FF:Mohabbat Part 22@Pg43 Krishna hit Pratigya - Page 29

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Posted: 15 years ago
I was a silent reader of ur FF. But today i thought to break the silence. Good work Ananya, keep it up. Hope the actual show were like this. what I like about ur FF is that it is able to send out the message the show was indented for, that too without killing actual character sketch of any of the characters. All characters have thought process same as shown in the show ...yet the stoey is so differently refreshing. waiting to see how the ur story unfolds. Kudos👏
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Shabz.

well written ananya...im glad you have taken a more practical approach and shown pratigya act as she had done👏



Hmm..actually jab bhi aaj kal update likhne baithti hoon..tab yaa toh duniya bhar ka tension hota hai..yaa fir gussa ..saari bhadaas Krishna par nikaalti hoon..😛



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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: jaya_1234

I was a silent reader of ur FF. But today i thought to break the silence. Good work Ananya, keep it up. Hope the actual show were like this. what I like about ur FF is that it is able to send out the message the show was indented for, that too without killing actual character sketch of any of the characters. All characters have thought process same as shown in the show ...yet the stoey is so differently refreshing. waiting to see how the ur story unfolds. Kudos👏



Thanks Jaya,actually the demureness of Pratigya before the wedding seriously irritated me..that is why I made my way to write my version of Pratigya.I know I have many silent readers,I hope I will be able to write up to the mark so that every silent reader will break his or her silence just like you.




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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: yakkudimag



Hmm..actually jab bhi aaj kal update likhne baithti hoon..tab yaa toh duniya bhar ka tension hota hai..yaa fir gussa ..saari bhadaas Krishna par nikaalti hoon..😛



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Posted: 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago
Good job Ananya.Thanks for updating.It was a very nice chp.Poor Pratgya is going through quite a lot.And this stupid Krishna is still behind her.Looking forward to the next chp.😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: shruthiR

Good job Ananya.Thanks for updating.It was a very nice chp.Poor Pratgya is going through quite a lot.And this stupid Krishna is still behind her.Looking forward to the next chp.😊



Hmm..wait karo..aaj raat ko mera net connection disable hoga..kal renew karna hoga..fir subah se net chalu..


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Posted: 15 years ago



Part 20


A magazine of a gun was emptied..Angad fell down..Krishna looked at the dead body..he looked at the gun in his hand..he knew very well that DCP Shinde would leave no chance to search him..he thought surrendering would be a better option ..rest Baojee and Shakti Bhai will sort out.

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Chandu saw Pratigya and informed Krishna that Pratigya was roaming here and there in Salimpur area..Krishna became worried,he went to that neighbourhood.. and he reached..he heard the news that a girl has been kidnapped from the
middle of the road ..she has pretty looks,fair complexion and long hair..she was wearing blue dress...and Krishna became frozen..a cold shiver ran through his spine..


All of a sudden he drove his bike to Manphodgunj..there he found that Nainajee and her Mother-in-Law was crying ..Shyamjee was not in the house..so as Adarsh..but it was sunday..college,university and bank is closed of course.Aarushi
was also crying..and Krishna couldn't find a trace of Pratigya in that house..or in that area.


Those poor women couldn't say a word to Krishna..but Krishna understood what happened.The girl who got kidnapped from Salimpur is none other than Pratigya. And this dirty jod ofcourse has been done under Angad's supervision..that is for sure..Krishna called Tunna and Chandu.."Angad ko dhundho..kahin se bhi dhundh kar humre saamne laao.."

Angad was found in short period of time..and Angad said ,"Kaa kar loge be..utha lie hain..jo karna tha kar chuke..ghar pahoocha denge laundi ko..tum ghar jaao.. kal subah mil jaayegi..second hand..hum toh maza le lie..aur sach bata rahe
hain..chees hai..teekhi mirchi..tum bhi chakho..swad bahut hai..."..and Krishna spent the bullets on Angad..

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Balastic report came out..the bullets found in Angad Yadav's dead body were from the same gun by which Angad Yadav was shot a few weeks earlier..that time his hand was injured..moreover..Adarsh Saxena was framed in a false case..Krishna Singh Thakur is accused now..two major charges are against him..DCP Shinde threw him behind the bars.."So..Mr. Thakur..now you are in your proper place.. and this type of room will be your permanent residence if you don't get a death penalty..I will make sure that I will prove you guilty under the IPC 302..then either you will be hanged..or..............."..Shinde had a smile of victory..on his face.. at last..


Pratigya remained shocked ..she was seated in her room..in deep darkness..why SHE ?What harm SHE did to anyone?Why SHE got gang-raped..?Her body ,her unconciuos ,injured body was found by Police..but there were no clue about the
rapists..


Krishna instructed Tunna and Chandu to keep their mouth shut..there will be no talk about Pratigya in this case.Krishna didn't meet her after the disaster..he didn't want..his dreams got mutilated at once..Angad forced himself on Pratigya..he
raped her..will Krishna ever be so normal when he will see her next time? Every time he will remember Angad's words..the trace of pleasure on his face..Pratigya was raped..Krishna's dream got raped..why ?Suddenly Krishna felt guilty..he gave
Angad that much lift..if he didn't frame Adarsh in that case..Angad wouldn't have dared..Angad got an impression that now a days Krishna was not so active due to Shinde's eagle eyes..and Angad took the chance.Yes..it was Krishna who was the reason of Pratigya's fate..her fatal condition..

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Pratigya was crying..Shyamjee consoled her..but any consolation was not being enough.."You have to be strong ..it's not the end of life Pratigya.."..Shyamjee said..

Adarsh was dead silent..he hadn't spoken a single word from that day.A volcano was suppressed under the icy mountain.Anger was under grief.

"I tried Bhaiya..but I couldn't save her.."..a voice came into Adarsh's ears...it was Pratigya..she said with a pale face..her eyes were blank.."All were mask weared..I can't even recognise them..how helpless I am Bhaiya?Why SHE..?what harm
SHE did to anyone?"..said Pratigya...

Adarsh couldn't take it anymore..when he saw the injured body of Rohli..he just got spot rooted.Rohli isn't only Pratigya's friend,Adarsh also had many good moments, a feeling of affection,non-brotherly affection, a soft corner were hidden ,somewhere in his heart..He hugged Pratigya tightly...the whole Saxena family was under enormous grief..Rohli was none other than a family member to this house..they say Prof. Saxena has three daughters,Pratigya,Rohli and Aarushi..

That day ,Pratigya and Rohli was returning to Rohli's house after some shopping..a Maruti Omni came..and just snatched Rohli..all of a sudden that happened.. kidnappers covered her face with a black cloth tightly..within a second..the car ran
away...Pratigya shouted...ran several steps..and then informed Rohli's Parents.. then called her brother....and rest..is the history..

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Rohli was sent out of station..to recover her grief..Pratigya accompanied her,they went to Madhupur.Pratigya stepped back from the Social Welfare carriculam of the university...

Krishna was informed that Pratigya had been sent out of the city..where..they couldn't say..Krishna sighed..he was under jail remand for 30 days..DCP Shinde left no loophole..Krishna was arrested in non-bailable offence..now it's upon the
speed of Judiciary Panel..


Sajjan Sing wasn't that sad..as he and Shakti had shot several people in past years ..so many charges..still under scanning of District court and High Court..this is an honour for a Thakur..Muscle power has to be shown..this conceit is a prised
possession for the Thakur Fraternity..now Thakur Krishna Singh will also be mentioned as a MAN of Thakurs..now whole Allahabad will know that Krishna is not anymore the 'Baba' of Sajjan..he is a grown up man now..finally his blood showed the colour..showed how it can get effected when masculine hormones stimulates..


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Days passed..Pratigya was more engulfed in Rohli ..she always tried to make her smile..everything in her power..which could heal Rohli's pain..may be to what extent..Pratigya tried..in this trauma..who is Krishna.,.where does he live..all data
was almost deleted from her brain...

But nature has its own rule..you can't be so peaceful all time..Adarsh gave her a news that..Krishna is under trial..he killed Angad..Pratigya just said ,"Okay..let's change the topic.."..

Where Pratigya was desperate to forget Krishna..that time..Krishna was planning something else ..his aggression was raising day by day..but..there are always a bless comes in form of curse..Krishna shared his cell with an MBA who did lots of two and two five at his job place..Krishna gave him a proposal..in exchange Sajjan will bail out that MBA along with Krishna.


Edited by yakkudimag - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Sorry yaar..par kal raat se yeh behooda power cut..kyaa karti..issi lia update nahi kar paai..



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Posted: 15 years ago
Ananya,I am sorry since I am kinda confused.Who got raped???????was it Pratigya or Roli??

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