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Posted: 15 years ago
#11

Rainy night Part 3



Naitik:It's because of you Akshara....
Akshara who is on the phone:I want to sirt out the problems caused by me.Pratigya should feel how better Krishna was.
N:By the way tho i told you that i was with Pratigya at night you did'nt scream at me.
She smiles:Even if you spend all nights with her,i know that nothing wrong will happen.I trust you Naitik.
He smiles.

Pratigya runs home.Her parents are tensed.Finally she reaches home.They are relieved.She is completely wet.
P:I did'nt get any taxi.I had to come home by walking.Dad..one more thing..i can't marry Naitik.He is a dirty man.He is worse than Krishna.Krishna is 100 times better than Naitik.
Shyam:What happened Pratigya?
P:He tried to misbehave with me.
They are shocked.
P:Don't worry,nothing happened.I escaped.Naitik will not appear before us.I slapped him tightly.
They are stunned.
Rukmini:Luckily we got a brave daughter.She removed the hurdles on the way.
S:Yes.You can protect yourself.I'm confident now.Now i leave everything to you.If you want you can marry anyone.If you want single status,you can avoid marriage.It's your wish.I did a big mistae by forcing you to get married.I never thought thst Naitik is this type of a guy.

Naitik and Akshara meet in a hotel.
N:Akshara,why are you upset?Our plan will work out.
A:I'm upset that the root cause is myself.
N:But when everything goes well,you don't have to blame yourself.
A:What if things don't go well?
Naitik keeps silent.
N:Don't think like that.Be positive.
He holds her arms together:I'm with you.Right?Then why are you getting tensed?We will be successful in our game.

Pratigya is at the balcony of her house.She thinks:I met Krishna here...in God's place.Then also why our relationship got strained?
shruthiR thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#12
oh so Krishna was a thing of the past...hopefully he comes back in a pleasant way.Nice chp 😊
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#13
Thx a lot guys.But if u can plz giv a little more detailed comments
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14

Rainy night Part 4





Flashback…

Pratigya is praying in the temple.Krishna sees her.He can't take his eyes off her:She is absolutely a Goddess.
Pratigya opens her eyes.She sees Krishna smiling at her.She feels awkward.She turns off her face and goes out.Her shawl flows down.She takes her shawl and puts it properly.
"Why are you doing this shawl show?To show us?
Pratigya turns back.She sees three guys.One is Krishna.
P:Who spoke now?
"I am Kiran.I only spoke now".
Pratigya stares at him:Are you not ashamed to talk like this?
K:You can do anything.But we can't speak. Don't try to scare us.We can manage girls like you easily.
P:Disgusting!
The other guy Ramu:I'm Ramu.Your shawl item was boring.Something else would be better.
P:Shut up you bloody…
Ramu loses control:Hey…
He moves forward.Krishna pulls him back.Pratigya walks away.

K:You guys were very cheap today.This is how you should behave to girls?
They are surprised by his behaviour.
Ki:Krishna!You are our friend.But you are supporting her?
K:Yes,because she is not wrong.She is the victim of eve teasing.

Pratigya comes out of her office.She is shocked to see Krishna there.She is nervous.
K:Don't be tensed.I did'nt come to trouble you.I came to apologize on behalf of my friends.
P:How did you know that I'm here?
K:I have seen you many times here before you saw me in the temple.From then I have been observing you.
Pratigya can't believe it.
She thinks:I think he is ok.He is the only person who did'nt tease me.
Krishna turns back.
P:What is your name?
He turns back and smiles:Krishna.Your name?
P:Pratigya.
He smiles.He is looking at her deeply.
She becomes conscious and her eyeballs roll down.
Krishna understands that:Bye.
P:Bye.
Krishna goes away.Pratigya keeps looking at him till he vanishes completely.

Akshara is preparing kheer.She thinks:Naitik loves kheer.I hope he will like my kheer.
She awaits for Naitik with a cute smile.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Tht was nice chp.Good tht Krishna stopped his frnds from teasing her further.so is he goonda in this as well?????
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Posted: 15 years ago
#16

Nice Chapter =)

Did He Do Anything Bad To Her Which Is Why She Hates Men?
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#18

Rainy night Part 5





Akshara sees Naitik coming.Her face blossoms like a flower.
Naitik enters the house with a cute smile.
N:You look very cheerful today..
Akshara's mom Renuka comes:For the first time Akshara entered kitchen to make food for you.
N:Really?What did you make for me?
Akshara smiles and gives kheer to him:Your favourite kheer.
N:Wow!
He tastes it:It's so tasty..
Akshara and Renuka smile.
N:Within a few days we will be a married couple.By that time you will be an excellent cook i guess.
Akshara smiles.

Pratigya sees Krishna walking along with Ramu and Kiran.Krishna sees her and passes a smile.But she is not cheerful.Krishna feels sad.

Pratigya is in the temple.Her eyes are searching for Krishna.Finally she sees him.
She thinks:As i expected...he is here.
She goes near him:Why are you walking with those wretched guys?
K:Kiran and Ramu?They have changed now.I made them understand how cheap were they that day.
P:Somehow i can't believe that they have changed.
K:Trust me...they are not bad.
Kiran and Ramu enter the temple and come near them.Pratigya feels insecure.
Ki:Infront of the God,we apologize.
R:Yes..we are sorry.
P:Ok...never behave like this to anyone.
Ki:We promise.
She looks at Krishna.
P:Ok...bye...
K:Bye..
Krishna thinks:Will i be able to meet Pratigya again?
Pratigya thinks:I hope i will see Krishna again.

Wedding eve of Akshara and Naitik.
Naitik and Akshara are on the phone.
N:Tomorrow you will be mine completely.You will be always with me.
She blushes.
A:Ok...Naitik..let's stop it.Party is going on and the bride is not in the front room.
He smiles:Ok...bye...sweet dreams.
She smiles.

Wedding...
Naitik ties mangalsuthra around Akshara's neck.He fills her forehead with sindoor.

Akshara and Naitik are sitting on the bed.His eyes are moving on Akshara.She is shy.He holds her arms:I'm happy that i got you as my wife.
A:I'm also lucky to be blessed to get you as my life partner.
They both smile at each other.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#19
Aww..........Akshara and Naitik are so cute 😊 And gr8,the feeling's kinda mutual between Krishna and Pratigya as well.It was a very sweet chp 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20
really nice part dear! i lvd it 🤗
Edited by SANARHAAN - 15 years ago

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