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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: roshna1020

nice chp shumi dii..😳 thanks dear 😃wen rolli was n need prats stood by her .... nice 2 see tat roli also stood by her .👏... once pratigya was standing by her do u remember ?they are true friends 😃i thought prats will not forgive him so soon.....she loves him...more over he was already punished by god ...so she forgive him😃 ny ways loved prats heart 2 heart talk & express her feelings n front of him.....thanks 😃 happy 2 know tat he can feel her ...............it was the best scene 👍🏼 thanks again 😃24 / 7 prats will be tkeg care of him wow..🥳....me to happy .waiting for the next update.....😊 will update soon😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mushiroxx

shumi.......🤗 u made it all well.....🤗 thanks mushi 🤗 pratz is such a sweetie-pie.she forgave krish so easily.....😊 yaar she loves him and he was already punished by god...so she forgave him 😃krish is crying..... hope he gets well soon....sure😊.waiting eagerly for kriya confrontation.....😛 yep 😃ur superb sis.......👏👏👏

u 2 dear 🤗lub u lots....😃 lub u 2😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: KriYa_life

Im Not First... no worry yaar...first or the last ur comments r the best😃Di I Was so engrossed in Kaisa hai bandhan dat I failed 2 check it. lol...how many times u will read that?😃 thank u for loving my ff to that extant....it was a honour to my ff 😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ninita

Hi akka.....hi chellam 😃i read 4m chp11-16 2day,waz shockd 2 see Pratigya's condition wen krishna forced himself on her i thought she vil b n coma but krishna s n coma...ulta hogaya na...😆 nw,m eagerly waiting 2 c Pratigya taking care of Krishna.....wow u r updating evryday...tantu😃...u r welcome dear 😃.u r really a biiiiggggg ⭐️...if i am a star my readers are moon for me...😃nw dis s 4 u👏......luv u...tak care. u 2..tata..bye bye...😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aleena1

Shummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii di😆🤗

aleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeenaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa 🤗😆
Wow what an emotional chapter.....thanks😃... reminds me of the film anjaam........ where madhuri nursed shahrukh back to health but tragedy strikes and they both end up dead😆🤣 girrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr😡...
I hope this doesnt follow that storyline😆😆 yaar kriya will never die😛😆 shub shub bol...behoodi
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WOnderful update hun....👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
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keep it up👍🏼
update jaldi jaldi.....😃😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: premprem1

OMG... that was such a nicee chapter.. LOVING IT ..thanks prem 😛 just update soon.... make krishna talk.. so that he can tell her that he loves her...sure sure😃... and then hopefully we will be able to see some kriya scenes...exactly,...😉.

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Posted: 14 years ago
part-17
singh house:
even though for pratigya separate room was given she spend all her time in krishna's room in taking care of him. during night time she slept on the couch in one side of his room.by her continuous care and medical treatment there were slight changes in krishna's condition.his pale face started looking fresh, his eyes stopped shedding tears, when ever he see pratigya his lips slightly twisted as a action of smile.
one fine day around 3pm.
pratigya was sitting on his bed beside krishna and reading a religious book loudly for him which he never read before.even though he don't understand any thing ,he was listening carefully to her.he likes to hear her voice,he found a unknown peace from her voice.he liked to see her cute lip movement and face expression while she was reading.his eyes hooked on to her.she closed the book and looked at him.
pratigya:'issa kya thayk rahay ho...?😃'

krishna:...😊 his lips little bit moved as a sign of smile.

pratigya:'umm....muchay pata hai...you are thinking about me...😃'

krishna:....😃his smile became wide.

pratigya:'see!...i know....😃'she said looking at his smile.

pratigya:'...tho...thay kho muchay😊...look at me...😃'she slightly leaned back and move away from him.

krishna:😊...he was looking at her.
pratigya:'....ether...thay kho...😃'she got down from the bed.

krishna:....still looking at her.

pratigya:'....muchay thayko...😃'she slowly moved away from his bed.

krishna:....he followed her with his eyes.

pratigya'... yahaan thay kho...muchay...😃'she moved around the bed step by step with her back ward steps. krishna's eyes followed her.slowly she moved from his left side to right side of his bed.

krishna:....he too followed her with his eyes from left side to right side.

pratigya:'...look at me...this..side...yahaan...😃'she snapped her fingers. she was standing on the extreme right side of his bed.

krishna....he followed her with his eyes,unknowing he turned his neck from left to right and caught her with his eyes.

pratigya:'wooo😛...you can turn your neck....👏'pratigya jumped with joy and sat beside him.

krishna:😃...smiled at her.

pratigya:'...i am so happy...i am so..happy😭...you are improving...'she said with tears glittering in her eyes.

yet another day:
she was sitting on his bed and telling some jocks to him to recreate him.

pratigya:'once a teacher asked his student...😊
teacher:'yeah kitab kis ki hai?😃'
student:'sir kagaj ki...😊'
teached 'yeh tho muchay bhI pata hai...😡'
student:'sir....fir muchchay puchh kyun rahay ho...?😕'

krishna:😊...gave a dimple smile.

pratigya:'achcha laga?...😃'

krishna:Tongue..he gave a wide smile showing his messed up teeth.
next day:
she was trying to make him move his fingers.she sat beside his right hand.kept her palm on the bed very close to his fingers.they are only centimeter apart.

pratigya:'let us play chua chye game😛...chuo...muchay...😃'she said looking at his fingers.

krishna:'😊... he looked at her fingers.

pratigya:'...chuo...touch my fingers...😃'
krishna:😊...he looked at her face.

pratigya:'...come on try...'she moved her finger one millimeter towards his fingers to encourage him.

krishna:😊...he tried to move his fingers.but could not.

krishna:😔...showed his sad and sorry face to her.
pratigya:' aur tho da try karao... you can ...😊'

krishna:....he tried but could not move.
pratigya:'try...😃'
krishna:...he could not

pratigya took his right palm in to her left palm.she slide all her fingers in between his respective finger gaps and hold her palm with his palm.

pratigya:'you too hold me....grip your hold...😃'she said looking at his stiff fingers.
krishna:...he tried to bend his fingers to hold her but failed.tried again but could not hold her hand with strength. his fingers showed slight shivering moment.
after a long try pratigya slightly leaned and gently press her lips on his fingers... kissed his fingers! ...which were locked with her fingers... her first kiss to krishna!...soon she felt a force in his hold. yes...he gripped his hold.he did it!

pratigya:😛 😛 excited to feel his grip.when she under stood the reason behind his grip, she gave false angry look to him.

pratigya:'..badmaash...😡😛'

krishna:....he gave a naughtiest smile and looked tired of his hand exercise.
fine let me tell you one more joke.

'ek baar ek ladka samosa ka beech ka aalu ko kha raha tha aur bahar ke hisse ko phek raha tha.dushra dost usse poocha ' tum samose ke sirf aalu ko kyun kha rahay ho..?😕'

ussne kaha,'doctor ne muchay bahar ke chejo ko khane se mana kiya hai...😡'
krishna:😃
pratigya:😆 😭...'externally she laughed for him at the same time internally she cried for him.

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Posted: 14 years ago

PART-18


rolli's school mid term exams were going on .she was very busy with her school exams, paper correction, report cart and other work.a week later rolli found time to visit to singh house.when she came to singh house pratigya and shakti were trying to make krishna to lean on the back side of the bed and sit.pratigya kept his legs stretched, gave support to his back and head with the soft pillows.krishna's head was free from bandage.

rolli:' hi pratigya...how is he now..?....😊'she came in to his bed room
rolli:'he looks better😊...'she said looking at his bandage free head and smiling face.
after making him sit comfortably pratigya turned towards rolli and hugged her.

pratigya:'i miss you rolli....🤗'

rolli:'i am sorry... i was busy with exams...🤗'

rolli:'par tum kyun ithni pathli ho gaye ho...?😲'she looked at pratigya from top to bottom and said.

pratigya:'no...i am fine...'

rolli:'shakti ...are you people giving proper food for pratigya ?😡😲'
shakti:

rolli:'she is not your servant and she is here just to for krishna...Angry'she said with anger.

shakti :'what are you saying?😕.....we provide her the best food...'
by then chandu kaka brought tea for rolli and pratigya.chandu kaka is the eldest person of singh house, working as a cook from krishna's childhood. neither krishna nor shakti treated him as servant. he is like one of their family member.

shakti :'chandu kaka...tum pratigya ko waqt par khana day thay ho ya nahi...?😡'
chandu kaka:'shakti beta...aap log ko khana lagane kay pehe le pratigya ji ko khana bhayj day tha hun...par unhone teek se nahi khathay hain...waaps isa hi bhaj day thay hain...'

rolli:'issa kyun pratigya...?😡'
krishna:😭...he was listening to their conversation with pain filled heart and his eyes filled with tears.

pratigya:'no..i don't feel like eating...😔'

rolli:'look at krishna...he is crying...'pratigya turned towards him and saw tears making the way on his cheeks.rolli went and wiped his tears.

rolli:'if you are not going to take care of yourself i am not going to allow you to stay here...😡'

pratigya:'please don't do that rolli...you can not do to me like that...'
rolli:'😊tho... next time when i come i would like to see you healthy....😃'
pratigya:😃....both of them sat on the bed beside krishna and had the tea...shakti left them alone and went to his room.
pratigya:'it remains our hostel days rolli...😊' she said while sitting on the bed and drinking tea.

rolli:'true...i miss you a lot...'😔

pratigya:'rolli mai thay ri har ek baat maan thi hun.tu meri ek baat maan le...tu hostel chodthay...go to your dad...live with your family...'

rolli:' family! 😆...i will try atleast for your sake😊...' they spend good time together.

that day night around 9 pm pratigya was sitting on krishna's bed and talking to him.

pratigya:'aap ko pata hai? mere ghar par kun kun raha thay hai...? 😊mere papa , mummy , bhaiya, bhabhi, aur lucky ...aur ghunti laal bhi😛'

krishna:😛....he was leaning on the back of the bed and listening to her interestingly.chandu kaka brought dinner for pratigya and kept it in krishna's room.

pratigya:'chandu kaka inn ka diet bhi la lo...😊'she told him to bring liquid diet for krishna.

in few minutes chandu brought chicken soup in a bowl for krishna.krishna was leaning on the back of the bed, stretching his leg and sitting.she placed a napkin on his chest around his neck ,took little soup in a spoon from the bowl and try to feed him.

krishna:😒...he turned his face.

pratigya:'thoda sa please....😊'she forced him.

krishna:....he did not open his mouth.kept his lips tight.

pratigya:'why you are not drinking...Confused? it is dinner time...aap ko dawaaye bhi khani hai...'she was confused.

krishna:😔...he turned his face looked at the food plate kept for pratigya.pratigya followed his sight and end up on her food plate.

pratigya:'oh!😲...do you want to eat that food...?😕'she went and brought her food plate.

pratigya:...but you are not suppose to eat this food...'she kept the plate on the bed beside his hand.

krishna:😔...he tried to touch the plate with his fingers.pratigya saw him trying to move his hand.
pratigya:'kya chahi yeah aap ko...?😕'she took his hand and kept it on the plate to know what he want.few food stuff stick on to his fingers.she hold his hand and try to feed that food stuff to him.again he turned his face as a sign of don't want to eat.

pratigya:'i don't under stand...what do you want?...😕'she looked at him worried.

krishna:....he slowly lifted his hand close to pratigya's face...towards her mouth ... and try to feed the food stuff sticking to his fingers.

pratigya:'..god!!!!😲 😭 😭......'tears burst out from her eyes and rolled down on her cheek.now she understood that he wants her to eat her food first.she hold his wrist and ate the few food stuff from his fingers and wiped his fingers with her dupatta.

krishna:...with the same hand he tried to wipe her tears.pratigya move forward and hold his hand with her chest tightly and cried.
pratigya:'😭...i can't see you any more like this...😭....aap jalthi se teek ho jao....😭'she cried.
krishna:


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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi di , whats up! Yday night ma net speed was vry slow and I was also busy studying, so I quickly read ur chaps and reserved to b d first one to comment (sry could'nt comment yday)... Coming to chaps , fabulously done... Ah loved al kriya moments, but m greedy for more... Do update soon, m waiting.... God bless
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