SwaRon FF : Alpha's Territory #2 | CH 11 : PG 21

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

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congratulations on the new thread marium. 👏

i am so happy.

well done. hoping to see more threads over here. 😃

now coming to the update

the way swayam's family and the pack welcomed sharon into their house. really warming.

i really loved the conversation between swaron over the food.

nicely done.

swayam knows coking ☺️

my dream come true. i really love guys who dance and cook as well. ☺️

loving this swayam even more. ☺️

but the end was weird.. i mean what is going on ??

PS. thanks for the PM

update soon and do PM me

PPS. people love your work Marium.

why are you talking like this. please don't ❤️

your an exceptionally good writer..

your works are definitely something worth reading. Zyada lamba ho gaya nahi 😳

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Shubhangi(shubhi)

@d3fan4eva

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Now this chap was really amazing..😉
Swayam knows cooking??!! 😲
Oh my god..😛

The end?? -_-
Wat was that??!!
Bit scared..:/

Update soon!!
15 pages??!! 😲

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

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Marium i am sorry! Super late hu mai yaar bt tu toh jaanti h mujhe :X
I am sorry!
Okay i want to know from where do you find stories man, kindly lend them to me 🥱
sharon and swayam spending time together, it was adorable ^___^
Then the wolf fiasco i really liked.
Swayam coming to sharon's house as Alpha and her mate 😳
This story is really captivating...since the start i say this is the plot which is really pleasing to read and i hope it continues like that. Swayam and sharon not confessing but still there for each other and fighting against all odds.
That sharon's boyfriend was so funny, i guess he was on hyper active mode since his birth.
Then swayam walking in and taking sharon with her...i really liked the scene that followed..their conversation in the car and then swayam replying her in oh-so--serious tone.

Then their homecoming!
Lol that intestine joke! hahaha poor rey.
I read the cooking part and i started feeling hungry -____-
But it was veryy cool re...itna acha cook karta h swayam...tabhi toh pasand h mjhe 😛
And fir wo last horrifying part...sharon jumped in her werewolf form to check on swayam, to save his life! Woah it was nicely explained 😊

Chal ab update krde 😳
Byes!

Edited by surbhimathur - 11 years ago

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

congozz 4 d new thread🥳

awesomee updatee👏

d swaron moments wer cuteee❤️❤️

something happ to swayam or s t a trap for sharon😕

continue soon😊

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Congratulations for the new thread!
Tarakki eh? 😉😎

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SHREYA

@riyasenak

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

I READ THE ENTIRE STORY FROM CHP1 TO 9 RIGHT NOW AND ITS AWESOME 👏👏👏 I REALLY LIKED IT AND PLZ DO UPDATE SOON...PLZ PLz PLZ PM ME WHN U UPDATE COZ I DONT WANNA LOSE TRACK OF THIS STORY...I CAN LITERALLY IMAGINE SHANTANU AND VRUSHIKA AS ALPHA AND LUNA...HATS OFF TO UR CREATIVE SKILLS AND THE WAY U EXPRESS SWARON FEELINGS IN EACH CHP IS COMMENDABLE...⭐️