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aleena1

@aleena1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#111

Awesome update...👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

loved how you described every detail.........😊

ooooh can we have a supernatural story??????????? plZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ😃😃😃

My attempts at writing horror stories went down the drain😆😆😆 im really bad at it.😆...... plzzz do continue😃😃

eagerly waiting for next update........... keep it up👍🏼

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elle45

@elle45

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Posted: 14 years ago

#112

👏👏👏 Hey Carisma, sorry I was busy in the past few days and could take out time only now to read your FF, and I must say it's AMAZING!!! 👏👍🏼 You are MashAllah such a talented person, with all your EAs and your VMs, your Mirch Masala newsletter and now this.

Very well written, I must say, and if you really want to, I say, go ahead and become a novelist. 😃

Thanks for updating 4 chapters so quickly. Really looking forward to more. I like how Prats is obsessed with Krishna for a change 😆 And I'm also wondering why Roli has such a prominent role? 😕 Hmm, will wait for that. Plus, your dislike for Arushi is very much evident 😆, though I find it sad that she's mentally challenged

Btw, I'm not very much into supernatural/paranormal type romances, I like stories with normal ppl more. But if you have some really good ideas for the S/P track, then go ahead with it. I'll read your FF in both conditions. 😊

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The Witch

@carisma2

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Posted: 14 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: aleena1

Awesome update...👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

loved how you described every detail.........😊

ooooh can we have a supernatural story??????????? plZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ😃😃😃

My attempts at writing horror stories went down the drain😆😆😆 im really bad at it.😆...... plzzz do continue😃😃

eagerly waiting for next update........... keep it up👍🏼

thanks a lot aleena - i'm glad u said supernatural, i love horror and supernatural books and films, on the odd occassions i read humorous ones. i think i'd be more comfy writing supernatural aswell.

And thanks for the lovely compliments.

MERRY X-MAS TO U ASWELL. Have a nice one. I Wanted to go tmk 2mrw, but today we were snowed in and 2mrw odeon closed. 😭

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The Witch

@carisma2

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Posted: 14 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: elle45
👏👏👏 Hey Carisma, sorry I was busy in the past few days and could take out time only now to read your FF, and I must say it's AMAZING!!! 👏👍🏼 You are MashAllah such a talented person, with all your EAs and your VMs, your Mirch Masala newsletter and now this.

Very well written, I must say, and if you really want to, I say, go ahead and become a novelist. 😃

Thanks for updating 4 chapters so quickly. Really looking forward to more. I like how Prats is obsessed with Krishna for a change 😆 And I'm also wondering why Roli has such a prominent role? 😕 Hmm, will wait for that. Plus, your dislike for Arushi is very much evident 😆, though I find it sad that she's mentally challenged

Btw, I'm not very much into supernatural/paranormal type romances, I like stories with normal ppl more. But if you have some really good ideas for the S/P track, then go ahead with it. I'll read your FF in both conditions. 😊

THANK YOU, For such a nice heart warming post. you give me more confidence. I like to try and keep you guys entertained.

Roli for now - is a means of Pratigya getting out of the house so she can see her mr, buh when it all gets on track - just like the cv's i'll ditch her.

Coming to Arushi - She is a means of a reason for the SAXENA'S being sad and pareshan. THE CV'S never gave them a good reason - so I gave them arushi. Buh don't worry i won't be cruel.

For me there was no way of showing ARUSHI as a loving sister to Pratz give and take her recent behaviour, so I did something diff for her. Well that's what I know abt these characters what I will do.

Thanks a lot for your support. and pls giving feedback. 😃

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aleena1

@aleena1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: carisma2
thanks a lot aleena - i'm glad u said supernatural, i love horror and supernatural books and films, on the odd occassions i read humorous ones. i think i'd be more comfy writing supernatural aswell.
And thanks for the lovely compliments.

MERRY X-MAS TO U ASWELL. Have a nice one. I Wanted to go tmk 2mrw, but today we were snowed in and 2mrw odeon closed. 😭

I love supernatural/horror stuff not into romantic stuff...... I suggest that you should write something which you are comfortable in😊😊

Why would you go to work on x-mas day????? I would never go (any excuse to skip work🤣)........ just chill and relax put your feet up and have a hot coco in front of the fire in your jammies........ aaaaah bliss😆

hmmm any good movies at odeon????? ooh and any shopping do before new yrs before the VAT goes up.... the sales will start boxing day😆

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Mita

@Mitu_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#116

I 'M SORRY CARISMA ,I DID NOT REPL BECAUSE WAS BUSY .

I LOVED THE UPDATES AND I ENJOYED AFTER A BIG EXAM ..

HOPE NEXT WEEK KRISH START WORKING AND PRAT & KRISH GO TO CIVIL LINE & ENJOY LOVELY MOMENTS ..😉

THANKS

MITALY

CARIS THANKS FOR YT VM I DID NOT KNOW I LOVED IT SO I THOGHT , U KNOW.

THANKS DEAR, KEEP IT UP WE WILL ENJOY THIS HOLIDAYS EVER ,,,..😛😛

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The Witch

@carisma2

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Posted: 14 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: aleena1

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shahbara

@shahbara

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#118

Hats off to you for this mindblowing part Carisma! and Sorry for this late reply... too busy these days ..to be honest i would personally prefer a normal story as i am a die hard romantic!😉 also it would suit the story so well... but whatever decision you make will always turn out Awesome... so all the best!😃 Please update soon!👍🏼

Edited by shefads - 14 years ago

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Kriya_RoKa luvr

@ArjaAddict

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Posted: 14 years ago

#119

dii..plss update soon...waiting to read it!!!

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The Witch

@carisma2

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: mitalpn

I 'M SORRY CARISMA ,I DID NOT REPL BECAUSE WAS BUSY .

I LOVED THE UPDATES AND I ENJOYED AFTER A BIG EXAM ..

HOPE NEXT WEEK KRISH START WORKING AND PRAT & KRISH GO TO CIVIL LINE & ENJOY LOVELY MOMENTS ..😉

THANKS

MITALY

CARIS THANKS FOR YT VM I DID NOT KNOW I LOVED IT SO I THOGHT , U KNOW.

THANKS DEAR, KEEP IT UP WE WILL ENJOY THIS HOLIDAYS EVER ,,,..😛😛

THANK YOU VERY MUCH - LOVELY CARD -Have a nice day.

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