Rainy night Ff Part 15 The end - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
#41
Naitik is so mean and rude.I can't believe tht he actually asked Akshara to shut up!!! 😲 I am glad things are going well between Pratigya and Krishna. 😊
Edited by shruthiR - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42
ery nice chapter dear!..............but that naitik idiot is so...........................🤬!
anywayz u r a superb FF writer!lvd this chapter
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
hey just caught up with this ff......just lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy.......i must say........OMg bt wat happened btw KRIYA re....n wat to do with nakshara wid KRUYA.........bt god so many myseries........bt bindya is same.....so cruellll.........bt loved how the love blossomed btw KRIYa.......plz can u PM me when u update this fff.......
Luv,
Sups.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
gosh! didn't like how N is behaving... why is A crying buckets? crying won't solve the issue
a suggestion: you should have extended the rain scene, could have described it a bit...
loved how Krishna showered rose petals on her!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
awwww how wonderful 😛 we have Kriya and Akshara- Naitik all toegtha 😉 awesome👏 what a story!!😳 i like the way how krishu confessed his love to prats 😳 i dont really get what is going on with akshara like what is she upto 😕 i cant really understand that part 😛 u know m dumb 😆 and what the hell is wrong with naitik's mom 😡 why she is all envious with her own daugher-in-law fregin estupido she is 😲😆 i would just love if everything goes all right 😃 please do give us some more love scenes between kriya 😳😳😳 i just love 'em ☺️ please update soon 😍 its rocking wish you good luck for the next parts 👍🏼 you are a star ⭐️ thanks for sharing it with us 🤗 kiTuU 😎😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46

Rainy night Part 11



Akshara goes to Bindya's room:Mummy...i came here to ask something.Why did you lie yesterday?
B:To create a rift between you both.
Akshara is shocked:Why?
B:Because you are trying to snatch my son from me?
A:What are you saying Mummy?
B:Don't pretend to be an Angel.I hated you from the beginning.I will find a better girl for Naitik.
A:Why do you hate me so much?What did i do?
B:You don't derserve Naitik?What is your family background?You say that your father left your mother after your birth.But people say that your mother is not married.Do you know who your father is?you are a bas***d.Right?
Akshara is shocked.Tears fall down.
A:wHat you heard is wrong.My mom was married to my dad.But he left us.
B:Don't lie you bas***d.
Suddenly they hear a voice.
"Mom!"
That is Naitik.They are shocked.
N:So Akshara is innocent.You did a drama purposefull to cause a rift between us.I have always told Akshara that her family background is nothing for me.You also promised me that you will not ask her about her family background.But you broke your promise.
B:What is wring with it?It is true.
Akshara cries:No..it is not true.My father is Raghav Verma.He is no more now.
N:Don't worry Akshara.I'm with you.I will not allow your eyes to be wet.Let us leave this house.
Akshara and Bindya are shocked.
A:What are you saying?
N:Just listen to me.I'm your husband.
B:Why should you leave?This is your house.
N:But to have peace of mind i have to leave.
Bindya shouts at Akshara:You took my son away from me.Because of you i lost my son.I'm telling you...you will have son..you will also lose your son in the future.
Akshara is upset.
N:Never mind Akshara.
Naitik holds her arms tight.

Naitik and Akshara are packing bags.
A:Think once more Naitik.Is it good to leave the house?
N:Don't question me.Pack up fast.

They move to a small house.Naitik rings up Bindya.
B:Naitik...how are you?
N:Fine mom.We have reached our new house.
B:You are supposed to lie in our palace like house like a Prince.But because of Akshara you are living in a small house.Come back dear.
N:I will come back when your attitude changes.
He puts the phone down.Bindya is upset.

After a few days....
Akshara:Naitik...tomorrow i have been called for an interview in hotel Oracle in the evening.
N:Good.All the best.But i can't accompany you.Because i will be full engaged tomorow.Have an important meeting.
A:Oh!

Krishna rings up Pratigya:Tomorrow evening,can you come to Hotel Oracle?We will have dinner together.
She smiles:Wow!That is a good idea.I will come.
shruthiR thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
Nice chp. 😊 I am glad tht Naitik found out the ugly truth abt his mom.Poor Akshara,I feel sorry for her.
Just one request,plz keep the no. of scenes for both Naksh and KriYa equal.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
'fanatbulous chapter dear!!! lvd it! so nice!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49

Nice!! This Is More Like The Episodes On TV =) But Its Excellent!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
oh wow,.,. finally Naitik came to know about the dirty trick of his mom 😃his mom got some issues 😕😆 she was all like akshara you snatched away mah son 🥱 but it was her own mistake 😆 she seriously got some issues 😆 thank god Naitik and Akshara moved away from that witch 😆 oh wow,., three of them will be at the same place😊,., lets see what happens 😳 thanks for this part and the message 😳😳

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