Dosa's 1st FF.... Khabi na khabi - SEE P 24 - Page 10

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Originally posted by: RoKa PraNeev

Part2:

Wowwwwwww...Love At First Sight!!!This is what happened wid pratigya here....ryt???she is mersmerised by my jaaaaaaaaan...ahem ahem..i mean if dat stranger is krishna...it shud be krishna orelse rats hsudnt have felt like dis....i know dii..now u wud be thinking dat have i gone mad???hahah...i'm only asking the questions n i'm only answering dem...ehhehehe...well...who wouldn't be mersmerised by him????

I lubd da way how u expressed pratigya's feelings for that stranger!!

but i have one coplaint dii...the parts r very short...i dnt maybe i'm feeling dat the parts r short...bcoz i'm used to reading longgg lonnnng FF's by shumi dii...n others in Kasturi Forum!!😛👏

heading for next part!

Nechu

yes the 2nd part was a little short. I get to a mystery point - and then like to leave it at that to keep you guys guessing. 😆 buh yeh will try do longer ones - it's just on time, uh will deffo do longer. 3rd part is a lil longer. 😃

Part3:

Originally posted by: RoKa PraNeev

Part3:

woaaaaaaaaaaaaoooaaaaaaaaaaah....nychhhhhhhhhhhh parttt...now wat has krishu to do wid angad....dreaming abt angad...??is angad his bro who has died or may be his best friend who had died???just my thoughts!!

wowwwwwwww...just lubd da way how kriya r feeling for each other...n yes....dey r gonna meet again...em waitin for dat1!!

Pls uodate the next part soon dii!!

Nechu

Thanks a lot - Angaad - i haven't decided concretely wot am gonna do wid him for sure - but i have diff ideas. i would like to knw from the readers - do they wanna see this ff as supernatural ff or just normal.

itni jaldi update kardiya..........good .let me read then i'll commentt

hi surbhiiiiiiiiiii....ohh fate do we have yaar...wen u cum online...it will be time for me to go offline...erghhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Originally posted by: RoKa PraNeev

hi surbhiiiiiiiiiii....ohh fate do we have yaar...wen u cum online...it will be time for me to go offline...erghhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Originally posted by: surbhisachwani

hi nechu..i misss u soo muchhhhhhhh yaar .............i knowww yaar ..very unfortumateeee .............next time will decide and come online togethr.........by the for how much longg r u here rite nowww

Originally posted by: RoKa PraNeev

ok dear...done!!

i dnt know...i myt leave naytime...i signed off from FB!!

Originally posted by: surbhisachwani

yesss .......atleast saath mein chaat karne ka time toh milegaa😛................okkk ..thanks for the luvly comments on fb 😳 😛

very nice, keep it up!!!!!!:D