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Posted: 15 years ago
Baaki k readers kahan hain?



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hi Ananya, just caught up with the last 3 parts, i love how krishna is maturing and how the story is progressing...both kriya a very strong characters and i cant wait to see how they come together.brilliant work hun👏
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Originally posted by: yakkudimag



Aur kyaa karoon?Readers ko pasand nahi aa raha hai..itni nutral story pasand nahi aa rahi hai..sab k Pratigya ko Krishna ki goad me dekhna hai..






hi ananya, me again...im an avid fan of ur fanfic...im really sorry for not giving prompt comments, im back at work and only have weekends to read ff's leisurely.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Shabz.



hi ananya, me again...im an avid fan of ur fanfic...im really sorry for not giving prompt comments, im back at work and only have weekends to read ff's leisurely.



It's okay..I also don't have that much time to update regularly..




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hey ananya,
i'm a silent reader ov ure ff but i must say bravo!!! its AMAZING!! im just spellbound nd speechless!! i was just wonderin wen r u gonna update next?? its just dat im sooo lookin 4ward 2 da next chap n sum interestin kriya scenes u tend 2 put in to em.,.........w8in desperately..........
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i have just read ur fanfic and i love it !! please dont stop updating tho!! :(
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hey ananya where r u ? plzzzz cntinue.....
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Part 19

They say sometimes the longest journey is the distance between two people.

Opposites attract,that is for sure..but sometimes too much opposition is also bad.. there should be some common traits,at least one.But unfortunately between Krishna and Pratigya there was none.This enormous difference was creating some
equal and opposite reaction.The difference of traits,because of them Krishna was being pulled towards Pratigya constantly..and every time Pratigya was feeling a push from her conscious and subconscious mind which was compelling her to run away from Krishna.Naturally,a Graduate from Lucknow University and an LLB student of Allahabad University will not show any interest .That is very obvious.

But making Pratigya of his own has become a challenge for Krishna now.As Angad and Company had spread the news all over Allahabad that Krishna Singh Thakur is in love with Pratigya Saxena..but it's Pratigya who is certainly not giving any footage to Krishna.It's now a prestige issue.At least Krishna thinks so..as the remaining part of Allahabad is least bothered about his lady love..they have other things to do.Everyone has daughters in their household,so they are least sympathetic about some Angad named menace or his so-called Krishna Bhaiya.

Krishna really wants to wring Angad's neck,but then Angad will open his mouth in front of Shinde for sure.Shinde needs just one chance to throw Krishna behind the iron bars.Krishna understands that very well.



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National Leprosy Cure Mission is going to set up a health camp for a week in a village named Daudpur in Uttar Pradesh.Besides some social awareness programs are also in the agenda.Medical students and Law Students are being enlisted for the mentioned program from various government colleges of Uttar Pradesh.Law students are to make people aware about the court of law as the Panchayat committee is full of corruption in case of making justice.All the matter of money.It's the Law students who are to make people aware about the law,the procedure of court,JUSTICE FOR ALL..this is the slogan.

Krishna heard the news,but he mixed up the Legal workshop with the Leprosy cure mission.The rest was very much expected,at least from Krishna's side.


Sajjan was talking to his mother..when Krishna came and said.."Pratigyajee ko laa do humen..abhi k abhi woh humare saamne aani chahie..abhi laao.."

Sajjan gave a sarcastic look then he continued his talking to his mother..but Krishna was also stubborn..he just kept eating Sajjan's brain..finally.."Abe..itna milneka mann kar raha hai toh fatfati nikaal aur uske maholle k do chakkar laga
k aa..humara bheja kaahe chaat raha hai?" Sajjan said disgustedly..


"Baojee..humko uu chahie..abhi uuko laa do..issi haveli me oke saath humri saadi karai do.."..Krishna insisted..

"Bhag be hian se..subah se aur kauno mila nahi toka?Kaa ho gaya be..thik tha.. achanak aaj kaunsi akashvaani hui be?"..Sajjan said in a raw tone..


Krishna became really frustrated...he came out from the house and then started his bike..


In the mean time Tunna came in Thakur Nivas.."Namaste Chachajee..Kisna Bhaiya kahan hain..kai din se dikhe nahi..phone bhi switch off aa raha hai unka.."..said Tunna..

"Kaa be..toka pata nahi..gaya hai uu Lala ki laundia par isque jhaarne..ghar pe bawal kar k gaya hai.."..Sajjan said..

Thakurain came and said anxiously ,"Aap hian kaahe baithe hain..Baba agar uu maholle me jaa kar kachhu garbar kia..toh kaa hoga?Jaaiyena..uko rokiye.."..

"Kaaho..Thakurain..uuka kaun kaa bigaar lega?Utha hi laaye uu Lala ki laundia ko.."..Sajjan said disgustedly..

"Ee aap kaa keh rahe hain..us ladki ko utha k kar laayenge..toh uska Bhai..Adars chhor dega ..aapko lagta hai aisa..uu ladki bhi kuchh kum toh hai naahi..aap kaahe jaane die Baba ko..jaaiye..rokiye.."..Thakurain cried..

"Chachejee..chaliye..aap pata nahi hai..uu jo DCP hai na..Shinde..uukre saath Saxena paribar ka achha rista hai..Kisna Bhaiya kuchh kie..toh uu Shinde chhorega naahi...aap chaliye...hum abhi Chandu ko bulate hain..."..Tunna said..

This time Sajjan could not remain relaxed..the matter is really serious.

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"Partigyajee..arre oo Partigyajeee..baahar nikaliye..hum aapko lene aaye hain.. aapko us jagah jaane nahi denge..aap jaa na paaye..eehi lia aapko apne sang le jaayenge..humre ghar..Partigyajee..kaa huaa..ghar k sab log kahan gaye?" ..Krishna shouted standing on the road in front of Saxena house.The neighbours were confused,anxious..road side shop owners were whispering with each other.. the crowd was assembled near Saxena house..


Professor Saxena just came back from the university..and Pratigya was studying, she skipped her classes as she was having fever..but being bed ridden was the last choice of Pratigya..she was engrossed with her text book.Adarsh was still in his office..Aarushi was in her computer class..Dadijee and Nainajee were shocked when they heard the shout..Prof. Saxena was spot rooted by this created scene..

"Kyaa bigara hai humne tumhara?Humari izzat is tarha kyun uchhaal rahe ho?Is tamashe se kyaa mil jaayega tumko Beta?"..Shyamjee literally begged to Krishna ,"Daya karo..hum par..yeh sab bandh karo.."


"Arre..aap kaahe haath jod rahe hain..aur humko kaahe samjha rahe hain..apni Beti ko samjhaiye..bimaaron k beech jaa rahi hai..kyun..khud us bimari ka shikaar hone?Uu toh maanegi nahi..eehi lia hum le jaayenge uu ko apne saath..aap logon ki baat toh sunti nahi..aap log bhi..Beti Kodion( Persons having leprosy) k beech jaaye..jeea ..mare usse aapko kaa..sara dard toh sirf humara hai,hai na Sasoorjee" ..Krishna smirked..

"Jis baat ki jaankari na ho..kyun uska batangar bana rahe ho..Pratigya k saath bahut se log jaa rahe hain..aur uska.."..Shyamjee couldn't complete..

"Aur log jaaye..humko farak nahi padta..par Partigyajee nahi jaayengi..bata rahe hain.."..Krishna said assertively..


Pratigya's headache increased due to the chaos..earlier she decided not to be involved in the nonsense..but now Krishna was getting on her nerves..she was feeling dizzy..and her body temperature suddenly had a rise.She came out from her room and Nainajee stopped her.."Pratigya..Beta..tum andar jaao..tumhare Papa hain na..woh dekh lenge.."..said Nainajee..

"Mummy..this is the limit..hum aur kitna bardasht kare.."..Pratigya roared..."Thik hai..hum abhi phone karte hain DCP Shinde ko..wahi samhalenge is gunde ko.."..

Pratigya dialled Shinde's mobile number..and it was switched off..then she called at Shinde's office..a male voice informed that DCP Saab is out of town for some Police Patrol Duty.."Ohh god..issi time ko unko baahar jaana tha..damn it.." ..Pratigya cursed and put the phone down.

"Pratigya..Beta tum bimaar ho..apne kamre me jaakar let jaao..bimari me gussa karna thik nahi..."..Nainajee insisted..


"Kaa hua..Partigyajee..kahan chhup k baith gayi..kaa socha aapne..aapko hum jaane denge aisi jagah jahan aapki jaan ko khatra ho?"..Pratigya heard..Nainajee and Dadijee heard ..again a shout from Krishna..

"Ram ram..iske ghar me Maa Bahen nahin hain kya?Humari Beti ki izzat yuh uchhaal raha hai..."..Dadi cried..


In the mean time Thakur Sajjan Singh came there on his jeep..Tunna and Chandu came along on a bike..

"Kaa narak hai be..kaa tamasa laga rakha hai?"..Sajjan said angrily..

"Thakur Saab..apne Bete ko le jaaiye yehan se..humari Beti ko kyun is tarha badnaam kar raha hai?Aap hi dekhiye..kyaa kar raha hai.."..Shyamjee begged to Sajjan..

Sajjan dragged Krishna..but failed..Krishna was too stubborn to stop.. "Eehh.. Baojee..khabardar..jo koi humare paas aaya..aaj hum faisla kar k rahenge.." Krishna announced and took off his wrist watch and breclet from both of his
hands..and then he took out two sharp daggers from his pocket..


"Beta..yeh kyaa kar rahe ho?Ab hum par chaku chalaoge?Pratigya ko bukhar hai..woh aur bimaar pad jaayegi..bhagwan k lia bandh karo yeh tamasha.." ..Shyamjee said with folded palms.."..Thakur Saab please..le jaaiye apne Bete ko.."


"Baba..chal hian se..ee Tunna Chandu..pakdo is ko.."..Sajjan instructed..Tunna and Chandu came closer and Krishna shouted.."Eee....paas mat aana..varna hum apna gala kaat lenge..bata rahe hain.."..

"Kaa gundai hai be..ab bandh karo ee sab..aur ghar chalo..sasoor humara belaad pessur ka khayal bhi nahi toka.."..Sajjan said angrily...

The scene became an entertainment for the passing people...they were relishing it..Shyamjee got embarrased to the core..


"Aaj faisla ho kar rahega..dekhte hain..humre pyaar me jyada takat hai k aaplogon k aitraaj me..Pratigyajee..baahar aaiye..duniya bhar k saamne aaj humre pyaar ka imtehaan hai..aapko bhi dikhana chaahte hain...."..Krishna shouted again..

"Beta woh bimaar hai..uskpar daya karo..."..Shyamjee said with tearful eyes..

"Wahi toh hum keh rahe hain..bimaar hai..fir bhi bimaaron k beech kaahe bhej rahe hain unko..Kod ki bimaari lag jaayegi..aapki Beti ka itna sundar chehra kharab ho jaayega.,..Baap ho kar aap dekh paayenge..bardasht kar paayenge? Bataiye Sasoorjee.."..Krishna said loudly..

"Humne pahle bhi kaha hai..aaj bhi keh rahe hain...Humare Papa tumhare Sasoor nahi hain..ab bandh karo yeh tamasha aur jaao yehan se.."..Krishna looked where the voice was coming from..Pratigya was standing there..her eyes were red..face
was pale..she was in deep agony and trauma..her blood was boiling..in anger..


"Pratigyajee..hum jaante hain..aap duniya bhar k saamne kahte hue sarmaati hain..par aap bhi humse utna hi pyaar karti hain...."..Krishna said cheerfully..

"Baat tumko samajh me nahi aati..kitni baar kahe..hum tumse pyaar nahi karte.."..Pratigya said angrily..

"Theek hain..saabit kar k dikhaiye..."..Krishna said and cut his wrists within a moment...

Sajjan was dumbstruck..next moment..he shouted.."Tunna..pakad be isko..abe kaa kar raha hai..?"..

Shyamjee also became scared....Krishna's wrists were bleeding enormously..


"Aaj dekhte hain..aap kitna natak karti hain..pyaar chhupane ki..Baojee..tumbhi dekho..Sasoorjee..aap bhi dekhiye..hum kitna pyaar karte hain..Partigyajee se.." ..Krishna said...no one was daring to come close ..Krishna threatened to cut his
throat..

Dadijee and Nainajee came out..and they saw the bleeding hands of Krishna... "Aap..arre koi roko is ladke ko..mar jaayega..ee jee..Thakur Saab..aap log kuchh karte kyun nahi?"..Nainajee screamed..


Mean while,Adarsh also came from his office and saw the mess..he said.."Not again.."..

Chandu suggested Pratigya.."Bhabhijee..ab aap hi kuchh kar sakti hain..Bhaiya toh zid pakde hain.."..

Pratigya became more angry.."Abhi aate hain..rookiye.."..said Pratigya ..she went inside the room and then came out..

She came in front of Krishna..and said.."Itne se zakham se kyaa hoga..mamuli cut hai..isko aur kaato...chalo..humko dekhna hai.."..

Everyone..including Krishna became stunned.."Kyaa hua?Zyada katne se dard hoga?Ab tumko dard bhi hota hai kya?Hum nahi maante..achha chalo..tumhara zakham hum aur gehra banaye dete hain"..and within a moment..she rubbed a mixture of salt and red chilly powder which she brought from the kitchen few moments ego..Krishna's both wounds got firy...

"Arre..Baap re..aap ee kaa kar di..."..Krishna screamed...his wounds were burning..


"Maza aaya..doosron k maze lena bahut achha lagta hai na tumko..ab dekho..khud ko kaisa lagta hai..wahiat insaan..dafa ho jaao samne se.."..and Pratigya fainted ..before she fell Adarsh got her in his arms...

"Iska toh badan aag ki tarha tap raha hai..Papa..jaldi..."..Adarsh took her in his arms and get inside the house..Doctor came..and said.."Deep trauma..excess tension..that is why blood pressure got higher..she needs to be hospitalised.."..


Krishna saw everything and then he felt a tight slap on his face..it was from his father,Thakur Sajjan Singh..Thakur Saab grabbed his collar and made him sit on the jeep..and took away him..

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Pratigya was senseless..she had high fever,103 fever she had..Doctor gave injection..and kept her under observation for next 24 hours.She was blabbering in her sleep..her agony..her humiliation were being clearly pronounced..Nainajee was crying..Dadi was cursing the whole Thakur family..Shyamjee really felt helpless..

Pratigya never did any harm to anyone..then why she is suffering this much?Why that Krishna just leaves her alone?He creates scenes on every second day..how long it will continue..

Adarsh was constantly nagging..Shyamjee said.."Please..stop it..Pratigya ki taraf dhyaan do..woh theek ho jaaye..fir kuchh aur sochna..pata nahi aur kyaa kyaa dekhna padega.."..


On the other hand Sajjan was throwing slang on Krishna..he was calling him by various names..Krishna was listening with bent head..Doctor was dressing his wrists with bandage..his Grand Mother was ringing bell..Shakti was fuming in
anger..Kesar and Komal looked clueless..Thakurain listened everything from Sajjan..and her mind went really against of Pratigya.How can she be so heartless that she rubbed salt and red chilly powder on Krishna's wounds?Here..Krishna all
the day just chants her name..his every action proves that how much he loves Pratigya..and in return..Pratigya did this!How?


Thakurain came in the kitchen to make some food for Krishna,Kesar followed her..

"Samajhti ka hai uu laundia khud ko..ooka batana padega.."..Thakurain was gritting her teeth..

"Amma..ek baat kahe..Bhaiyajee ne bhi saare maholle k saamne tamasa kia..ee toh thik nahi kia..unki bhi ijjat hai..ooka Bhai..Didijee ko ghar pahuchaya..aur Bhaiyajee bar bar ooka paresaan karte hain..unki bhi ijjat hai Amma..yehi harkat koi humre Komal Didijee k saath kia raha..Baojee..aur ee dono Bhai jinda toh nahi chhodte.."..Kesar said in low tone..

Thakurain was about to slap Kesar but then she realised that Kesar was absolutely correct..what Krishna did..that was not at all justified by any sense."Theek hai..hum khana lekar jaate hain..tum haldiwala doodh laao..Baba k lia..chalo..jaldi karo.." ..Thakurain said to Kesar.


Krishna was deeply indulged in the thoughts of Pratigya..she got fainted in front of him..she is now in hospital..just because of him..Sajjan's abusive words were not making any difference on Krishna..his mind was more agreeably engaged by the thoughts of Pratigya's well being.


Edited by yakkudimag - 15 years ago
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well written ananya...im glad you have taken a more practical approach and shown pratigya act as she had done👏
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Wooow!!! I Just Wish The Actuall Drama Was Like That :(
Cz Some Bits Of Your Story Line Is Kinda Related To The Show..Like Him Falling In Love With Her, Cutting His Wrist And So On But You've Changed The Whole Thing Like Where It Happend And How It Ended Up..Good Work =) Really Like This FF !

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