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Posted: 14 years ago
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It was a very nice chp.It's a good thing tht KriYa made up with each other.Looking forward to the next chp😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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sorry guys for not updating for almost 2 months.. got caught up with school work.. couldn't get time to sit down and write.... here is a very long update.. sorry it hasn't been edited as i have to go out now..





Krishna: OMG! Are you serious! He goes and hugs Adarsh and Komal. I can't believe this!

Pratigya: This is the happiest day of my life!!

The doctor then comes in and tells the family that after a few tests, Pratigya would be able to be discharged the next day. Krishna gets a bit tensed ,but still keeps a smile on his face, nobody notices this except Pratigya, so she decides to ask him later.

Soon after lunch, the Saxena family left and Pratigya and Krishna were lonely. Krishna looks out the window, looking tensed again.

Pratigya: Krishna, Krishna... no response so she yells KRISHNA!!!

Krishna gets out of his trance: uhh... Pratigya, are you alright? Why did you yell, I'm standing right beside you.

Pratigya: Well I've been calling your name for a while, you didn't respond. What is wrong Krishna? You seem tensed? Is there something you are hiding from me?

Krishna: I'm not hiding anything... its just that...

Pratigya: Krishna, in any relationship, it is essential to have trust. In our relationship, at first we did not have trust, but now we have opened up all the miscommunications, we should be able to tell each other everything. Krishna, please tell me what is wrong.

Krishna: Well... we need to find a place to live.

Pratigya gets confused: Why Krishna? What about your house?

Krishna: No Pratigya, we are not going back there. That dreadful place is filled with bad memories. You coming out of coma, is like a new life for me and you. I want us to start a new life.

Pratigya gets tears, she cannot believe its her Krishna that is saying all this. Krishna rushes to Pratigya's side and hugs her.

Krishna: Pratigya, what happened? Are you ok? Is something I said wrong?

Pratigya: I cannot believe you have changed so much. And I'm beginning to like this new Krishna. She adds, blushing a bit.

Krishna understands that she is blushing, so he decides to tease her.

Krishna: Oh my god!!!

Pratigya: What??

Krishna: I did not believe that I would see the day where you would blush because of me!

He exclaims and starts laughing when Pratigya starts attacking him with her fist. Krishna catches her hands and brings her real close to him, their lips only inches away.

Krishna: You look cute when you are blushing. I hope to make you blush more often J

Some of Pratigya's hair strands were in front of her face, so Krishna takes the courtesy to push the behind her ear. Pratigya starts breathing heavily, and closes her eyes. She doesn't know why, but Krishna's touch gives her shivers. Krishna takes the advantage to kiss her eye lids, then her forehead, her nose, her two cheeks, but stops in front of her lips. Pratigya opens her mouth a bit, as if it was invitation for Krishna.

Krishna: Pratigya (in a husky voice and whispers in her ear) don't worry, I won't do anything yet. Till the day you accept that you love me, I will not do anything.

With a smirk, knowing how Pratigya is feeling right now, Krishna gets up, as he knows the nurse would be walking in any moment to give them food. Pratigya was not sure if she understood what Krishna said, as she was still in his trance. The nurse came in to check on Pratigya, she also saw that as soon as she walked in, Pratigya started blushing so much that both her cheeks turned blood red. Krishna looks at this and starts laughing. After the nurse leaves, they decide to talk.

Pratigya: Krishna, why are we going to do? Do you want to go back to my place?

Krishna: No Pratigya, that is not right. I cannot come there and stay. We'll do this. You go back to your house, once I find a job and buy our house, then I'll come back to take you.

Pratigya: No Krishna, I am not going to leave you when you are suffering. I want to be with you. We are starting this new life, I want to start it together.

Krishna hold her hands, and says: I know my sweetheart, hearing this Pratigya blushes, but I want to take care of my princess on my own, and I've vowed that I would not let a single tear drop from your eyes. Till I get a job and I buy a house, you have to stay at your house. I'll start tomorrow looking for a job.

Pratigya: But where would you be staying Krishna?

Krishna: Don't worry, I have Tunna and Chandu. We'll manage.

Pratigya hugs Krishna, Krishna hugs her back.

Pratigya: Please hurry Krishna, I don't know if I can live without you Krishna. I lo....

The nurse comes in, disturbing the two. Krishna is sad, he knows what Pratigya was going to say, but had to let go of her cause of the nurse. Pratigya has a smile on her face.

Nurse: I'm sorry, I just came to give her medicines. With that she gives Pratigya her medicine and quietly whispers to Pratigya, My dear, you have very loving husband, you should be grateful, he did not leave your side while you were in coma. Please take care my child. With a smile, she left the two alone.

Krishna: What did she say?

Pratigya: Ohh, nothing just some girl stuff.

Krishna was confused, but didn't bother, as she was going to say I love you before. He goes to her bed, pulls her on to his lap

Krishna: Sweetheart, you were going to tell me something before we got disturbed. What was it?

Pratigya understands he was going to tease her, so she tries changing the subject.

Pratigya: Since when has my name changed to sweetheart?

Krishna: I'll call you whatever I want, but that is not the matter right now, tell me what you wanted to say sweety.

Pratigya blushes, and hides her face in Krishna's chest. Krishna feels happy. He doesn't know when the last time he was this happy. He promises to God that he will not let anything to happen to Pratigya, to always keep her happy. Krishna puts his finger on her chin, and lifts her face, so their eyes meet.

Krishna: Please tell me Pratigya says Krishna with a puppy dog face.

Pratigya: Umm... well I don't know if I can live without. Now my heart beats only for once person, and that is you, Krishna. I...

Krishna: I...go on...

Pratigya: I love you, Krishna! I will always love you Krishna!

Krishna feels happy hearing this. He did not know what else to do but hug her really tightly.

Pratigya: Krishna, it hurts, you are hugging me too tightly!

Krishna: Oh sorry.

Pratigya: Its ok. With a smile.

Krishna looks at the clock, its time for dinner. Soon they have their dinner. After dinner, Krishna gets a nurse to help Pratigya into the washroom, understanding that she may feel shy and uncomfortable. After Pratigya is settled in, Krishna turns to his own little bed, the couch. He takes out a pillow and blanket, and starts laying it down.

Pratigya: Umm... Krishna.....

Krishna: What Pratigya? Do you need anything?

Pratigya: If you don't mind, can you sleep with me? You will be leaving me at my parent's house tomorrow; I don't know when we'll be together again. I want to cherish this night. I want to hug you, and listen to your heartbeats as I sleep.

Krishna smiles, and gets into bed with her. After constant readjusting, they find a position to sleep in. With Pratigya on top of his chest, Krishna smiles, and kisses her head.

Krishna: Pratigya, I love you.

Very sleeply, but with a smile, Pratigya : I love you too Krishna.

With that they both fall asleep.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
Aww........that was such a sweet update and quiet a romantic one at that!😳 Looking forward to the next chp and pls update soon😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
Awwwwww... I wish tat was a real kriya scene.... it would be awesome... i got goosebumps just tinking abt it... i sooo want a scene where she is in hospital really sick n how krishna reacts.... i wish this scene come true... good job... keep it up yaar...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
hi... Im just going crazy at your fan fic... pls update quickly plz and this time with more cute KriYa scenes... now I add you to my buddy list...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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that was pretty awesome soooooooooooooo cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thank you guyz for ur wonderful comments....i thought i wasn't a strong writer... im not that bad...lolz


sorry guyz, i haven't had the time to do regular updates, especially next week i have no time to even sleep, me and my friends are organizing two dinners, as well as i have soo many assignments as well as tests next week as it the week before the break, and the teachers are cramming every thing as my exams are in january.

i may be able to do an update for tomorrow... but don't get ur hopes up.. but i'll try my best.....

i'll give u an extra long update when my schedule clears up

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