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Posted: 15 years ago
#21
great part dear!! sorry missed the new update.
aww, akshara and naitik are together. love them😳
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 15 years ago
#22

Rainy night Part 6



Naitik's mom Bindya:Our daughter in law has made kheer.Her first cooking in our house.
She tastes it.Akshara is nervous.
B:What is this Akshara?Your mom has'nt taught you cooking?You are 22 years old.Still not good at cooking?
Akshara feels upset.
Naitik:Let me taste it.
He tastes it.
N:True.Akshara...what have you made?This is how you should make kheer?Can't eat it.
Her hopes are shattered.She feels upset.

Naitik enters the bedroom where Akshara is sitting.
A:That day you said my kheer is good.But today you said its not good.
N:Because today it was'nt good.
She is vey upset.
N:Dress up..
A:Why?
N:Let us go out...
Akshara is thrilled.She dresses up.

Naitik and Akshara go out.They enjoy greenary.
Naitik buys icecream.They both taste icecream.

They go to a small cottage.Akshara is surprised to see the decorated cottage.Naitik plays the song 'Kuch kum..'{Dostana}He extends his arm.She is shy.Slowly she holds his arm.They dance together.

Krishna is in the coffee house.While drinking coffee,he sees Pratigya drinking coffee.Pratigya is also surprised to see him.
Krishna goes near her:Surprise!We always meet up somewhere.
P:Yes.I also thought so.
K:Do you have any idea about why this is happening to us?
P:No.
K:I feel..we have to meet again and again...because it's God's decision.It is our destiny.
Pratigya smiles slightly.Krishna's lips become red with a cute smile.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23
Aww.......tht was such a sweet chp.Naitik and his mom were rude to Akshara.But I loved the fact tht they had some quality time together and so far I am loving the KriYa track.The coffee scene was cute 😊
Edited by shruthiR - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24
nice chapter dear! u r a kewl FF writter!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25
Soooo Nice!!! =)
Good Chapter :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26

Rainy night Part 7







Akshara cooks a new dish.Bindya tastes it.
B:Ah!What is this Akshrara?It's too spicy.
Naitik tastes it:Yes...too spicy.Mom,we have to make her eat chilly powder.
Bindya laughs.
Akshara is nervous.
N:No improvement in cooking.Learn to do cooking.Mom...please teach her cooking.
B:This is something which her mother had to do.But she she did'nt do it.If i try to reach her,i will be blamed for being strict with her.
N:No way...will you blame my mom Akshara?
A:No.Why should i?
N:Then no problem.
Bindya smiles.
Akshara thinks:I cook with so much of love and sincerity.Then also why it is always a failure?

Pratigya is watching rain.She folds her umbrella and walks in the rain.Raindrops are hugging her.Her body moves in the rain.
"Hey.."
She hears a voice and turns back.She is surprised to see Krishna.
P:You?
K:Ya...dancing in the rain is good in films.But in real life it's weird.You will fall sick.
P:Who told you that dancing in the rain is weird.I challenge you.It's amazing.I will prove it.
Krishna laughs.
P:Come...dance in the rain.
She snatches his umbrella and puts it down.
K:What is this?
She dances.Krishna moves forward and dances.Slowly he smiles.He goes closer to her and whispers to her ears:What you said is true.Dancing in the rain is wonderful.
She smiles:I won...
K:Yes.
She continues dancing.He watches it carefully with a smile.Slowly he holds her arms in a dancing posture.
Pratigya moves away from him:What are you doing?You are disgusting.
K:Pratigya!
P:You said you are with your friends now also as they have changed a lot.No..actually you are also one among them.That is why you are stuck up to them.What you did to me proves that.
K:Pratigya...you are misunderstanding me.You please listen to me.
P:No.
She runs away.Krishna looks at her with pain.

Akshara is getting bored in the room.She rings up Naitik:When will you come back home?I miss you.So boring.
N:Now i'm really busy in the office.Don't desturb me.If you are getting bored,do some work at home.
He puts the phone down.
Akshara feels upset.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27
Great!! The Rain Scene Between Kriya Was Soo Nicee!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
great part!! naitik's so rude man...why did he have to say that abt the kheer :(
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
Why is Naitik being so mean to Akshara??? 😡 I loved the rain dance part although Krishna really shuldn't have touched her.Nice chp 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
Nice chapter dear! just lvd the rain part! but this prats always gets angry !!😡 how sweet my krish is 😳and see how prats keep getting angry from him!😡

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