SwaRon FF : Alpha's Territory #2 | CH 11 : PG 21

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

res

unres

i m happy tat you updated after a long tym

cong8 for the new thread

coming to ur ff

sharon is at swayam's plc

swayam the great alpha is also a great chief 😲

came as a surprise to me

but i luved it when he said tat he cooks for his family only

poor rey raat ko bhi uth ke katah hai

shayyad yeh dieting ka naya schedule follow kar raha hai 😆

the way swayam gave lloks to rey n the whole sequence

cracked me up i was literally shaking from laughter

the incredible portion of tis update was

tat it was changed from a light - hearted scene into an intense one

when sharon caught a different yet familiar smell

excited to read how the next chapter will shape up

do write more

looking forward to ur update 😛

Edited by rosyrkohli - 12 years ago

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Trisha paul

@trisha19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

congrats for the second thread..🥳

super awesome, mind blowing chapter...👏

the spaghetti sequence was really cute...

super excited to read the next chapter..

pls pls pls update soon

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meenal singh

@swaron_arshi_07

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

it was great as always
u are an awesome writer no doubt at that
swayam's thought for rey was really dangerous
it was really fun swayam is a good cook
i am confused by reading the last part
do update soon

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

congratulation for the second thread... the chapter 9 was fabulous...
swayan family and his pack member really welcome sharon in there house...
and yup i really liked the share of food where both swaron had a really conversation
and sharon is feeling strange in her room as someone is spy her and that why
she left to swayan room but did not find him and that why went out without inform
anyone because is worried for swayan... do continue soon and pm me

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Piyu

@piyu_swaron

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

res

unres

firstly congratulations for the new thread

nd sorry i forgot to unres

now coming to the update.. it was amazing

loved the way swayam's family and the pack welcomed sharon into their house

aww swayam knows coking.. nd The end?? Wat was that?? Bit scared.

update soon..

Edited by piyu1990 - 11 years ago

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964103

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Hi, I just finished all the chapters in one go!!! This is a very interesting concept!! So cool!! really want to know wat happens next!!:))

Update soon..😊

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swapna

@shan16

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: blush.

Thank you.

The following 46 member(s) liked the above post:
Pallavimalhotra, devsuchi, Renuka_tirthani, id4swaron, Dazzlerdiva, hellangels, loveswarom, swarontruelove, shan.ss, rinkubathija12, Love_shantu, Nikiee, lovely222, vishalfool, keetha..., Molly.Swaron, venusrockz, reet_26, km29, zk456789, roshni_rj, piyu1990, trisha19, shan16, dashinggirl, nidhi1998, -Raj-, Twinkle_d3, AnanyaVruShan, -Chaitra-, sweetydiyafrien, rosyrkohli, swaronlove001, bhanumathitanha, sweet16cash, Swaronvrushan, 1D_D3-Crazy, HPHolic-3, manasie23, ..euphoria.., sadafarsha, SanskritiS, -shenz-, -spongy-, nature2, aishu3003,

I know these are just 46 likes but i have more then 80 readers, dude! Just look up at first thread. Why am i getting such a low response now? Are you guys fed up of this story. Do tell me.

But anyways, whoever is still in contact with this story and showing there immense response, thanks to them a lot. I seriously love you for that! :)

-Marium

dis time i didnt got the PM..by chance i got to know abt new update ...i so loved th \is story n not at all fed up ...keep pming... :)

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anandita

@blooming_angel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Marium di...iss baar ur dead..pm na bheja toh bata toh diya hota...update ho gaya..and i was waiting... 😡 pata bhi na chala.. 😭

Well..spamming 15 pages.for such a beautiful piece of work is definetly not a prob for me... 😊

Its just onething i want to say about this chapter..khoobsoorat..

Congo for our new thread...

Perfect combo of emotions..in this chapter..

Tc..

Edited by Princess_anny - 11 years ago