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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
lovely😊 superb suspence, i thought naitik play a negetive role but he infact was helpin krishna nd pratigya unite....😊 thats so sweet😊 akshara is so sweet in helpin her friend..... loved wen pratigya was thinkin about krishna, hope naitik's mum creates no more problems..... loved evry character nd fantastic story, plz update soon😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Rainy night Part 12






Akshara gos to Hotel Oracle.She waits for a long time for the interview.She is becoming impatient.
A:I came in the evening.Now it's night.But i have to wait pstiently.It's the matter of getting a job.
She is asked to go to the room.She becomes happy and goes inside.

Pratigya is stuck in traffic.Krishna is waiting for Pratigya:Why is pratigya becoming so late?It's so late...
It's raining heavily.
K:Heavy rain.She may not have got taxi.Taxi drivers are lazy to drive during rain.Poor Pratigya.She must be finding it hard to come in the rain.
Suddenly he hears a cry from the room nearby.He pushes the door.It gets opened.
He sees Akshara crying.Two guys are holding her hands tightly.
A:Please save me.I came here for an interview.But actually what happened here was not interview.They are trying to abuse me physically.
Krishna beats them heavily.They run away.
A:Thanks a lot.If you had not come on time,i can't imagine what would have happened to me.
K:No need of thanks.Good thing that you are saved from those beats.You thank God.
Suddenly Policemen enter their room.
Police:We heard that here immoral traffic is going on.Rumours are true.Arrest them.
Constables catch them.
Akshara cries:No,we are not that kind of people.
K:Inspector..you people have mistaken us.
The inspector slaps him.

Pratigya reaches the hotel.She is shocked to see Krishna and Akshara coming together along with the police men.Her umbrella falls down.Rain is covering her.
Krishna is shocked to see Pratigya.
K:Pratigya!
P:You cheat!You betrayed me.You played with my emotions.You fooled me.
K:No pratigya...believe me.
P:Shut up.I'm so foolish.I did'nt try to understand you properly.First your friends insulted me.You petended to be an Angel that day and stood by your evil friends' side.Then you tried to touch me in the rain.Now...you are disgusting...
She cries and gets inside the taxi.
Krishna weeps.

Present:

Akshara:That rainy night was horrible.The policemen understood that we are innocent and we got released.You comfoted me.But poor Krishna.Pratigya who was supposed to comfort him ditched him.Because of me,Krishna lost his love.He only saved me.But i made his life miserable.
Naitik comforts her:Don't worry Akshara.We will unite them.We knew that one day Pratigya will be forced to marry someone.Luckily i got a chance to go there with a proposal.With one more bitter experience she will not dare to marry anyone now.We will prove that Krishna is innocent.

Pratigya is sitting on the bed.
P:I hate Krishna.But now a days why is he always coming into my mind?
Edited by jasminerahul - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
It was a very nice chp.Just wish tht Pratigya didn't jump to conclusions so soon and wasn't so judgemental 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
hmmmmmm very nice chapter!!!!!!! lbd it!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
Nice!!!
Finally We Know What Happend!!
Cant Wait For More =)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
good.
There's one typo:
She is shocked to see Krishna and Pratigya
should be
She is shocked to see Krishna and Akshara
isn't it? 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
Thanks for correcting...it was a careless mistake
dkmystery thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Thanks for correcting...it was a careless mistake


my pleasure 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
awwwww my krishna 😭😭😭 he cried noooooooooo😭 dont make is so dreadful plzzzz😭 i cant see my krishu sad 😕 i hope everything goes allright again 😳 thanks for this great update and do update soon 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
loved the part😊 hope the misunderstandin gets sorted out sooon...... naitik nd akshara r so very sweet😊 plz update sooon😊

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