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I've been looking for fanfictions here, and most of them are in hindi. I don't speak hindi so I thought i'll make my own ff... Im a die-heart fan of kriya, waiting for them to be together..so here it is... plz i want comments as to how gud/bad it is and suggestions on how i should i improve it... Plz tell me if u want me to continue or not so i'll know.This starts off from the pre-cap of September 3rd, 2010.
Pratigya is told by Amma to go upstairs, and to take her chappals off before she goes. Pratigya starts going up the stairs, meanwhile,
SS: Shakti, you did put oil on the top stairs rit?
Shakti: Yes, I did, that girl is going to slip and fall down the stairs and that would be it!
Amma: Now, once she's gone, Krishna would be mine again!
Krishna who has been walking by, had heard all of this, so he runs after Pratigya, giving SS, Shakti, and Amma a dear shock of their lives.
Krishna: Pratigya, Stop! Don't go upstairs!
Pratigya who doesn't hear him, keeps on walking upstairs, where she slips and comes tumbling down the stairs.
Krishna is left in shock! He is devastated as he runs towards Pratigya! Without a thought, he picks her up, puts her in his jeep and drives to the hospital.
At the hospital
Krishna yells: Doctor! Hurry my wife has fallen down the stairs and is bleeding!
The doctor immediately takes Pratigya in and goes to immediate surgery as she is bleeding from her head.
Meanwhile, Krishna calls the Saxena family and tell them what has happened. He also calls Tunna and Chandru and tells them what has happened. Krishna is stressed out, and the Saxena family has arrived.
Aroshi: Jeeju, is didi alright?? Did the doctors say anything yet?
Krishna: No, they haven't said a thing since I brought her here.
Shyamji: Don't worry beta, be strong, nothing will happen to Pratigya.
At the moment, Chandru and Tunna arrive.
Chandru hesitantly asks: Krishna, I've got to show you something, can I talk to you in private?
Krishna: Are you kidding me? Pratigya is in for surgery!
Chandru: It is about Pratigya Bhabhi.....
Plz tell me how it is, and if u want me to continue it!!
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Pratigya is told by Amma to go upstairs, and to take her chappals off before she goes. Pratigya starts going up the stairs, meanwhile,
SS: Shakti, you did put oil on the top stairs rit?
Shakti: Yes, I did, that girl is going to slip and fall down the stairs and that would be it!
Amma: Now, once she's gone, Krishna would be mine again!
Krishna who has been walking by, had heard all of this, so he runs after Pratigya, giving SS, Shakti, and Amma a dear shock of their lives.
Krishna: Pratigya, Stop! Don't go upstairs!
Pratigya who doesn't hear him, keeps on walking upstairs, where she slips and comes tumbling down the stairs.
Krishna is left in shock! He is devastated as he runs towards Pratigya! Without a thought, he picks her up, puts her in his jeep and drives to the hospital.
At the hospital
Krishna yells: Doctor! Hurry my wife has fallen down the stairs and is bleeding!
The doctor immediately takes Pratigya in and goes to immediate surgery as she is bleeding from her head.
Meanwhile, Krishna calls the Saxena family and tell them what has happened. He also calls Tunna and Chandru and tells them what has happened. Krishna is stressed out, and the Saxena family has arrived.
Aroshi: Jeeju, is didi alright?? Did the doctors say anything yet?
Krishna: No, they haven't said a thing since I brought her here.
Shyamji: Don't worry beta, be strong, nothing will happen to Pratigya.
At the moment, Chandru and Tunna arrive.
Chandru hesitantly asks: Krishna, I've got to show you something, can I talk to you in private?
Krishna: Are you kidding me? Pratigya is in for surgery!
Chandru: It is about Pratigya Bhabhi.....
Plz tell me how it is, and if u want me to continue it!!
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