna-"Bol dyo na...beta phonewa pe kaahe hain..yahan aa ke bol do.."
Pratigya still laughing...
Krishna cuts the call and goes back to her...
your turn...

ooo now romantic half to mee very smart...😆

chlo let me tryyy😛

pratigya still laaughing ...😆

krishna irritated'''eelio abb tum kahe has rhi ho...''

prats'''hamari marji,,kyu aapko koi preshani hai''

krishna''acha beta ,,hamka preshani,,abii btate hain tumka''

nd he take her in his arms nd embrace her😳...rest you guys can imagine😆

..body nd soul meets together☺️

mooonlight falling on themm...nd both are in their own worldd...☺️

camera slowly mooved towards window nd out nd out...😆 usual scene😆

camera retrnd back nd it 5'o clock in morning.😆..kriya under a while color bed sheet

...ven prats heard a hen giving baaang 😆.(..commom in rurall or basti area😆)

prats in krishna's arms talking to herself''omg its morning time,,looking at him,,kisses him on cheek..😳..tries to come out f his embrace..nd looking fr her saari on side f their bedding..take it on herself nd slowly goes toward their smaalll bathroom they had made whose door is frm that room itself...😛

she came outt ,,,dressed.

..krishna still sleeping...she saw outside frm window bauji woken upp...

she goes to krishna to wake him,,nd take his clothes...

prats ''krishna utho,,subah ho gai hai,,aur bahar bauji b uth gye hai...tum jaldi se utho aur apne kapde lo..bauji kabii b nahane k liya aana vale hongee...

ufff uor turnn fr krishna 's dialoguesss

Edited by teeena - 13 years ago

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ritu ralhan

@teenss

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: piyarapiyari
Teena u and my bee muskaan r excellent in writing romantic scenes ...btw my bee pprzz me kya likha romantic ideas ...ehheheheeheheh

hahhaa😆...u knw am writing frst time...cnt beleive,,i wrote soo muchh😳

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Muskaan

@Muskaan92

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Krishna-"Arre yaar..ee subah bhi na.."

SS enters the adda... Krishna shirtless...

SS-"kaa be saale..?? Ee kaa huliya banaya hai be..??

Pratigya both shy and laughing..

Krishna-"ba ba bba bauji woh...woh..woh..raat ko garmi bahot lag rahi thi toh aye liye hum.."

SS-"Chup saale..garmi lag rahi thi behooda saale kutta.."

Krishna and Pratigya stare at each other and smile..

SS moves to the bathroom..

Meanwhile, Pratigya has hidden his shirt...

Krishna searches for it but he couldn't find it..

Pratigya moves outside to make breakfast for everyone...

Krishna-"Babu..humra sharat de dyo.."

Pratigya-"Nahin denge."

Krishna-"Acchaa...toh ee baat hai...toh thik hai..hum bhi aise hi bahar aa jaenge aur sabka keh denge ki..."

Pratigya runs and gives him his shirt..

he grabs her and says-"Arre hum toh ee sabka kehne waale the ki humka bahot grami lag rahi thi aye liye hum sharat utaar diye..tum kaa samjhi..??

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Muskaan

@Muskaan92

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Posted: 13 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: teeena

hahhaa😆...u knw am writing frst time...cnt beleive,,i wrote soo muchh😳

Kriya effect...😳

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Muskaan

@piyarapiyari

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: kriya...arja

Kriya effect...😳

beta mast lage raho 😆 😳 an excellent try 👏
Bee u,ll give ne tuitions for this beehoodi 😆 😳 then we,ll becme world top beehoodis 😳 😳

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ritu ralhan

@teenss

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: kriya...arja
Krishna-"Arre yaar..ee subah bhi na.."
SS enters the adda... Krishna shirtless...
SS-"kaa be saale..?? Ee kaa huliya banaya hai be..??
Pratigya both shy and laughing..
Krishna-"ba ba bba bauji woh...woh..woh..raat ko garmi bahot lag rahi thi toh aye liye hum.."
SS-"Chup saale..garmi lag rahi thi behooda saale kutta.."
Krishna and Pratigya stare at each other and smile..
SS moves to the bathroom..
Meanwhile, Pratigya has hidden his shirt...
Krishna searches for it but he couldn't find it..
Pratigya moves outside to make breakfast for everyone...
Krishna-"Babu..humra sharat de dyo.."
Pratigya-"Nahin denge."
Krishna-"Acchaa...toh ee baat hai...toh thik hai..hum bhi aise hi bahar aa jaenge aur sabka keh denge ki..."
Pratigya runs and gives him his shirt..
he grabs her and says-"Arre hum toh ee sabka kehne waale the ki humka bahot grami lag rahi thi aye liye hum sharat utaar diye..tum kaa samjhi..??

hahahahah...

prat"""arre nhi thakur sahab ham kya samjenge..hamto jante hain hamre thakur sahab kisi se darte thoda hainn''haan bass kall raat ek chuhe se jarruur dar gye thee...😆'

krishna''dekho babu tum majak mat banano yarr..ham dare nhi the,,,ham to bass chahte the ki uu chuha hamka distrbb matt kre...''''😳kaa samji distrbb to nhi kiya naaa😆.kaa khti hoo😳

prats blushed ☺️ '' dattt..krishna tum b na...chlo ab shirt phno aur tyar ho jaoo kam pe jane k liye ham bahr khana banane jaa rhe hain...'

prats outside making food...krishna goes to bathroom after ss came outt...

krishna dressed in meanwhile ,,nd ready fr restaurant...

krishna to prats near her chulha'''ee babu hamre pas khana khane ka time nhi hai to hamke dabbe main daal ke de diyo tumm...

ss''ee baba subah jaldi utha kro saala baa d main khta hai time nhi hai,,pta nhi raat bar kaa krta hai behudaa...''

krishna''ee bauji tum bkaiti mat kro ,,hamka vase he der ho rhi hai...''

prats give him dabba nd come till outside of daaba to see him off...

nd said in his ears''''krishna restaurant main jake kaam krna ,,raat ki need puri krne k liye sote mat rhnaa''''😳

both start laughing,,krishna gives her a side hug...nd goes to his wayy...nd prats eyes still following himm😛

Edited by teeena - 13 years ago