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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
Wow..... nice twist! So Meher is in love ! I guess the lucky guy is krish! Great !! waiting eagerly for the next update!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awwww............sooooooooooooooooooooo cccccccccccccuuuuuuuuuuuttttttttttttttteeeeeeeeeee😍
rain dance sequence.........😳
i loved it................awesome n superb chaps jasmine...............πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
hey new twist in chap 6...........hope that guy is not krish......😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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It was a very nice chp.Oh!Poor Meher,so what if she would've refused,her father should've still asked her.Looking forward to the next chp😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
Greatt!! Hmmm Wonderr What Exactlyy Happend Between KriYa..
Update Soon x
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
Pratigya:You are in love?With whom?Why did'nt you tell dad about it?
Meher:Because my man does'nt want to disclose it now.
P:But you tell me who he is.
M:No Pratigya.I can't.It will hurt him.I don't want that to happen.But i will tell you one thing.I met him during a music concert.
P:Don't worry Meher.You will get your love.

Pratigya meets Krishna.
K:Did the wedding preparations start?
P:No,Meher is not happy about this wedding.She loves someone else.
He is shocked:Oh!
He thinks:I know Meher..you can't leave your love and marry someone else.


Pratigya presents a chain to Krishna.It has a heart shaped pendant where it's written 'Love'.
He is surprised:Heer!What is this?
P:This is my gift for you.You keep it with you.It will remind you of me always.
K:I don't need this chain to remember you.You are always in my heart.But your gift is lovely.
He wears the chain.
She smiles.
He pulls her closer to him with a smile.She is shy.

Meher meets Preet.
P:I was happy when you called me here.That day i was tensed seeing your face expression.I doubted whether you are not happy about this marriage.
M:Your doubt is true.I'm not happy about this marriage.I love someone.
Preet is shocked.He controls his tears.
P:Good luck.I'm not angry with you.You live with him happily.
Meher's eyes are welled up with tears.
M:That is not possible.Because he was cheating me.I realised it very late.He is in love with my sister now.He wants to avoid me and snatch Pratigya from us.
Preet is shocked.
P:Leave it Meher.You forget him and start a new life.
Meher raises her eyes and looks at him.
P:I still love you.
Meher is surprised.
M:But i can't fall in love again.I'm scared.
Preet smiles:All men are not same.
Preet holds her arms:I will not make you upset.
Meher can't believe it.

Pratigya is reading something in her room.Meher enters the room:Pratigya...i want to tell you something.
P:Tell Meher.
M:I have decided to marry Preet.
She is shocked:Then..what about your lover?
M:He is not a good guy.I escaped from him.
She can't believe it.
M:What you said is true.Dad has chosen a nice guy for me.Preet is very nice.
She smiles:I'm so happy for you...
M:But i'm scared whether my boyfriend will kill me.
Pratigya is shocked:What are you saying?
M:He is dangerous.He is after you now.He is scared whether i will tear his mask and block his way...so he won't get you.
P:Who is he?Tell me..
M:He is..
Their mom:Pratigya...let us go to the shop and buy vegetables..it's urgent.Otherwise no lunch.
P:Ok...Meher...We will do shopping and come back.Are you joining us?
M:No.
P:Ok..we will come back soon.Then we will talk.
M:Ok.
P:Bye..


Krishna is walking on the road.His mobile rings.He attends the call.
His mom Nitya:Palchan is in the Lilavati hospital.Very serious.
He is shocked:I'm coming now.
A guy with helmet on the bike comes towards him and snatches his chain.
K:Hey...
He is about to run behind the bike.
K:No,i have to go now to the hospital.
He goes to the hospital.When he reaches the hospital,his parents Nitya and Rakesh come towards him.
K:What happened to Palchan?
N:God heard our prayer.Palchan is out of danger now.
Krish is relieved.

Pratigya and her mom come back home.Pratigya enters Meher's room:Meher!
She is shocked to see Meher lying down bathed with blood.Her stomach has been stabbed with knife by someone.
She screams:Meher!
She touches Meher's face:Meher..
M:Pratigya...
Meher breaths.That was her last breath.Pratigyasees a chain with small pendant lying near Meher.Pratigya is shocked:Oh!This is the chain which i gave Krishna.That means Krishna did this.
She cries.

Pratigya thinks of what Meher told her about her boyfriend.
"I met him during a music concert".
"But i'm scared whether my boyfriend will kill me.He is dangerous.He is after you now.He is scared whether i will tear his mask and block his way...so he won't get you".
She thinks:All her dialogues hint that it is Krishna who dated her?This chain proves the truth.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
Jasmine... ur a ROCKSTAR. So beautiful story.. PART 6 and PART 7 were good. Wonder wat Pratigya vl do now... poor Krishna.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
Chp 7 was awesome.But poor Meher.I guess Krishna was being trapped and he wasn't the one who did it although whatever Meher said kinda pointed out to him.Looking forward to the next chp😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
wowwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!jasmine dr,
it ws mindblowing............jz caught up wit ur update n finished reading all chaps in one go...............full of suspense n kriYa lubstory is soooooooo cute!!!!!!!!!!!!im jzzzzzzzzz lubing it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!nw im much more excited to know hu is Meher,s luv n wat made Prats to hate krishna..i dont think he is a murderer.....is he?neways plzzzzzzzzzzz update soooooooooon!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wowwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!Jasmine dr..........
it ws awsomm!!!!!!!!!jz caught up with ur new FF n read all chaps in one go...........wowwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!its full of twists n suspenses!!!!!!!!!No,Krishna wont be the murderer,he cant............!!!!!!!!i hope so..........plzzzzzzzz update soooooon!!!!!!!!!im dying to read the rest!!!!!!excellent,mindblowing work........Keep going!!!!!!!!πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
Omgg So Someone's Framed Krishna! Hmm Wonder Who It Was..
Update Soon x

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