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Part 10


Krishna follows her daily,all the way,but Pratigya doesn't react,it's fruitless to say him to stay away..everyday morning she went to Trivedi house,and when she comes out from the house she finds Krishna waiting for her,she takes rikshaw,and Krishna follows her keeping some distance.He just makes sure that again no mishap takes place.Pratigya enters in Saxena house,Krishna goes back to his place.It's like a cold war.Pratigya wants to see how long he can follow her,Krishna wants to see how long she can be indifferent.There will be one day for sure when Pratigya will come to him,she doesn't ignore him,she just pretends to do the same. Krishna can understand that.


But one day he was standing before Trivedi house,but Pratigya didn't come out, Krishna became restless..he asked to a neighbour then got the news that Trivedi family was out of station.It was very obvious that Pratigya didn't come to this area that day.It has been three months ,Krishna is following her,now he can't do any more delay..this problem must be sorted out.


Pratigya was seated in the University library,her classes were commenced.From the very first day she focused on her study,if she would not study hard,then she wouldn't get good grades,this will lead her to the loosing the schollarship,she
can't let this happen.This schollarship is so important to her.It will make up all the expenses for the LLB course.Things are not so easy,she can sense that,Arushi is still studying,the daily expenses,medicines,commodities,price of everything is hiking to astronomical altitude.Now is she looses the schollarship,it will be a great pressure for her family.LLB course needs a room full of books,case histories..if Prof. Saxena wants to meet his daughter he has two easy choices,outside her class room and the library..he doesn't even need to go upto the canteen.But he feels sad.Something is bothering Pratigya for sure,but she is not saying anything,it is not Krishna of course because after Nitin's marriage fiasco,Krishna was also disappeared from the scene.


Krishna was also in deep thought,where did she go?She doesn't come now to Trivedi House..where can she go?He didn't imagine that she can study further.But all of a sudden the atmosphere of University became firy..Arts Department was
ceased to exist due to student fight.A furious student threw his fellow student from the first floor balcony on the ground..Police came,it was scary and rather ugly.As a result the examinations and the GS Election ,both were postponed.


Things got really ugly,Thakur Sajjan Singh was happy to see that his son was not chanting anymore the name of that Kayasth girl..Pratigya.Actually Krishna was angry with Pratigya and her family.Again,they must have sent Pratigya far away from Allahabad..and Pratigya..couldn't she oppose?Why always she gives up before her family members?Thakur Saab was again pressurised by the MLA,to fix the matter of the Professors..Shakti was out of town..Krishna insisted to accompany him..he was so eager to put a gun on Prof. Saxena's head and to have the address of Pratigya.


"Kaa hua Baba?Porfesorva k sar pe gun rakh k tu kaa kahega?Fir se natak kia toh dui jutta maarenge toka..behooda sasoora.."..Sajjan growled..


"Chinta na karo Baojee..us Porfesor ki aaj main band baja k rahoonga..sasoor humre naak me dum kar die..dekhte hain uu aapki baat kaise nahi maanta..". Krishna roared..

"Uski laundi ka bhoot to tohar sar se utar gaya hai..dubara oka dekh kar baola toh nahi ban jaayega..majnu ki doom?"..Sajjan teased..

"Kaa Baojee..aap bhi..aapko apne kaam se matlab hai na..ho jaayega..chalo abhi.."..Krishna started his jeep..


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Pratigya went to University,Adarsh had taken a leave to take Dadi to the Doctor.. Shyamjee was on a casual leave..Arushi was studying in her room..when the door was knocked..Shyamjee opened it and got a shock..Krishna was there and an
aged man was with him.Shyamjee recognised him,he was none other than Thakur Sajjan Singh."Namaskar Porfesor saab,aap bade admi hai,aapko samjhana bachchon ka kaam nahi..hum khud hi chale aaye..chaliye..darwaje par tamasa na
kar k..andar chal k baat karte hain.."..Sajjan enetered almost forcefully..


"Dekhiye Thakur Saab..aap jo kahne aaye hain,woh hum nahi kar sakte.." Shyamjee said politely..

"GS elecsion roj toh hoga nahi Porfesor saab..is baar paas karaye do..agli baar se aapko tungh nahi karega mera Beta.."..Sajjan assured him..

"Aapka Beta kaafi tungh kar chuka hai Thakur Saab.."..Shyamjee said annoyingly..

"Arre,haan,nahi aap bharosa rakhiye..Kisna ab aapki Beti k peechhe nahi aayega ..uske sar se bhoot utar chuka hai..aap bas yeh kaam kar deo humara..chaaho toh keemat lei lo..batao..kitna paisa chahie?"..Sajjan asked..

"Hum padhate hain Thakur Saab..bachche padh k jeevan me aage badhe..issi me hum khush hain..aur koi laalach humen nahi hain..aap meherbani kar k humen aise kaam k lia naahi kahe toh achha hoga.."....Shyamjee begged,..

"Aare yaar baat ko samajhte naahi ho..hum kaa keh rahe hain jisme hum dono ka faaida ho..tum sasoor..ek hi raag alap rahe ho..baat ko samjho yaar.."..Sajjan shouted ..

"Yeh humare usoolon k khilaf hai.."Shyamjee couldn't finish..his head was on gun point..Krishna aimed at him.."Zyada bol bachan nahi Sasoorjee..aapke usool gaye tel lene,Baojee jo kahe..maan leo..aur humka ee batao..Pratigyajee ko kahan bhej
die ho fir se?Humen aaj kal woh dikhti nahi..."..Krishna said angrily..

"Abe,tu fir se wahi chakkar me,Kisna,behooda,sasoor..kaam ki baat kar.. Porfesor.. ee k baat me dhyaan mat deo..humri baat suno.."..Sajjan suggested..

"Kyaa kar rahe hain aap log..?Dekhiye."..Nainajee cried..Shyamjee was perspiring ..Arushi came hearing the voices..after seeing the scene she became frozen..

Sajjan snatched the gun from Krishna,"Bhag be behooda..chup chaap baith.. sasoor..jinka Beta humri Beti ka jaan bachaya..usike sar pe tum sala bandook taan rahe ho...behooda..narak sala..baitho chup chaap.."..Sajjan said..

Nainajee and Shyamjee were stunned to hear that..Adarsh said Sajjan Singh's daughter's life?How?When?

"Porfesor Saab..baat ko samjho...jarurat hai yaar..varna hum aate kaa?"..Sajjan said politely..


"Sahi kaha..zaroorat hai..issi lia aap aaye..."..a female voice was heard..it was Pratigya..Krishna's face became enlightened to see her after a long period.. "Arre..aap yehi hain..aur hum abhi Sasoorjee se aapke bare me puchh rahe the..k aapko fir se toh
kahin bhej nahi dia inhone?"..Krishna said smilingly..


"Tum mere Baap ko gaali mat do..apna sasoor keh kar..samjhe?"..Pratigya said harshly..Sajjan Singh frowned.."Thakur Saab..aap apne Bete ko samjhaiye..jeena haram kar dia hai..isne humara...har jagah mere peechhe aata hai..I am really sick
of it.."..Pratigya said calmly..

"Haan..par itne dino se to aap humko dikhi nahi...kahan thi aap?"..Krishna asked shamelessly..Shyamjee and Nainajee were staring at both,Krishna and Pratigya.. "Woh kyaa hai..main din bhar chai ki dukan yaa dhabe par baith nahi sakti..road par yuh hi ghumna mujhe pasand nahi..main yehi hu..tumne sahi jagah dhundha nahi..aur tum naa khud wahan gaye ho kabhi..naa kisi aur ko soch sakte ho wahan par.."..Pratigya said...

"Ohhoo..aisa kaunsa mahel hai Beta..hum bhi sune..kahan jaati ho tum..jahan humar Kisna nahi jaata?"..Sajjan asked mockingly..

"Jee..University..woh kyaa hai..Lucknow se main Graduation kar k aai..Allahabad University me mauka mila hai..Law padhne ka..ussike classes hote hain Thakur Saab.."..Pratigya replied calmly..

Sajjan Singh looked at her for a while..she is good looking,Krishna is right,she is pretty indeed.Both siblings ,Pratigya and Adarsh,are handsome enough to tempt anyone.Krishna really has a reason to go crazy about this girl.

"Kaa hai..aapke Pitajee nahi samajh rahe hain..hum kab se keh rahe hain Beta.." ..Sajjan started to explain..

"Wahi..students ko pass karanewali baat?"..Pratigya enquired..

"Haan,Beta..wahi baat..samjhao apne Pitajee ko.."..Sajjan said..

"Mere Papa k kuchh usool hai Thakur Saab,failure students ko bina supply exam die pass karana..yeh kuchh zyada nahi ho gaya?Ek kaam kia jaa sakta hai..jisse aapka kaam bhi ho jaaye aur mere Papa k usool bhi na toote..",Pratigya
suggested,..

"Pratigya..yeh kyaa keh rahi ho?"..Shyamjee shouted...

"Relax Papa..let me handle this..we have had enough of this bull shit.."..Pratigya said..

"Kaunsa rasta hai tumre paas..jisse dono ki baat reh jaaye?",Sajjan asked curiously..

"Un students ko kahiye..k supply k exam me baithe..Papa unko jo chapters bata denge..woh ghaur se padh k aaye..ussi me se Papa question karenge..jo jo chapter Papa kahenge..zyada nahi..teen yaa chaar..asli exam se bahut kum ..woh log exam de de..passing mark mil jaaye toh thik..varna..fail,.."..Pratigya advised coolly..

"Sab hi pass honge..ee ki kaa guranty hai?"..Sajjan Singh asked..

"Humne kab kaha..sab pass honge?Do ek fail ho jaaye toh kya?Zyadatar toh pass ho sakte hain,wahi zyadatar log aapki party k lia vote karenge,chunav kaunsi party jeetti hai?Jinke paas zyada vote hota hai,hai na?"Pratigya said.."Un students ko kahiye..University me Papa se mile..suggestion le..baaki unki mehnat.. unki kismat.."..


Sajjan Singh thought for a while..she made sense.It was actually a way to keep both sides in balance.He was also irritated by the demands of the students who actually studied nothing and yet had a wish to pass.."You take it or leave it..yehi ho sakta hai..isse zyada Papa kuchh nahi karenge..aap chaahe yaa naa chaahe..itna hi hoga humse..aap soch lijiye.."..Pratigya concluded..


Krishna sensed his father's anticipation by listening the offer,"Dekha Baojee..bole the na..bahut samajhdar..padhi likhi..hain Pratigyajee.."..Krishna said gladly..

"Abe tum toh chup hi raho..sasoor kauno kaam toh tumse hota nahi..jab kaam banta najar aata hai..tab tumhara jaban chalta hai..lap lap..lap lap..behooda kahin k..thik hai Porfesor Saab..yehi sahi..aap itna hi kar deo..baaki ka hum samhal
lenge..chalte hain..namaskar..namaste Bhabhijee.."..Sajjan Singh left dragging Krishna by his elbow.."Chal be majnu ki doom..sasoor..nayi nautanki chalu tumri.. maarenge kaan k neeche.."..Sajjan said..

"What was that Pratigya.."..Shyamjee asked..

"Papa please..no more questions..I am sick of it..I had no other choice..Thakur Sajjan Singh is the best weapon to control that crazy bull.."..Pratigya said..and left to her room..


Edited by yakkudimag - 15 years ago
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Great!! Wish It Was Like That In The Drama ...
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Originally posted by: SadieLuvs_Suku

Great!! Wish It Was Like That In The Drama ...



Thank you,keep reading and keep loving.


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I am missing some comments..what is the matter?


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Hi there!!Awesome chp.Pratigya is so brainy and intelligent.She solved their problem with such great ease.
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Part 11


Pratigya wasn't being able to forget her own insult.It was not for spoiling her marriage plan,but the truth revealed in front of Krishna..that was hurting her the most.Everyday she starts getting ready for the University,she attends the classes, then goes to the library,then returns home,studies her notes..it is going on and on.She feels irritated,insulted and hurt.

Rohli came one day,"Pratigya..what about you?You just forgot me..it has been almost one month,you didn'y pay a visit to my house.What is the matter with you?"

"No...just usual things..study pressure..that's it Rohli..you tell..what's your story?" ..Pratigya said with a gloomy face..

"I am fine,well..your face is showing something else..out with it..are you in love?"..Rohli teased..

"No.."..Pratigya replied curtly.."NO?Ohh..so sad..you have joined the University.. and I can't believe that none of the University students hasn't fallen for you..yaa.. Uncle is there..but still..at least one student must have fallen for you.."..Rohli asked curiously..

"I was in Lucknow..if something was suppossed to happen in this way..that would have been taken place long time ago.."..Pratigya argued..

"It's a matter of time sweet heart..that might not be the proper time,that's why you hadn't have any kind of attention.."..Rohli explained..


"Please,cut this crap..talk about something else.."..Pratigya begged..

"Okay...let's watch a movie together this weekend.."..Rohli offered...

"No..not inclined to do that..lots of assignments..I can't.."..Pratigya refused..

"Come on..you are not the only Law student..Adarshjee..good to see you..you please tell her..please..let's watch a movie this weekend.."..Rohli said..Adarsh kept his bag aside..and realxedly sat on the chair..and said ,"Okay..but I will go with
you two.."..

"Ohh..that's wonderful..Pratigya..now you can't refuse.."...Rohli said..

"Okay..as you people say.."..Pratigya surrendered..


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The artist was doing his art work on Krishna's right lower arm.Pratigya,he was writing with his niddle..Krishna's face was indifferent as if it was not at all painful for him,he was relishing it.Tunna and Chandu had no choice but to see the act silently.

For Krishna it was not painful ,not at all..his actual agony was the attitude of Pratigya towards him.Her refusal was like the heaviest blow for Krishna.Krishna can't help but to think about her.He always had seen his father as the almighty, never saw any woman to whom Thakur Sajjan Singh had listened ever.But Thakur Saab was very pleased to see Pratigya,that is for sure.All the way he just praised about her,her cool brain,her easy attitude towards the problem,how quickly she solved all the dilemmas.."Dekh be sasoor..uu ladki hokar apne Baap ki paresaani door kar di hai..tu behooda ghar ka chirag..khandan ka waaris ..tu ka ukhad lia be?"..Krishna just grinned to hear that.Things are being easier,only he has to be patient to convince his father..but what about Pratigya..?Will she be ever soft to him?

One thing Krishna can actually notice,she is becoming pale day by day..all he can see a pale face,and very cold eyes now a days,the girl whom he saw at Sangam ,was lost somehow..what made her to change in this descending way?Krishna was
sad for her,everyday the same scene,white,sky blue,light green dresses,a pale face and a pair of cold eyes,with all the worries and all the heavy thoughts in brain..she comes and goes..don't her family members have the sense to feel that?Why she is like that?Her mother should take good care of her..

In the mean time,Krishna has changed a lot..he can do his signature now..he can write properly,nobody knows that,not even his closest friends Chandu and Tunna . Krishna kept it confidential.Nobody in Thakur House even knows that Krishna can read and write Hindi properly,he can even write his name in English.The day when Pratigya gave him the pen and paper to write about himself and his family,Krishna was hurt and ashamed.He thought he must prove her wrong.His mother also said that day that being totally uneducated it is unfair to demand for a girl who is a college graduate.Krishna understood that..he decided that at least he will be able to read and write .That may change Pratigya's mind.And he will also be able to write love letters to Pratigya.


She was coming out of the University premises...Krishna was waiting their..he was seated on his bike...when he saw her coming out..he started his bike,Pratigya looked at him..and she just ignored and walked to get a rickshaw..


"Pratigyajee..aapse kuchh kehna tha..zara idhar aayengi aap?"..Krishna requsted..


Pratigya gave a tired look..and took a deep breathe,"Now what?"..she said calmly..

"Us din..matlab jisdin aapne Angadva ko peeta tha..usdin..aapne ek kagaj dia tha.. humko..apna naam aur..ghar k baare me likhne ko kaha tha aapne..toh..rukie jara..hum abhi dete hain aapko..."..Krishna actually started to pen down his details
keeping the paper pad on the bike and leaning on it.."Uu..kaa hai k..haan sahi hai ..aap itni padhi likhi..humko bhi likhna padhna aana chahie..khair..ee dekhiye.. hum angreji me bhi apna naam likh die..haan angreji aur nahi aati..par Hindi hum ab achhe se padhna sikh gaye hain..aap jaisa utna achha nahi..par haan..padh likh sakte hain..ee dekhiye.."..Krishna completed his writing and handed over the paper to Pratigya..

Pratigya took a look of the paper,of course not a good hand writing,but yes..it was showing a great effort of someone who was really eager to learn writing,he actually tried very hard,whatever he has written,but what can Pratigya see that
Krishna actually tried very hard,with full determination..


Krishna was looking at her curiously,he was waiting for her appraisal..

"Well.. bachpan se hi agar itni koshish ki hoti..toh aur bhi achha likh lete..khair..it's never too late..aur practise karo..hand writing aur bhi achhi hogi..yeh toh achhi baat hai k yeh koshish chal rahi hai...keep it up.."..Pratigya said with a tiring look..

"Aap ko achha laga?"..Krishna asked smilingly..

"Bura lagne ki koi wajah bhi nahi hai..suna hai aapki ek Bahen bhi hain..Komal naam hai na uska?Padhai karti hai woh?Agar nahi karti..toh ghalat baat hai.. koshish kariye..k woh bhi padhne likhne par dhyaan de..Bhaiya bata rahe the..uske baare me.."...Pratigya turned Krishna's enthusuaism on a different way...

"Haan..naahi..uu nahi padhti.."..Krishna said..

"Hmm..okay..ab main chaloongi.."..Pratigya said..

"Ek aur baat..aapse puchhna tha humko.."..Krishna paused and then continued as Pratigya turned back to him ,"Aapki tabiyat aaj kal ka theek nahi rehti..aapka chehra itna utra utra kaahe lag raha hai?"..Pratigya gave a faint smile and said
,"Kuchh bhi toh nahi..zara padhai ka pressure hai..aur koi baat nahi.."...

"Arre aag lage aisi padhai ko..jo insaan ki shakal bimaron jaisa bana de..kyaa Pratigyajee..apna khayal rakhiye..aap zara bhi achhi nahi lagti aisi shakal me..aur itni bhi kyaa padhai..aaine me apna chehra dekha hai aapne?"..Krishna said
anxiously..Pratigya wasn't at all listening to Krishna but she was seeing his right arm where a tattoo was placed of her name,may be the latest addition of his crazyness.Pratigya was fuming inside her mind..a new idea to make her to feel
embarrassed.Damn!

"Mujhe jaana hai..Bhaiya k saath ek jagah jaana hai..namaste.."..Pratigya didn't wait anymore she just ran from there.

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Krishna was grinning by the thoughts of this afternoon..Pratigya liked his effort.. that's a good sign.She was not in a fighting mode anymore.She talked very coolly .Krishna felt very good.

"Baba kidhar hai?"..Sajjan asked to Thakurain.."Uu toh saam ko ghar aaya aur kamre me ghus gaya..abhi tak nikla nahi hai.."..Thakurain answered.Sajjan went to Krishna's room,he felt odd to hear that his son came home so early!It's just 7
o'clock in the evening.


Krishna was asleep hugging the pillow..the pillow was Pratigya..he was nuzzling Pratigya's neck..he was holding her very tightly..Pratigya was blushing and smiling ..Krishna was on cloud nine.."Umm..Pratigyajee..I lub you so much..aap humesha
issi tarha humare paas rahiye..hum aapko raani bana k rakhenge..khud se door naahi hone denge.."..


Sajjan was watching the drama...he let him to carry on.."Hum jaante hain Pratigyajee..aapka uu sadiyal Baap..Porfesor Saxena..mann karta hai saale k takle par fod de ek bomb..aur uu aapka Bhai..Adars..humar sala hai Partigyajee..par
badtamiji ki had hoti hai..hum kab tak bardast karenge oki badtamiji?".
.Krishna was dreaming..Pratigya replied,"Tumhare Papa bhi kuchh kum toh nahi na Krishna.."..

"Hum jaante hain Pratigyajee..humar Baojee bhi kum khadoos nahi hain..ee Baap log ki ek hi kahani hai..bachchon ki khusi..unka pyaar..in khusat buddho se dekha nahi na jaata..par suniyena..Partigyajee..humara bahut dino se mann kar raha hai..aapki ek chummi le..uu kaa kahte hain..haan kiss...aapko kiss karna chaahte hain hum.." ..Krishna pleaded..

"Nahin..koi dekh lega..humen sharam aa rahi hai..nahi Krishna.."..Pratigya refused..

"Kaa Pratigyajee..aap bhi..humar mann hi kharab kar dia aapne.."
..Krishna said sadly.."Arre kauno nahi dekhega..achha..aapko itni saram aa rahi hai..toh aap apni aankhe band kar lo..main bas ..chutki me kar loonga..kiss..ek ..bas ek chummi.. Pratigyajee..pleajee..humara bahut mann hai..bas ek kiss.."..

"Bas ek haan..uske baad aur nahi..theek hai..?"..Pratigya asked..

"Hum wada karte hain..aankhe band kariye..kaa hai k..humko bhi jara sarm aa rahi hai..aap dekhti rahengi toh hum kiss kar nahi paayenge..aankhe band kariye." ..Krishna requested and Pratigya closed her eyes..Krishna placed his lips on
Pratigya's lips..her lips are so soft..Krishna deepened his kiss....and he opened his eyes to see Pratigya's blushing cheeks..

And he saw a pair of angry eyes..eyes like wild cat,those were too known to Krishna..it was not Pratigya's eyes..it was his father's eyes...and Krishna felt that his father caught his ears and made him sit..."Kaa be..kaa besarmi hai..neend me
chumma chaati kar raha hai..sasoor..nalayak..uu bhi Lala ki laundia k saath.. behooda..Thakuraaiiiiiiiiiinnn,hian aao...jara..dekho apne sapoot ka karnama..."..

Sajjan dragged him catching his ear to the hall..in front of everyone..Dadi started to ring bell...everyone was shocked..

"Baojee..hum jawan ho chuke..neend me kisi ladki ka hi chumma lenge..aur uska jisse hum pyaar karte hain..Amma samjhao inko.."..Krishna said..

Sajjan beat Krishna black and blue..calling him with various names..


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Pratigya was sleeping...she saw a big room...this room is disturbing her from several days,in her dream.She walked through the room..walls are decorated with guns..Pratigya is jailed in the room..she is not being able to open the door.She is asking for help..but no one is coming..suddenly a very bright light fell on her..her eyes got blinded..and a robust figure started to walk towards her..it was coming from the dark side of the room..slowly it figure became visible..it was Krishna..he was holding a gun..and pointed at some point..Pratigya looked there..and she saw her father with...she heard a gun shot..and blood filled up the floor..her father was fallen on the floor in that blood..Adarsh was caged at the farthest corner of the room..he was also helpless..Nainajee,Arushi and Dadi ..all were under arrest..they were also at gun point..

Pratigya screamed but her throat was chocked,the holy fire was ignited..Krishna dragged her to the fire..and went round and round..her forehead,face got filled up with sindoor..then Krishna dragged her to inside the house..another room..his
room..he closed the door..and pushed her to the bed..



Pratigya woke up and looked at the wall clock..2 o'clock in the night..she was perspired to the fullest..it can't be true..no way..it's only a nightmare..it can't be the truth of her life..she remembered the tatto on Krishna's arm..her name was
designed in Hindi their...didn't he feel pain?He can't feel his own pain..then how can he be sensitive to feel the agony of other people..no..this can't be true..Krishna can't be the part of his life..no..everything will be ruined..no..for the first time she really felt scared..till now she was only worried..but now she is scared..very scared..


Edited by yakkudimag - 15 years ago
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I want comments..else I am not interested to write..sorry to say..but nothing is encouraging me to continue..




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Posted: 15 years ago
lol, the dream was hillarious. well written hun😊
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Originally posted by: yakkudimag

I want comments..else I am not interested to write..sorry to say..but nothing is encouraging me to continue..






dont take the lack of comments to heart, ur ff is new to me and u've got yourself a fan😊
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Originally posted by: Shabz.

lol, the dream was hillarious. well written hun😊



Thank you.keep reading..




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