How about this?? (All FF writers plzz see)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ok so i have an idea for an FF😃 i donno who all are writers here so i just posted this idea here...
... i just wanted to know how many of you think its interesting?😛

Rudra's Father was also in BSD once, He was a good man but he had the same past (his wife ran away). He was in beerpur when Rudra was small and he had sent him to a city for studies.
ok... now small paro was in beerpur that time, the same rituals took place (as in the show right now) BUT with girl child ( as in child marriage). So small paro was married and everything takes place the same way as in show, but the difference is that Rudra's father killed everyone, and only little paro was left alive.
So he took her with him and provided her with everything she needed.

Now, Rudra grew up to become an Officer like his father, And paro grew up into a smart, lively, modern girl in some city ( like anushka sharma in Jab tak hai jaan😛). She is unknown of her benefactor (who is Rudra's father, as he kept everything a secret).. and has only faint memories of her terrible childhood...

Now, paro wishes to make a documentary on Rudra (just like in JTHJ😆) and she goes to beerpur for this purpose... and she is smitten by rudra, but rudra doesn't give her bhao and all (ya ya just like in JTHJ😆) and then the same thing Rudra fighting for his country and all...

Is it good?? i wud have written it myself but i don't have time and i am not that good in writing

anybody likes it?😳
waiting fr ur views 😳😳.

Rimi😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Your story is interesting but right now everyone is too involved in the actual story. Everyone is engrossed in the soft and shy character of Paro and the rugged and fierce Rudra. The backdrop is something never seen before. Thus such kind of an FF will be more popular may be.

Just a suggestion. Don't mind😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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i m ff ss os addicted,,,,,thnxx 4 ths one,,,,lovely,,,,
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Posted: 11 years ago
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rimi u here???????
ab mujhe parud ka bhi ache os,ff padne ko melega
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I would love to read it 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I love yr veeba stories...plz cont...it's interesting n diff
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet_gargi




Your story is interesting but right now everyone is too involved in the actual story. Everyone is engrossed in the soft and shy character of Paro and the rugged and fierce Rudra. The backdrop is something never seen before. Thus such kind of an FF will be more popular may be.

Just a suggestion. Don't mind😊



Hey thnku so much... Then i will think abt it later 😃 and i will be free by that time so i will write it myself... 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@ambika 😃 U too parud fan??? Wow i am so happy u r here too... :-) i will pm u my stories on parud too...
@Sofna- i am glad u liked my work on veeba... And
@every1 else who wanna read it,
Thnku so so so so much, i will write it as soon as i am free :-D

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