SwaRon FF : Alpha's Territory #2 | CH 11 : PG 21

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bhavika

@BhaviJas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

Finally swayam confessed...sharon concern ws well penned...luving ths ff...update soon.. .

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

I'll be honest 😆

i dont have a very good idea about this story but i read this chapter and loved it 😎

So i am going to make it a point to read the whole story but it will take time..🤔

Sorry for that. and amazing writing.

Cheers

Nishi

P.S. I am a fan of your writing..read all your works except the FF's..

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meenal singh

@swaron_arshi_07

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

IT WAS AWESOME

i really liked the bond u showed between swaron was amazing

the confession was simple but special

really a very nice update

do update the next chap soon

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964103

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#104

You have no idea how happy I was when I saw the heading of this post changed in 'My Posts'. I love this FF. It is one of the most unique FFs. You have build upon the concept amazingly while not making the characters actually loose much of their real essence.

Sharon-Swayam chemistry is too hot! All the side characters never look like extras. I feel so happy after reading this and am totally lost in SwaRonland. Very few stories do that to me.

I am so happy you updated! I thought you forgot about it!:P

But please update faster... Not that I am ever going to forget the story, but excitement aur anticipation bhi kuch hoti hai bhai!:P

Thank You!!:D

P.S. Can I get a PM too?

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

For the starters marium. Welcome back.
Finally I got an update. Missed this FF so badly.

Sorry for the late feedback I'm a lot busy with studies. I know you'll understand.
Now the update. It was phenomenal.
The confession was the best part. The way swayam expressed his love. 😳
I really liked the way you described the tribe. They way they stand for each other and help each other.
Beautiful monologue by Sharon.

I even liked the way all the women in the pack were feeling during the fight.
that fright, pain and so scared. You depicted the emotions really well.
You surely are a marvelous writer. Would love to learn writing from you.

and lastly the end was shocking. Swayam ready to give up everything for Sharon.
I don't want that to happen. Please don't make it happen.
Will be eagerly waiting for the next update.
Thanks for the PM.

PS. Hope the feedback is up to the mark 😃

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--Ecstasy--

@--Ecstasy--

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#106

This ff is so awesome, what a concept.. 👏

Vei interesting plot.. Very brilliantly written..

You r an awesome writer..

Loved it..

Please update... Wanna read further..

Do pm me..

-Shivani 😊

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anjuvrushan

@anjuvrushan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#107

Really liked this ff ...different story different way of presentation...pls update

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@--lavanya--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#108

This ff stands out from other stories 👏
i read all the chaps in 1 go ...😛
it's really amazing ..😃
i felt like reading more and more ...😆
please don't end this midway...😭
and yes, UPDATE SOON...👍🏼