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Posted: 15 years ago
#31

Rainy night Part 8




Akshara sheds tears.
"You miss me?"
A:This is Naitik's voice.
She turns back.she sees Naitik smiling at her.
A:Naitik!How come you are here?You were in the office.Right?
He laughs:I was making fun of you.
Akshara is embarassed:You are too naughty..
He laughs.
N:The whole day you are sitting inside the house.You need to have some fresh air.I can understand that.Let us go out.
Akshara is surprised.

Naitik and Akshara are about to go out.
N:Mom,we are going for a film.
Bindya:Wait for 5 mintutes.I will be ready in 5 minutes.
N:Why are you getting ready?
B:To come with you guys.
N:My God!
Akshara feels like laughing seeing Naitik's expression.She controls it.
N:We have booked only two tickets.We will take you some other day.
Bindya becomes dull.
N:Bye..
Naitik and Akshara go out.
Bindya thinks:Earlier Naitik used to take me out always.But now he needs only Akshara.

Naitik and Akshara are in the car.
He touches her arm.She smiles.She takes her arm away.
A:Now you concentrate on driving.
He smiles.
A:Why did you lie that we have booked tickets?
N:If mom comes with us,there will be no privacy.
She smiles.
They reach the cinema theatre.They see Housefull board.
A:Our plan to enjoy in the theatre has become a flop.
N:Who told you that we can't enjoy in the theatre?
A:Then?
Naitik goes and buys popcorn.He comes:Let us sit on the steps.
They sit and have popcorn.
N:See...we are having fun in the theatre.
They both laugh.
They finish the popcorn packet.They keep talking there till the film gets over.

Pratigya is in a boat.She is shocked to see Krishna on the opposite side.She turns off her face.
Krishna thinks:Why i feel pain when Pratigya avoids me?
The boat is sinking.All the howling.Pratigya is drowning.Krishna swims and saves her.He brings her to the shore.She is unconscious.
He takes her to a cottage.
He keeps her on the bed.He looks at her carefully.
K:So cute.
She shivers.
K:Pratigya is shivering.Maybe because she is feeling cold.Her clothes are wet.That is why.But how can i remove her clothes?If i don't remove her clothes,she will fall sick.She may suffer from pnemonia.What will i do?
He is confused.Within a few moments he closes his eyes and his hands move towards Pratigya.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#32
embarrasing!..........................😳 but lv u FF...u r a great writer!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
NAHI!!! OMG,Krishna better not do tht to Pratigya 😡 it's embarasing 😳Naitik and Akshara scene was cute.It was a nice chp 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
😳 Really Nice Chapter!
Hope He Doesnt Do That Its Sooo....Omg
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35

Rainy night Part 9




Pratigya opens her eyes.She is shocked to see Krishna and his hands moving toward her.
P:What are you doing?
Krishna opens his eyes:Pratigya!Thank God,you woke up.
P:How come I'm here?What were you planning to do to me?
K:Don't you remember that you fell into the water from the boat?You were unconscious when you were brought to the shore.So I brought you here.Your dress is wet.You nee to change it.Otherwise you will fall sick.
P:Why are you bothered about my health?
K:Eh!I don't know.
P:No…you know…tell me.
K:I don't know yaar.
P;You know.
He raises his voice:Yes..i know.Because I love you.
Pratigya is shocked:What?
K:Till now I also asked this question to myself many times.But now only I got the answer.That day I touched you…i did'nt have any bad intention.I just tied to dance with you.Because I loved dancing with you.I love spending time with you.I know that you hate me.
Pratigya goes out of the cottage without telling anything.

Krishna is praying in the temple.He opens his eyes and is surprised to see Pratigya there.
P:Like you think I don't hate you.
Krishna is relieved:Really?
P:Who can lie infront of God?
K:Then?
P:I think I love you.
Krishna is surprised.
Pratigya smiles slowly.
She goes away.He smiles.

The next day…when Pratigya is about to enter the compound of the temple,Krishna comes from behind and throws rose petals on her.She is surprised.Then she sees Krishna:You did this?
K:Yes.I can't buy expensive gifts to be romantic.But I can atleast do this.
She laughs.
P:Anyways I felt very nice.
He smiles.

Naitik gives a cover to Akshara.
A:What is this?
N:Open it.
She opens it.it is a red saree.
A:Saree...is it for me?
N:Ya…for whom can I buy saree dear…only for you.
She smiles:Beautiful saree.Red is my favourite colour.
N:Now don't complain that I'm not giving you any gift.
She smiles.

Naitik and Akshara come to the front room.She has worn the red saree.
Naitik looks at Bindya:Mom,how is Akshara's red saree?
B:Very nice.
N:I gifted her this saree.
Bindya is shocked.
She thinks:Till now Naitik has'nt bought any saree for me.But he is buying sarees for Akshara.Akshara keeps Naitik away from me.I will not allow it anymore.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
nice chap dear! lvd that rose part where krish throws some on prats😳 very nice!! plzz update soon! and lemme know it by PM as always😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37
Great So Far! =)
I Wonder What Happend Between Kriya And Now She Doesn't Wanna Get Married Nd Stuff...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
Thank god he didn't do anything.Well the rose petals scene in the temple between Pratigya and Krishna was very cute. 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
Read all the chaps n your FF is really nice. Keep updating 😊
Edited by dkmystery - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40

Rainy night Part 10




Krishna:Pratigya...do you remember our meeting in a coffee shop?
P:Ya..ofcourse.
K:Why don't we try having coffee together today?
P:Good idea.
K:We will try an ordinary coffee shop today.
They reach the place.They have to climb a ladder to go inside.
P:My God!How can i?
K:I will help you.
Krishna helps Pratigya to climb the ladder.They are very close to each other.Her fluttering eyes aim at Krishna's face.
They have coffee there looking at each other.

Akshara is making roti.
Bindya:You are doing a lot of work in the house.You need a break.Enough for today.You go and watch TV.
A:No mummy...i will make roti.
B:No...go and watch TV.
A:But...
B:I told you...go..take rest.
Akshara goes and sits infront of tv.
A:I should have completed preparing roti.
Naitik enters the house.Akshara goes near him with a smile.
N:Roti's smell is coming.I will go to the kitchen and come.
He goes to the kitchen.Bindya pretends to be very tired.
N:Mom,you look so tired.
B:What to do?I have to do al work.I have a daughter in law who does'nt know anything.
Naitik goes to Akshara:Akshara,why are you not helping my mom in the kitchen?Instead of that,you are watching tv.
A:I was making roti.But she told me not to do it.
B:She is lying my son.I was so tired that i asked her to help me.But she wanted to watch her favourite tv show.
Akshara is shocked:Mummy..what are you saying?No...Naitik...it is not true.
B:That means i'm lying?You are the one who is lying.Naitik..don't trust her.She is a liar.If i tell her something,she will scream at me,she is simply fighting with me.
Bindya pretends to cry.
A:No...mummy..why are you doing this to me?
Naitik shouts at Akshara:Akshara!Why are you fighting woth my mom?First you be a good daughter in law.If you go against my mom,i will not be able to tolerate it.I will throw you out of the house.
Akshara is shocked.She cries and goes to her room.Bindya has an evil smile on her face.Naitik looks at Bindya.
Bindya pretends to be sad:You would have got a better girl with beauty and wealth.But you were stubborn about marrying a poor girl like Akshara.
N:Akshara is a nice girl mom.But she is a bit pampered.That's all.
B:See...you are on her side.You have been brainwashed by her.
Naitik goes mad and goes to the bedroom where Akshara is crying.
N:Why are you crying?I hate tears.All ladies are tear buckets.
A:You made me cry by scolding me before your mom.
N:I can't see my mom upset.That's why.
A:You are thinking only about your mom's pain.What about me?Even i have a heart.I have pain.
N:Now you shut up and give me peace of mind.
Naitik goes out of the room.

Akshara is sleeping.Naitik can't sleep thinking about the fight.He looks at her.
N:Akshara!
Slowly she opens her eyes:You did'nt sleep yet?What happened?
N:Sorry to desturb you.I made you wake up to say sorry.
She smiles:No need of sorry.You have a good sleep now.
She covers her body with the blanket.Naitik smiles.

Krishna can't sleep.His mind is filled with Pratigya.He thinks about they both climbing the ladder together with a smile.

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