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Posted: 15 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: ArhainArhaan

awww nycc haaan..pratigya is new in india d world has changed ahaha d neighbours part was funnyy..n aww shes missin shriya n even i hatee wen i av to leave my beauty shleep for anything ehehe:p

shoppin hope she meets arhaan dre;)
ehehe update shoonn



😆😆 u crack me up arhaina...but ye beauty sleep is needed😃
will update soon! x😊


Edited by xmuqix - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: arine

Great chaps.Nicely written.Waiting for ur next chaps.Update soon.👍🏼



thnx hun, will pm you when i update!😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
Both the chps were very nice.Looks like both Krishna and Pratigya have been affected by each other quiet a lot😆.Oh no!Poor Pratigya! I hope they aren't going to see any ladke waale pr anything😕.Looking forward to the next chp😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
Lovelyyyy Chapterss!!
Poor Pratigya :(
Its Always Like That Grrrrrrr
Ahahahah Krishna Is Sooo Confusedddd!
Update Soon x
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: SadieLuvs_Suku

Lovelyyyy Chapterss!!

Poor Pratigya :(
Its Always Like That Grrrrrrr
Ahahahah Krishna Is Sooo Confusedddd!
Update Soon x





sorry guys i wont be able to update today, not feeling so good, got a headache and sitting in front of a laptop is making it worse..so im going to rest, im nearly there though, and will update it tomorrow...sorry agen
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: xmuqix





sorry guys i wont be able to update today, not feeling so good, got a headache and sitting in front of a laptop is making it worse..so im going to rest, im nearly there though, and will update it tomorrow...sorry agen

Awhhh Get Well Soon 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
thanks :)
will be back tomorrow with 2 longer chapters hehe
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Chapter 7

"babaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa, papa bula rahe he, jaldi neeche jaaoooooo" Komal screamed in a sing song voice, right outside his door.😃

Krishna got up; quickly made him looked decent and went downstairs. As he was walking down the stairs, he could see Komal smiling a very evil smile at him. 😈
Oh god what did she say about me, I didn't even do anything,did i?😕...ye komal ki bachi
He approachd his dad "ha papa, kya hua?"
His father looked up, "ha wo komal bitwa ko shopping karna he, to use wo nayi dukaan le jana aur uski manpasand cheez kareed lena"
"Papa phir se?!😡...shakti bhai se kaho na..aur waise bhi komal ke paas bohot sare kapre he jo usne nahi pehna"
"kyu hamesha har din tamasha karta he...saktiwa kuch kaam se bahar gaye he aur tumhari amma aur bhabhi ghar ka kaam kar rahe he...sirf tum hi rehgaye. tum to kuch kaam nahi karte, sirf raat din dosto ke saath uthna bethna khana aur maze luthnaa behooda....aur ha aaj wo komal ki koi dost ki koi party he...unki behen London se aagayi, toh Komal waha jana chahti he, tum lejana...theekhe?"
Krishna stayed silent...London...that reminds me of rotlu....😕
SS interrupted his thoughts.... "kuch bolbo beh?😡
Krishna got tired of listening to his dad's ranting and said, "theek he, I will go" Then he looked at Komal and said, "der mat lagna warna dek lena.."
"ha bhaiya 😃ab jaldi se tayyar ho jao" Komal took a hold of his arm and dragged him upstairs.
"ha ha me ja raha hu" He went in to his room to get ready.

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Komal was taking him through all the sections, it was annoying and boring, he didn't like to come to women's clothing shop.
"baba ye acchi he na, aur wo bhi...kaunsi lu, samaj me nahii aata..."Komal said, speaking very fast.
Krishna annoyed replied, "pata nahi jo chahiye lena, muje ye sab bakwaas nahi pasand..jaldi kariyo"
Komal made a face at him🤢, "ha ha kitni baar ek baat kehte rahoge...." Suddenly Komal's eyes fell on someone and she scremed "omg Arushi, hiiiii" And like a mad woman started waving her hands in the air.
Hmm probably one of her friend....oh yes I remember, I have seen her around
Arushi came over and hugged Komal "komal kesi ho, tum yaha kya kar rahi ho...aaj ghar aane wali he nah, didi kal raat ko ghar aayi"
Komal excited about the party, "ha ofcourse, tumhari didi se jo milna he aur London ke bare me puchna he😃"
Komal then looked over at her brother, "tum to inneh janti ho...ye mera bhai Krishna baba" 😆then started laughing.
Krishna still annoyed with her antics, "ab chup kar behoodi...kyu tang karti rehti he...ek laaphat doo kya? seedha yaha se London poch jayegi...samjhi?"
Arushi looked scared, and this was because she knew about Krishna's status in this town.
Krishna noticed her reaction, "ka hua?? Dar gayi kya?...acha ye batao..tumhari didi kesi dikhti he😉....?"
Komal was angry.. "BHAI!😡....please ye sab behuda baatein aru ki didi ke bare me mat kaho...wo padi likhi ladki he, aur London se...usse ye sab nahi pasand🤢"
"tumhe kese pata?? Pehle kabhi mili kya" He turned to Arushi... "bolo nah..dont worry me kuch nahi karuga...promise" and gave a smirk.😉
She looks even scared..haha teenage girls are way too easy target...i think i will have a go at this sister of hers..This will be fun😆
Arushi turned to face Komal again.
"Ha, me abhi chalti hu...didi bhi shopping kar rahi he, muje help karna hoga...shaam ke 8 baje aane or khaana kha ke jana...bye Komi" She ran for her life.

Pata nahi kyu log khamaka darte he, me koi terrorist nahi hu....mazaak hi to karta hu😕😆.
Komal looked over at her bro, "kya baba hamesha mere doston ko darade te ho"
"kya, mene kuch nahi kiya....ufff ab rehne de ye stupid baatein aur ye stupid se kapre pasand kar"
He looked around the shop to see anything interesting and did a double take at the closest mirror....wait a sec, is that rotlu, why is she her?😕 Nooo can't be, im dreaming! He looked at the image in the mirror...She was putting the Palloo of a red coloured sari around her shoulder.😳
Krishna then closed his eyes and started counting backward from 10...7..5....2..1. He opened his eyes and saw someone else standing there. He started smiling😊im so stupid at times😆, why did i imagine her though?😕


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hmmm is Krishna imagining things or is Pratigya really there?
will upload the next chapter in the next few hrs, it will be slightly longer
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
that was very interesting update. i hope its not his imagination but in reality pratigya is there.eagerly waiting for the next update.plz continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
Chapter 8

note: im going to mix some of these chapters up, meaning now chapters will have both Krishna and Pratigya POV...depending on how long the chapter is...they will be slightly longer than the previous ones😛



Pratigya couldn't decide between two sarees. One was a beautiful sky blue colour with heavy diamante design all over and the other was a luscious red, slightly transparent with with gold border

"mamma muje kuch samaj me nahi aaraha he, kaunsi lu😕??"
"tum confused ho....jae ke kapre ke oopar try kar lena.... arre bhaiya thoda madad kyijye"
"ha ji maydam ji"
First tried the blue one on and then red one....She looked at herself in the mirror and she knew straight away that she had to go with the red one, it looked absolutely gorgeous on her, it flowed the right way and hugged her curves perfectly. WOW!😛
"Mumma ye red wala lena hai" Pratigya decided😃
"Teekh he.....aur blouse bhi aaj hi chahiye bhaiya"
"Ha maydam ji....short sleeve ya long sleeve?" He said looking at Pratigya
"Short sleeve" said Pratigya....."Long sleve" said Naina.They had said it together
"beta long sleeve ho to accha he, tumhe to pata he dadi kesi he, use ye sab pasand nahi"
Pratigya got annoyed, she said, "😡mum I came from London, muje ye sab farak nahi padta, dadi ko jo sochna he sochye, i dont care, me thodi janti hu usse"
Naina looked upset at her daughter's reaction, she sghed "aisa nahi bolte he beta" She then looked at the man behind the counter. "Theekhe short sleve karna bhaiya😒"
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After few hours Pratigya was getting ready,fixing her saari up. To tell you te truth, Pratigya wasn't that bothered about desi clothes, but she had to admit the sari made her look soo pretty. 😳

(just imagine something like this😳)



Sitting on her bed, she waited for...actually she doesn't know what she's waiting for😕..
Naina had come 5 minutes ago to call her down as most guests had arrived, she said she would be down soon, but in reality she doesn't want to go. She don't want to stand there while people check her out, talk behind her back and make opinion of her when they do not know her.
Maybe it's not going to be like that, not everyone is like that...she thought
Just then Arushi came barging in... "Didi sab log wait kar rahe he, aur meri dost wo abhi nahi aayi lekin wo.....wow di you looks stunning😃......dadi ka reaction dekna😆." We both started laughing.


"Theek he, let's go" They went out of the room.
God, Pratigya looked down to see atleast 50-60 people there...rishtedaar my...🤬
Now she was nervous as hell, especially since she is going to be the centre of attention
She kept her head down while walking down the flight of steps; she could feel everyone's eyes on her. She looked up to see her parents walking towards her and with them some people.
"Pratigya beta bohot sundar lag rahi ho...inse milye ye mere bohot acche dost aur university ke professor Amar aur unki mrs...aur dono bache....."
After 5 mins...Dadi came up to her to complain about her clothes "baap re baap Pratigya ye kya pehna he...chee chee chee, sharam karo...sab kuch dikh raa hai😡👎🏼"

Pratigya laughed it off, "dadi ye sab fashion me hai,ab sab kuch chalta hai!"😎

Dadi was shocked, "hai bole naath is ladki ka kuch karna..." Then she walked off.

Why are old people so funny! haha🤣
Arushi came running up to Pratigya, "didi...mere dost se milye....komal"
She looked at Arushi who had this huge bacha wala smile on her face😃, she couldn't help but smile. Then she turned to look at Komal and stuck her hand out, "hi komal"
She was slightly shorter than Arushi, but nonetheless pretty for a 16 yr old, she shook Pratigya's hand.
"Hi Pratigya di, mein aap ko di bola sakti hu nah😳?"
I smiled and nodded as in yes. She got happy.
"omg arushi ne theek hi kaha, you are the most beautiful girl ever to be seen😃"
That shocked Pratigya a little, though she felt like laughing, she remembered how teenagers can be, she was exactly like that.
Komal started looking around, "Arushi tum ne bhaiya ko dekha😕?"
Arushi didn't know where he was, "hmm ye bhaiya bhi na hamesha galat waqt pe ghum ho jate he, khadoos kahi ka, ek minute me abhi dund ke laati hu, kaha chipega sasurii" Komal said with the most serious face ever and walked away
Pratigya laughed out loud, Arushi looked at her in a weird way, "kya hua didi?"
After few seconds Pratigya stopped laughin, wiping her eyes at the same time, "komal...kya cheez hai, Shes funny...I think I am going to like her alot"😊
Arushi seemed happy that her friend impressed her sister.






Krishna walked in to the Professor's house. Wow thats alot of people, who is this girl? Some kind of superstar...Krishna thought, laughin to himself.
Komal looked over at him, "dekho baba, kuch ulta pulta mat karna warna papa ko kehdugi ha?😡...theek thaak Arushi ke didi se mil lena, tumhare ye boyish charm us pe mat try karna, kuch chalne wala nahi"
Krishna, use to the way Komal talked to him, nodded his head... "ha meri ma!, ab wo itni bhi khoobsurat bhi nahi ho sakti ke me Krishna Singh use pasand karde😎" Krishna said, while messing around with his hair.
Komal looked bored, "oh whatever baba..." she stopped, and looked up "OMG....OMG....is that her....baba u r definitely wrong about her😉!"
Krishna followed her gaze and froze, his mouth fell open in shock...he couldn't believe it...
Its her😲...rotlu...omg, ye mere peeche peeche aagayi kya...Chances kya hai..That means dukaan mein....
Komal looked at her brother's expressions and said, "he na bhai?😉 mene theek kaha" she said while poking him, she was teasing him...
He still stood there gazing at her.
Wow, komal is absolutely right, she looks absolutely beautiful😍.....wait no no no, she don't😕
"komal ab bas kar😡...mera time mat...."
Komal didn't let him finish... "woteva baba...me ja rahi use milne, ab chalbo, milna he ke nahi...." She said and she ran for it
OMG ab kya karu, I can't go in front of her😕...kya pata wo kuch kar bete...he thought while holding his cheek.
No man, I can't let her see me, otherwise she will try and accuse me of something i didn't do and Komal would be more angry at me....Krishna thought, I will just go wait outside and he left to roam around the front yard.
"Why am I always thinking about her"...Krishna said out aloud
Maybe because she slapped you duh, replied his conscious.
However, Krishna didn't seem satisfied with that answer, he went ahead and sat on the jhoola (Swing), closed his eyes to rest since he had nothing else to do. He could see her image in his head, her walking down the stairs in that red sari with her head bowed down.
"This is going to be a looongg year" whispered Krishna.


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what do you think is going to happen next, are they going to meet??



Edited by xmuqix - 15 years ago

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