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Posted: 14 years ago
#31

Brillant Chapter!... Now i'm pretty sure Krishna is innocent ! Someone is trying to trap him!!!!!! maybe Meher's boy-friend bcoz yes.. looks like Meher loves someone else! and he is a very posessive lover! ....so in order to seek revenge against Meher for breaking off their relationship he killed her😲..... guess it's the guy on the bike! Poor Prat misunderstanding Krishna! Anyway looking forward to the next part!ā­ļøā­ļøā­ļøā­ļøā­ļø

Edited by shefads - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
part 8
After a few days...
Pratigya goes to collegeKrishna runs to her:Pratigya!
She stares at him.
K:I missed you a lot.I came to know about Meher.I was shocked.
She is rough:Shock?Why?As if you don't know anything.
K:Pratigya..why are you talking like this?
She:Where is the chain i gave you?Your neck is empty.
K:I'm sorry .On the way,somebody snatched it from my neck.I could'nt go behind him as i was in a hurry to go.
She:You are good at cooking stories.
K:Pratigya!
She:I know everything.I found the chain near Meher's body.
She took the chain from her bag and throws it at his face.It falls down.
He is shocked:How did it reach there?
She:You are acting as if you don't know anything.
K:What are you saying?
P:Poor Meher.She forgot her past and decided to start a new life with Preet.But..but you killed her.
He is shocked:What?
P:You only killed Meher.While attacking Meher,your chain fell down.God did that purposefully so that the killer will be exposed.
He is shocked:Are you crazy?You are out of sense.
P:I'm in my sense.I know the truth.You are the killer.
K:Why should i kill Meher?
P:Because you were scared whether Meher will expose you.If you get exposed you won't get me.
K:What are you saying?
Pr:You were Meher's boyfriend.
He is shocked:Me?What nonsense!
P:She had told me that she met her boyfriend during a music concert.She was scared whether her boyfriend will kill her.I found your chain near her body.It proves that you were her boyfriend.He is...
K:No...she met her boyfriend during my music concert.But it's not me.
P:No,i don't want to hear any tall tales from you.Enough.I can file a case against you.But i'm not doing that now,because my parents are depressed.Case and court will make them more weaker.Now onwards there is no relation between us.
He is shocked.
He pulls her towards him.
K:Look at my eyes.Do you think that i killed Meher?
She looks at his eyes.She becomes weak.Tears fall down.She moves back.
P:No more drama krishna..
K:Pratigya!Please try to understand me.
She:Get lost.
She goes away...He weeps.He takes the chain from the floor.

After a few months...
The phone is ringing.Pratigya picks up the phone.
"Pratigya ..i'm krishna!"
P:Krishna?Why did you call me?Why do you want to desturb me?
He:I heard that you are engaged to Swayam Garewal.
P:Yes.
He:Please don't get married to him.Please don't leave me.
P:Stop it .I will marry him.
He:You are doing a mistake by marrying him.
P:That mistake will not be worse than loving you.I will marry Swayam.
He:I will not allow this wedding to take place.
He is determined.

Pratigya gets married to swayam.
She is sitting on the bed as a bride.Her husband Swayam enters the room and sits besides her.He looks at her with romantic eyes.Suddenly somebody knocks at the door.
Swayam gets irritated:Who has come to desturb us?
He opens the door.That was Krishna.Swayam and pratigya are shocked.
S:Krishna?Why are you here?
Krishna beats him heavily.Pratigya cries loudly.

The flashback is over.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
It was a very nice chp.Oh my!Krishna should not have hit Pratigya's husband!Has he gone mad?!Looking forward to the next chp😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice Chapter! i think prat should have listened to krish once before her wedding coz he looks genuinely sincere and innocent! Wonder if Swayam was not Meher ex boy-friend! Well, i don't trust him ! and looks like krish also knows him too well !! Waiting for the next part! ā­ļøā­ļøā­ļøā­ļøā­ļø

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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow!!!!!!!!!!!superb!!!!!!!!!!
it was rllllllly an unexpected twist.......šŸ‘...šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘seems lyk Swayam is Meher's boyfriend........n i think Krishna is innocent.......Pratigya did a great mistake by marrying him......eagerly waiting for ur next update........
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
Jasmine... Aiyya yeh toh aur bhi mast tha... Swayam and Pratigya... nice jodi, Imagine if in reality Krishna sees his babu with sum1 else then.... he will definately kill that person..
jaldi se next part likho... intezaar nahi hota
Edited by KriYa_life - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
very well-written chaps jasmine............loved them.........šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘
i think pratz's husband is meher's killer..........hope krish saves pratz.......😊 looking forward to the next chap......šŸ˜›
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
pt 9
Pratigya's phone rings.She attends the call.
"I'm Doctor Rati.Swayam got up from his bed".
She is surprised:Really?
She rushes to the hospital.Swayam is standing up and smiling at her.
P:You are ok Swayam?
S:Yes Pratigya.
P:I'm so happy.

Ranveer thinks:I'm a professional killer.But i make sure that i kill only devils.Why i feel that Krishna is not a devil?

Krishna has been kidnapped and brought to Ranveer's mansion.
K:Who are you?What do you want?
R:I'm Ranveer,a professional killer who is thirsty for your blood now.
He is shocked:Why do you want to kill me?
R:Because i have been paid money for that.
K:Who paid money?
R:Pratigya.
He is shocked:Pratigya?
R:Yes,because you killed her sister Meher.
K:No...i did'nt.
R:Then who killed her?
K:I don't know.
R:Why did you attack her husband Swayam?That also on the wedding night...
K:He deserved death.But i allowed him to live only because he is Pratigya's husband.Because i love her.
Ranveer is shocked.
R:You both were lovers?Strange!Why are you angry with Swayam?Only because he married Pratigya?
K:No.Swayam is a dirty chap.My sister Palchan is my darling.Once she tried to kill herself.Because her boyfriend deserted her in a harsh manner.Later i realised that her boyfriend was Meher's boyfriend Swayam.So i told Pratigya not to marry him.But she did'nt listen.I became late..so i could'nt stop their wedding.But i could'nt control my anger..Swayam destroyed my sister's life.He cheated Meher.He will spoil Pratigya's life also.So i beat him cruelly.He does'nt deserve any mercy.
Ranveer is shocked.

Swayam is drinking liqour at home.
P:Why are you drinking like this?
S:I'm healthy now.I want to celebrate this occasion.
He drinks too much.
He goes closer to Pratigya.She is nervous.Because for the first time Swayam is becoming intimate with her.
P:What is this Swayam?You are not in your sense now.You drank too much.
She moves away.
S:Where are you going Pratigya?Do you know how much i love you?Do you know what all i did to gain you?Many ladies have entered my life.I deserted everyone including your sister Meher.
She is shocked:What?
S:Meher loved me madly.But it was just a time pass relationship for me.But when i saw you i realised that i'm serious about you.Meher knew that i'm ditching her for you.Before she exposed me to the society,i killed her.
She is shocked:You killed Meher?
S:Yes.I veiled my face and snatched Krishna's chain like a thief.I put it near Meher to make you believe that Krishna killed Meher.Thus you broke up with Krishnaand married me.
She is shocked:That means Krishna is innocent?
S:Krishna...i hate him.His sister Palchan was one of my girlfriends.I left her for you.But that stupid girl tried to commit suicideKrishna who is an emotional fool begged me to marry his sister.I refused to marry her.So he put me into paralysis.
She is shocked.She screams at him:You cheat!You killer!You destroyed many girls' lives.My God!I misunderstood Krishna..i did'nt believe him..i did'nt listen to him.I paid Ranveer to kill Krishna.I don't know if Ranver has killed Krishna or not.
She takes her mobile to contact Ranveer.
Swayam snatches her mobile:What are you doing?You want to tell Ranveer not to kill Krishna?Don't tell..let him kill Krishna.He is an obstacle in our life.
P:Give me the mobile.
S:No.
She moves to the land phone.Swayam pulls her hair.
It is hurting her:Leave my hair.You are hurting me.
S:Because you are disobeying me.
P:I will call him.I have to save Krishna.
He slaps her.
Pratigya does'nt back out.Swayam holds her tightly and tries to squeeze her neck:I'm sorry Pratigya.I love you.But i dont want you to live...if you live you will save Krishna and live happily with him.I will suffer in the jail also.It can't happen.
He squeezes her neck.Somebody pulls Swayam back.He is none other than Krishna.
Pratigya is surprised:Krishna!You are ok?
Swayam attacks Krishna.Somebody stabs Swayam from behind.Krish and Pratigya are shocked.
Edited by jasminerahul - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
JASMINE... I knew that Swayam only killed Meher... finally now KriYa vl unite.. Jaldi se next part likh do. I think its Ranveer who might hav cum...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Omg!What a twist! It was a very well written chp.I guess Ranveer was the one who stabbed Swayam.It's a good thing that the truth came out.Looking forward to the next chp.😊

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