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Posted: 14 years ago
PART-16

the auto dropped pratigya at YMCA hostel.rolli was resting on her bed.after her field trip she was damn tired, don't feel like getting up from the bed.
as soon as entered pratigya ran and fall on her bed,buried her face in the pillow and cried.

rolli was shocked to see her crying.she jumped up from her bed and went to her.

rolli:'pratigya😲 ...kya hua?...why are you crying?😲...'she shook her shoulder.

pratigya:😭

rolli:'tum tho chandigarh jaane waali thi na!πŸ˜•...'

pratigya:😭

rolli:'kuch batha tho...'

pratigya:'😭

rolli:'get up and first stop crying...'she pulled her up and made her sit.

rolli:'omg!😲...you are looking sick...what happened...say...?😲'she went and brought chill water from the fridge and gave it to her for drinking.
pratigya:😭
rolli:'look at you? ek din mai kya haalat bana rakkhi hai?😭...'she tried to fixed her messed up hair with her fingers.
pratigya:😭
rolli:'please don't cry...srif rone se kuch hone wala nahi...'she sat beside her and put her hand around her shoulder and gave physical and moral support.
pratigya:😭

rolli:'stop crying...'she wiped her tears.in between her cry pratigya started explaining the things from ' she received krishna's call '

rolli:' you went to his house...!!!😲...'
pratigya:'i don't want to miss my last chance of seeing him...😭'

pratigya:'i could not resist him because....'
rolli:' because!πŸ˜•....'
pratigya:' i love him...😭....i love him rolli...😭...i love him...😭'she sobbed.

rolli:'pratigya!!!!😲....' first time she is hearing such words from her.

pratigya:'😭when my conscious was back i realized that i was still in his house...i don't want to stay there and face him again.😭'

pratigya:'i don't have the guts to face you too...😭'
rolli:😲

pratigya:'i saw him falling on the platform...😭'
rolli:😲
pratigya:'he was almost dead...😭'
rolli:😲
pratigya:'...i tried to follow the ambulance ...but could not...😭'she did not hide any think from her.she need to let out her feelings to reduce her tension.rolli heard with her eyes and mouth wide open.

rolli:'omg!😲...pratigya..itna kuch hoga ya!...muchay patha hi nahi chala😲...'
pratigya:😭

rolli:'tum fikr maat karo pratigya...mai singh family ko jaan thi hun.wotna zeyada nahi...par jaan thi tho hun...don't worry...hum yeh ghalati ko sudarengay...it is not end of the world...every thing will be ok...😊'she gave her hope.

pratigya:'krishna kay baare mai pata laga na...please...😭'

rolli:'no worry... i will...'
she immediately called the railway authorities to know the where about of the patient.but they could not help her.all the railway authorities who were on duty at the time of accident, were changed because they work in shift duties.she called almost all the hospital but of no use.she found the land line number of singh house from the yellow pages and tried to reach them but nobody picked up the phone.

pratigya was lying on the bed like a crushed flower looking at rolli expecting to say some news.next day sunday.rolli tried her level best to find about him. but failed.pratigya became sick because of her non stop cry and not eating any thing.

rolli:'pratigya...apne aap ko sambhalo..apna bhi khayal rak ko....see! you have high temperature now...'

pratigya:😭

rolli:'pratigya...chalo doctor kay paas...'
pratigya:'it is ok...'
rolli:'don't be crazy...let me check your temperature...' she brought the thermometer from the medical kit and checked her temperature.
rolli:'omg! you have 103 degree F 😲....'she took her by force to the near by doctor.
rolli took one week leave from the school.she want to stay beside pratigya.she was constantly and simultaneously taking care of pratigya and calling all the big hospitals in delhi to know about krishna.
after 3 days of continuous try she found out that he is admitted in Apollo hospital.

rolli:'pratigya...utto...have some soup...'she brought hot vegetable soup in a bowl.

pratigya:'i don't want rolli.i don't like to...'she refused.
rolli:'pratigya...do what i say...have this soup and take the medicine...'she said strictly.
pratigya:...she obeyed her. after taking medicine along with the soup pratigya felt better.
pratigya:'rolli...wo... krishna kay baare mai kuch pata chala?...'

rolli:'😊 i found it....krishna is in Apollo hospital...i hope he is fine...😊'pratigya got up from her bed as soon as she heard about krishna.

rolli:'have some more soup...right now i am going to Apollo hospital...'

pratigya:'i too want to come...please take me too...'

rolli:'pratigya you have temperature...more over he will be surrounded by his family...better let me go first and find the situation...then i will take you...'she convinced her.
with in few seconds rolli got ready and went to Apollo hospital.from the reception she found that he was in casualty and went running to that casualty ward .there she was restricted to enter in but allowed her to see him through the round small glass window on the ICU door.

'omg...😲' a feeling of shiver pass throw her nerves.she was literally shook to see him with oxygen mask,saline drips,ECG connections etc etc etc.it looks as if he was existing with life support.she went back and sat on a near by bench to calm down herself.soon she saw shakti coming with few doctors surrounding him.she gathered her strength and went to them to know about his position.

Dr:'he went in partial coma...'which shook shakti.
shakti:😲
Dr:'it is a partial one.the patient can feel, listen and understand you...but he can not move or speak....' he explained his condition.

rolli:'omg😲...'she closed her mouth with her hand.

shakti:'how long he will be in this condition?...'he asked the doctor with tears.

Dr:'we are not sure...πŸ˜•'
shakti:

Dr:'it depends how he fights for his life...'

Dr:'you should make him feel that he wants to live his life...that will give him speedy recovery...'

rolli:'is his memory ok?...'she raised her doubt

Dr:'his medical records says he don't have any memory loss.still we should wait for some more days to get to know about it.

' how i am going to tell this to pratigya...?😲 πŸ’”'she went to the hostel heart broken.soon she entered, pratigya got up from her bed and started asking so many questions.'did you see him? did you spoke to him? did he asked about me? how is he? is he ok?'

rolli:'don't worry he will be ok...'
pratigya:'what do you mean by he will be ok?😲😑...i am going to see him now ...'she try to got down from the bed.

teeay:'please pratigya.listen to me. he is in ICU.they are not allowing any visitors.even if you go you can't see him...'she tried to stop her and she did.

with in next few days slowly slowly rolli made pratigya to realize that he is in partial coma. which was yet another shocker to pratigya.after few more days after too many pleads of pratigya rolli took her to hospital.when pratigya saw him threw the glass window he was free from saline and oxygen mask,
rolli:'krishna's mom is coming...😲' suddenly she pulled pratigya from the window and moved away from there.

after few more days rolli came to know that krishna has been discharged from the hospital.

singh house:
sumitra was sitting in the hall looking at the files.

rolli:'namaste aunty...😊
sumitra:'rolli tum!!!πŸ˜ƒ....awo..andar awo...πŸ˜›'she was surprised to see their business competitor kabhir's daughter standing in their hall.
rolli:'pratigya tum bhi awo...😊'she came in along with pratigya.

sumitra:'baito...😊'she told both of them to take their seat.

rolli:'we are sorry to heard about krishna's accident...'

sumitra:'see my son's ill fate!...still i have no clue why he went to railway station...?πŸ˜•πŸ˜­ that too bear feet...😭'she said with tears.pratigya felt guilty when she said that.

rolli:'fikr maat karo aunty.you are giving him the best treatment.he will be fine soon...'

sumitra:'hope so...😭' she wiped her tears.

rolli:'aunty...yeh meri dost pratigya hai.i heard shakti is in search of a nurse for krishna...so i brought her...😊'

sumitra:'is it?πŸ˜•... but we have already appointed a nurse for him... sh..ak..tiii...'she called him.shakti quickly came down from krishna's room.

sumitra:'tum ne rolli se nurse kay leyeh bola tha?πŸ˜•....'

shakti looked at pratigya. he immediately recognised her and remembered the doctor's words 'you should make him feel that he wants to live his life...that will give him speedy recovery...'

'she is the only one who can make him fight for his life....only she can make him feel that he wants to live... 'he realized.he under stood their plan too.

shakti:'haan amma...😊'

'thank god..he supported us...'rolli took deep breath.

sumitra:'you have already appointed one isn't it?πŸ˜•...'

shakti:'amma... she is a professional nurse.only during particular timings she will visit.but we want a person to take care of him 24*7...'he looked at pratigya and said.

sumitra:'teek hai.take them to krishna's room...'she was convinced.
all three went to his room. pratigya was second time stepping in to his bed room.a feeling of unknown tension passed threw her and made her nervous.

krishna was lying flat on the bed.there was a white wide bandage around his head across his forehead.all three went close to him.it was heart wrenching to see him lying on the bed motionless.he has lost his weight and charm, he became skinny and pale.it was hard to recognise him.
shakti:'krishna thay ko..kun aayeh hai?...PA pratigya...😊'
krishna looked at pratigya.he can understand the things.

shakti:'tum payaar kartay ho na pratigya se... haan?...ab tum jalti se teek hojao...😊'
krishna looked at shakti.

rolli stood speechless staring at him.she can't believe ' is he the same krishna whom she use to see him partying, dancing and enjoying in the clubs!😲 πŸ’”'

'teek hai ab mai chalti hun...see you... take care ...😊'she said pratigya with a hug and left the singh house.

'if you need any think you can tell to me or chandu kaka...😊'shakti left pratigya in krishna's room and went.
pratigya was left alone with krishna.she slowly sat on the bed,beside his hand.

krishna stared at her.she felt that he want to say some think to her.she moved close to him.

krishna:😭 ...tears rolled down from his eyes to ears.

pratigya:'...'she wiped his tears from both side of his dimples with care.she can't see him crying.it was heart wrenching to see him lying almost dead.she tried to controlled her emotions but could not.tears broke out from her eyes too😭.

krishna:😭

pratigya:'muchay aap se koi shikayat nahi hai... it was not a preplanned one...it was an accident....😭'

krishna:'😭
pratigya:'ghalati meri bhi thi...muchay yahan nahi aana chahi yeh tha na?...that too after office hours...but mai kya karti i was dieing for your single glance... mai apne aapko rok nahi paaye...😭'
krishna:'😭
pratigya:'muchay aap ko rokna chayeh tha na...?😭' mai itni bhi kamzoor nahi hun...mai apne aap ko bacha sakti thi...ithna shakti tho bhagwaan har ek ladki ko thiya hai...'

krishna:'😭

pratigya:'par mai kar nahi paaye ...aap ko rok nahi paaye.. i can not resist you or refuse you....pata hai kyun?...😭'

krishna:😭

pratigya:'kyun ki mai aap se bahut payaar karhi hun...bahut...i love you....krishna😭......i love you so much...😭'she wiped her tears and hold his hand.
she looked at his hands.those hands which slapped her and hugged her tightly few days before were motionless and senseless...her tears continuously shed on his hands 😭.

krishna:'😭

pratigya:'please ro maat....😭'she wiped his tears.

pratigya:'ab jalti se teek ho jao....😭'

pratigya:'mai din raat aap ki sewa karun ge...meri jaan laga tunge...aap zaroor teek ho jawo gay...😭'
krishna:'😭

pratigya:'aap ne much se shaadi karne ka wada kiya hai na?.....😭😊'

krishna:'😭

pratigya:'wada nebha na hai na aap ko?....😭😊'
krishna:😭
pratigya:wada nebha ne kay leyeh aap ko jalti se teek hona hai...hai na?😭😊'
pratigya:'aapne muchse maafi maangi thi na? ...😭😊'
krishna:'😭
pratigya:'aap ko mai tab maaf karun ki, jab aap firse apni zubaan se maafi maango gay...😭'
krishna:'😭
pratigya:'maafi chahi yeh na aapko?...😭'
krishna:'😭
pratigya:'tho aap ko jalse jal bolna hai...haina?...rona roko....smile at me...that dimple wala smile...😭😊'she touched his cheek with care.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: zash_LubUKriYa

Shumi dii....azi kutty😊...

im back!!!! me 2 backπŸ˜‰
hru?ur kids? good good hru?πŸ˜ƒ
first of all rlllly sorry for the late comments on the chaps...i didnt comment on ur last updates i know..but its not because i didnt lyk it... i was away from my house..but i was keeping up with ur updates regularly thru my mob...the problem is that i cant type long comments on mob..hope u understand....sure i do understand no worry 😊...n i must tell u....IM OUT OF WORDS!!!!!!!wat a story!!!!highly electrifying!!! THANK U πŸ˜ƒn u r updating every day....so i have to tell u everything which i feel from chap 7..dont mind if it is long.......not at all...in fact it is my pleasure to readπŸ˜ƒ
nw coming to chap 7 n 8....
hmm....KriYa started to feel for each other......n awwwww😍😍😍😍..wat a cute KriYa scene...esp "good posture for romance"... hahaha...πŸ˜†.but y didnt that happen? arey yaar tum tho har waqt HAPPENING mai hi atki raha thi ho...🀣everything was in favour na?😳i knw i knw.its too early.....enna panrath....ye dil maange more..πŸ˜³πŸ˜‰...yaar dil ko khaboooooo mai rakho...😊it was hilllllarious!!!!!!!!!!🀣🀣🀣🀣...poor prats.........being fooled.🀣🀣..n krishna is toooooooo naughty!!😳😳...he was smart tooπŸ˜‰
but it was so cute..i can feel everything evn nw........u r my mind reader......i was jz wanting for a KriYa scene..(which i always want....πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³)... aw....finally....but still nothing HAPPEND na? lolπŸ˜†πŸ˜‰
n angad eyeing prats?hmm....behooda😑
the part which i lykd most in chap 9 was this.....
it made him realized that anitha who was from a high society to whom he gave equal status tried to poison him, in fact put him in death track just because he ditched her only once.but pratigya ???? he threw her out of his club brutally that too during night time because she does not look rich and attractive....continuously found chance to degrade and humiliate her for no valid reason.
but pratigya!....in spite of all his humiliation she did not leave him alone when he was not conscious, when he was in need of some ones support. she took him all the way, all alone and drop him at his house door which is not at all a easy job.he realized that pratigya was right 'clause doesn't come with look and dress...clause lies in character...clause lies in ones altruistic and authenticity, genuineness and simplicity....people should not be estimated with their money and makeup.it is their mind and kind heart which makes them attractive and more beautiful. in that way pratigya is CLASSIC!...'
n this.....
krishna:' for the past one week i was trying to find outπŸ˜•...i checked almost all the on line dictionaries but could not find the meaning of it.
pratigya:'which word sir?πŸ˜•...'she looked at him thinking in her mind ' 'issa kya word hai which he can not find the meaning of it?πŸ˜• wo bhi on line dictionaries par!πŸ˜•...'
krishna:'behooda!...πŸ˜›...πŸ˜‰'
🀣🀣🀣🀣....
THANK U SOOOO MUCH FOR LIKING THAT PART AZI πŸ˜›
so krishna shifted pratigya's cabin to his.....cant take his eyes off her..but still confused about his feelings towards her....😳kya baat hai!!!...wahi tho!Embarrassed
n prats scored 98%...good gng!!!!!!!!!!! very good going...and krish 60 phew!πŸ˜†
n chap 10
🀣🀣🀣🀣
Krishna tooooo jealous of Angad....🀣🀣🀣..poor angad..got transferred for that.....with promotion...lol
n pratigya going to resign?😲 she can not work with that hot man that too inside a closed cabin....πŸ˜†
pratigya......you can't leave me like this and goπŸ’”...never.i have 30 days in hand.if a person from a cave can bring down the twin tower to ground level in seconds, i can do wonders with 30 days.... solid 30 days

woww!!!!golden words!! THANKS AGAIN DEARπŸ˜ƒ
n chap 11.
it was cute too.....esp the loves me loves me not part..too kiddish but yaa..soooo cute...yep...i love to play that πŸ˜‰
n i felt rlllly sad for Krishna ....wen he asked "wapas aaoge na"....i felt a twinge somewhere at my heart.....beechara...Ouch
grrr ....this Sax are senseles people!!!!!!!nothing to say about them...they are like that...just neglect them...Ouch...but i lyked the haveli's pic more.......i will post the interior decoration of the haveli when krish vist pratigyaπŸ˜‰
n chap 12.
the engagement scene was hillarious!!!!!! LOL πŸ˜†oops sorry.thats wat i felt....with improper size ring n prats feeling weird..plus to add salt,rolli's comments.....i quite enjoyed it......thanks πŸ˜ƒ
ohh!!!!krishna knew about prats engagement!!!!!!!!!!he is rllly pissed off i think.....exactly...zor ka jhatka!
Chap 13
oh!so nw Krish is avoiding Prats na?best medicine to infuriate the feelings.....poor guy,dont knw that it would only increase his pain? that is what happenedOuch
n regarding part 14 n 15........
IT WAS A BLAST!!!!!!!!!i was petrified after reading it!!!!! THANKS πŸ˜ƒthough i knew that this is gonna happen(u knw hw do i knw..πŸ˜‰...i know betaπŸ˜‰).....but wat i never expected was that it will be in such a situation....woh bhi itni jaldi!!!!!! jaldi!🀣🀣🀣🀣...shub kaam mai thayri kyun?...🀣🀣🀣🀣while i was reading from start i thought,hw this is gonna happen if Krishna is so nice to her.....but this was totally unexpected!!!!!!!! oh!Shocked good that u did not guess it before handπŸ˜†
i can understand Krishna's feelings at that tym.its jz outburst of his emotions n anger.....(dont throw chappals at me..no no...u r very right...🀣🀣🀣🀣)im not supporting him.infact......for the first tym,i hated Krishna to the core..got angry on him so that i cant forgive him..TCH!πŸ˜†..no girl can forgive.....but his confession made a twinge agn in me...n yaa..i cannot hate him for long. yaar!Confused...i am confused...hate krishna or love krishna?Confused
superb di!!!u made us lub n hate him at the same time!!!!!!! oh! i see...weird na? i bow my head infront of u....lub youπŸ˜ƒπŸ€—
Pratigya-the girl hu made krishna cry for the first tym.......truly said. thanks lubd Shakti-krishna convo. thanks.wat a lubaly bro he is!!! ...unlike in the serial...in the serial he sucksOuch
n the train scene was so heart wrenching...finally K confessed....running confession betaπŸ˜†
n OMG!!!!!!!K gonna die??????????NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!i knw u wont do that....but dnt put him under coma!!!!!😭😭....lol...πŸ˜†
im impatiently waiting for watz gonna happen....jaldi update karo na????????????? updatedπŸ˜†
n this is for ur blast update!!!
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oh!iit was too long i think....thanks for that πŸ˜ƒhope u dont feel asleep reading this..no wayπŸ˜ƒ..after all i have to tell about all chaps na? wahi thoπŸ˜›
lub u loads lub u 2πŸ˜ƒ
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will back to u soonπŸ˜ƒ
Edited by shumi. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: CBrocks

hey shumi di.....really nice updates...thanks dear πŸ˜ƒ.and chapter 13 was pretty intense..beautifully written and explainedd..thanks again πŸ˜ƒ.update soooonnn:) updated πŸ˜‰

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Posted: 14 years ago
hi dear...new part updatedπŸ˜‰
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: KriYa_life

Ehhh!! Di.. Capsule A cutie pie ??? Kya di tumho bhi na..

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Posted: 14 years ago
Yuppiee , i m d lucky one to comment first. Btw Helloooo di, rocking chap... My Krishu is on bed, motionless - can't see him lyk dat, di get him well soon.... Btw, it will b gr8 to see P looking after K, wow can't wait.... P is a real sweet heart, she forgot her own pain for K and thank God shakhti is not a bell budhi in d ff as he is in d serial. Update jaldi karbo.... Loveeee di and Take Care...
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It was a treat to read this chap...and as i am an incurable romantic i loved this part!😳. heartwarming and heartwrenching! I was charmed by Prat's character it was so cute to see her as a nurseπŸ˜‰.... she was so tender with Krish.. constantly reassuring him it was an accident! and when she said "i love you" it was so intense...with deep passion... Great Scene! i bursts in tears when Krish was crying.. it shows his soul is hurt! I have no doubt that this is true love Shumi Ji! i also admire Rolli and Shakti a lot ... but is Chandu old ? bcoz Shakti said Chandu Kaka! i hope to see Krish much better in the next chap with plenty of Kriya scenes!
Here too we have Apollo hospital in Mauritius and my brother-in-law who is a doctor works there! Please update soon Shumi Ji! Loads of hugs from me!β­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
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Shumi diiii........
πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
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this is wat in my mind after reading part 16!!!!nothing to say....coz it was too heavy for me..😭😭..u knw im too soft hearted..n after reading chap 16,i burst out in to tears...dont think that its my foolishness to cry at a fiction....but ur ffs r always close to my heart...for the third time,i cudnt hold back my tears...each n every word went straight thru my heart.....i want to press like button a million tyms...but wat to do?it is permited only once.
i rlly lykd the bond between Pratigya n Rolli....it was good that she didnt hide anything from Rolli.
i was shocked to know that K went to partial coma...but anyhow,he can feel everything na?
i felt a strong pain while reading Prats' agony for Krishna....n it made more piercing wen i read the Kriya part....it was soooooo heartwrenching to read..my sight got blurred many times...im reading it agn n agn..truly u r a queen in writing,,seriously i dont get words to praise u...instead i want to give u a rlllly tight hug if u wer nearer....
i always say that krishna is a gem.but today i wish to say that pratigya is a gem!!!!!she forgave him easily..its a great thing from her....n i lubd the way she confessed to krishna n tears coming from his eyes.....if this is not true lub,then wat else is?
nw prats wil be taking care of krishna 24*7 na?i hope krishna get well soon....
ha,forgot to tell...shakti was truly a wonderful bro...it was so nice of him to allow pratigya to take care of krishna...
im dying to read wat happens next....actually im frequently checking the forum since morning for ur update...
jaldi update karo na?
lub u loads
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Edited by zash_LubUKriYa - 14 years ago
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Hi Shumi di as usual awesome chap......n yes i do love Krishna a lot even if he is bad or gud.....being a die hard Krishna(Arhaan) fan it was heart renching 2 c Krishna's state in chap 16......😭😭😭😭
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