ff-Always there for you (Kriya)-Update(5/12/10) - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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i'll be posting more over the weekends... as school just started for me
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ooh interesting! coma!!
ive added u to my buddy list, please pm me when you update! :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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brilliant story dear
awesome work
do continue it soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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It was a very nice chp.How sad,I hope Pratigya gets better soon.Looking forward to the next chp😊
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A month has passed, and yet Pratigya didn't wake up from coma. Krishna did not leave Pratigya's side.

Amma, SS, Shakti and Kesar decided to come and visit them, as Krishna has not returned home, sleeping at the hospital.

They walk in, but stop as soon as they see Krishna's glare.

Amma: Krishna beta, how is Pratigya?

Krishna: Stop your acting. All of you planned this. You do not have the right to stay here. Only Kesar bhabi is allowed.

SS: But...

SS stops talking as he sees Krishna's angry glare.

All but Kesar leaves.

Kesar: Krishna jeeju, how is Pratigya?

Krishna: She is in coma. Doctors say that they don't know how long it will take her to come out of coma.

Kesar: Don't worry, your love will wake Pratigya up. I'll stay here for tonight, you go home. You have to take care of
yourself too.

Krishna: Im not leaving my Pratigya, and I don't want to go back to the house that wants to kill my Pratigya.

Just then Arushi, Komal, Adarsh walks in.

Arushi: Jeeju, I agree. You should go and take rest.

Adarsh: Why don't you come to our house?

Krishna: How can I leave my Pratigya?

Komal: Don't worry, me, Arushi and Kesar bhabhi will take care of Pratigya. You go home and sleep properly.

Krishna agreed after everybody kept on pestering him. He told them to call him if anything happens.

With a long stare at Pratigya, Krishna left the hospital with Adarsh.

Precap: I'm Sorry Pratigya.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wonderfull updte it is
i loved it
want another update soon
that too long one
keep it up

Sanu.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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It was a very nice chp.It's a good thing that Krishna didn't let his family (except Kesar di) to stay there.Looking forward to the next chp😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey
pls add me to the pm list
thanks
take care
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice ff........plzzzzzzzzz continue soooooon!!!!!!
cn u plz Pm me?
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey guyz,
im terribly sorry for the late replies. im live in canada, and im in grade 12, one more year till university. so work,assignments, everything pretty hetic.. i'll try my best to do an update tomorrow the earliest

terribly sorry
thnks for ur comments... it is really encouraging!!!!!!

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