AkDha OS ~ A Lovely Evening Part 2- SR - Pg12

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❤️...One shot - A Lovely Evening...❤️

The weather was so calm and smooth. The evening couldn't have been better. The sun was about to set and all the birds returned to their
nests.
There they were, in the middle of the beautiful palace garden, surrounded by little butterflies and colourful fragrant flowers. The atmosphere was full of love it seemed.
The garden was Jalal's personal garden, where he and Jodha would spend most of their evenings..where only they would be there..far far away from worldly things..

He laid on the green grass peacefully, with his head in her lap, his eyes gazing at the sunset. She slowly and smoothly caressed his forehead and hair with her soft fingers..Today was something different, She could already feel. But She kept mum and continued to caress his head happily. She loved to see him happy.
It gave her eternal happiness and immense peace.

"Jodha.." He said with a contented tone and a happy smile..

"Jee Shahenshah", asked Jodha curiously..

"Hum aaj behad khush hain Jodha..man kar raha hai bas aise hi so jayein..tumhari god mein..bahut sukoon mil raha hai..", He said closing his eyes..

"Acha! Kya baat hai..Kyun itne khush hain", asked Jodha curiously with a blushing smile..but a little disappointment.

"Jaise ki tum jaati hi nahi ho Jodha.." He caught hold of her hands in his hands, and pretended to sleep..

Jodha was surprised by his actions. Ofcourse, they would daily spend sometime like this and they were more than friends, but getting very close
to him would definitely pace up her heartbeats. She loved his touch,but accepting the fact was too much to her. She knew he would never touch her because of the promise she had given to him. She didnt ask him anything further as she waited for him to say something.

Their relationship had undergone many hardships and misunderstandings, but the trust between them which they had on each other, made them fight those hardships easily. They had easily overcome the problems in their lives and everything had only increased the trust and love between them.
Their relationship was very much more than "just" friendship. Both of them had truly started feeling and falling for each other..They loved to spend more and more time with each other..

They would go for walks together, they would do sword-fight and enjoy the time, they would definitely have their meals together, no matter what circumstances!
They would spend their evenings together, comforting each other by promising that they would always stand by each other..
The more they were in each other's company, the more they craved for it..They got to know to know and understand each other so well..

Jalal loved this Begum of his, but he would never try to make her feel uncomfortable by any manner. He respected her and
everytime they were together, he knew he had promises done to her. Definitely, he loved her more than anything else, and he wanted to take their
marriage to next level, but he always feared to lose her if she mistook him.. No doubt, both of them trusted each other beyond words, but even the thought of
losing her made him mad. So he never advanced towards her in THAT way and he was more than satisfied with their lovely friendship.

Jodha had started falling for this man. She herself didnt know when and how it happened but Yes..She had fallen for him. She respected him so much because He had always trusted her inspite of
the differences between them. He had always respected her and never hurt her in any manner. She could not resist herself but love this man. She knew he would never break his promise,
and this is what made her fall in love with him. She herself wanted to take their marriage to next level but this was the only topic, both of them could not talk about to each other..

Jodha waited for him to say something but all in vain. She knew he was being mischievious. She slowly shifted his head to the ground and tried to get up and go from there.

As she stood up, Jalal held her hand and pulled her towards himself..And BANG! Jodha fell on his manly chest with a THUD! Omg! He had never done this before..How come today!
But Jodha couldn't help and her cheeks went crimson red.. Her head automatically dug in his chest, hiding the deep red blushes on her face..

Slowly she got up and sat by his side and said with an angry tone - Ye aap kya kar rahe hain Shahenshah?
She looked away in another direction..

The evening was passing quickly and night was already approaching. It looked as if the atmosphere was singing in their love.. Jalal got up, and he cupped her face.

She downcasted her eyes, for he was gazing at her with intense love in his eyes.

Jalal finally said with immense love - Jodha..Hum jaante hain ki tum bhi humse utni hi mohabbat karti ho jitni hum tumse karte hain...

Jodha's eyes me his eyes with a SHOCK! How come he knows this?

Jodha stammered - Ye aap kya keh rahe hain.. Hum..Hum to keval dost haina (her cheeks still blushing)..Humara matlab dost se zyada hain..lekin..Vo..

Jalal put his fingers on her lips and said with an intense low tone - Sshhh!! Kya hum aapko yaad dila dein ki aaj subha aap Kanha ji se kya bol rahin thin?

Omg! Another blower to Jodha! She self thought - Did He listen to what I was praying..

*Flashback *

In morning, Jodha was doing her morning prayers..She was so much in love with Jalal that she could hardly concentrate on her pooja.She was alone in her chamber..

She prayed to Kanha - Kanha..Hum unse bahut prem karte hain.. Hum unke bina nahi jee sakte..Hum unse pyar ka izhaar karna chahte hain..lekin samajh nahi aata kaise kahein..humnein unse jo waada karwaya tha,
vo bhi wapas lena chahte hain..(with this, her eyes were teary with love, and her cheeks were blushing)..Aap samajh rahe haina Kanha..Hum nahi jaante kab aur kaise humein unse prem ho gaya,
lekin, haan , ab vo humare sab kuch hain..Unhone humara vishwaas aur dil dono jeet liye hain..aur hum unse keval prem aur prem karte hain..

Little did this Queen know, that her love, her husband, was standing at the door, listening to her words. He had come to fill her maang with sindoor, the moment which both of them loved.
Jalal's eyes were teary too.. He quickly wiped them off with a smile on his face.. His happiness couldnt be expressed in words..

He said with a happy tone - Jodha..Kya baatein ho rahi hain?

Jodha turned around and was surprised and shocked, thinking whether he heard her or not.. She said - Kuch nahi Shehenshah.. Aaiye na..

Jalal pretended as if he didn't hear anything and advanced towards her to fill her maang.. As he filled it, both of them got immense peace and pleasure..

Jodha was relieved seeing his gesture, for she could make out he didnt hear anything...

After, they spent some peaceful moments together, Jalal left for Diwaan-E-Khaas.. Jalal knew what he was supposed to do today..

*Flashback ends*

Jodha - Kya..kya keh rahe hain aap..(She looked away from him)..

Jalal grabbed Jodha with gentle touch and hugged her with passion..

Was it their fire of love..or was it their passionate hug..or was it their overwhelming feelings..But it started raining..

Jodha did not resist..Both Jodha and Jalal were lost in each other..Probably this was the first time, that they were so close..God! Their hug was one of the most passionate ones!
They enjoyed each others' warmth,..Jalal ran his hands around Jodha's back to cover her fully and take her in his embrace..Jodha hugged him tight too..

Both of them were fully drenched in the rain..Jodha broke the hug and asked with a hard blush - Iska arth hai ke aapne humari baat sunli thi na..

Jalal nodded in a mischievious YES! He asked her in a slightly angry tone- Ye to humara naseeb tha ki humnein aapki dil ki baat sunli..warna aap to humse kabhi kehti hi nahi..

Jodha now retorted - Jaise aap humse kabhi kuch kehte..huh! She stood up but slipped because of the water..

Jalal caught her by her bare waist at the correct moment ..and looked into her eyes..

He said with immense intensity - Hum aapse behad mohabbat karte hain Jodha..behad mohabbat..Aur..(almost closing in on her)..Aur humara rishta aage badhana chahte hain..

Jodha looked in his eyes with tears..and a smile on her face..Before she could get out of his hold..He lifted her up in his arms..

The rain poured heavily on this heavenly couple..

Jodha was in Jalal's arms..Both of them were lost in each others' eyes..Their love would reach its peak tonight!

Suddenly, Jodha pinched on his cheeks..and got down from his arms..Jalal was like WHAT.. Before he could catch her..Jodha started running in the garden..enjoying the rain..

Jodha turned back at him and giggled..looking at him with catch-me-if-you-can gaze!.. Jalal smirked at her..

As Jodha ran in the garden,. playing with flowers and enjoying the rain, she forgot that she was supposed to run away from him..
She looked at pouring sky..and started dancing merrily..as if she was the happiest woman on this Earth..

Her heart wanted to dance..sing..and Jodha started dancing in the rain ..She started singing too..

Jodha - Ban ke titli dil uda..uda ..uda hai..Kahin door..
Chalke khushbu se juda juda juda hai..kahin door..
Haadse ye kaise ..unsune se jaise...
Chumein andhere ko..Koi nooorrr..)
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Jalal who wanted to catch her..stopped ! He was lost in this beauty..He never saw her dancing and singing like this..He just could not take his eyes off this Stunning DIVA!😳
He reached to her and joined her..All this was happening to them with immense love in the atmosphere..He was purely mesmerised by her..

Jalal - Sirf keh jaun ya..aasman pe likh du..
Teri taareefon mei..Chashmeibadoorr..

Jodha smiled at him and continued singing and dancing in the rain.. Both of them were fully drenched..But the fire of their love was warm enough to both of them..

Jodha went to another corner of garden and looked at him with love in her eyes..She danced and sang...

Jodha - Adhuri thi zara si..Mai puri ho rahi hun..
teri saadgi mei..hoke chooorr...
Banke titli dil uda uda uda hai..
Kahin door..

Jalal was so mesmerised by this tantalising beauty.. He was the happiest and luckiest man on this earth it seemed..He advanced towards her slowly..
As Jodha was lost in dancing and singing, Jalal got hold of her waist and trapped Jodha between him and the garden wall..

Suddenly, Jodha came back to senses with his touch..She was breathing hard..She was struggling with her feelings.. Her face, her eyes, her lips were all drenched in the dews of this rain..
Jalal looked at her with final intense gaze of love...Jalal's lips closed in on Jodha's lips and before both of them could realise, their lips sealed each others..

A passionate kiss went on as the lovely night finally approached...They savoured each others' lips..This was a Divine moment for both of them.. Finally they had confessed their love to each other..
And that, tonight they would be one...As They broke the kiss, Jalal lifted up an all red-blushing Jodha in his arms..and headed for their room..❤️

Their Love was all divine and pure..their love story reached its peak that night..❤️

Thank you for reading this! I hope you guys like it! The OS dedicated to Tahni darling, Bhavs di, Pallu Jaan and all my lovely shovely friends and readers!❤️
Ofcourse the OS is also for all AkDhaianss..!😃 Do Hit like and comment!😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aye hayye Nanu! Kya baat hai... Kahi tumhe pyaar toh Nahi hogaya?? Thankx Jaan for dedicating this OS to me.. I'm so touched with this my darling ❤️ The OS was brilliantly and all the credit goes to the beautiful and talented writer we have right her... Nancy.. The Jaan if this forum ❤️


My evening passed lovely just because of this OS of urs.. Hayye! I'm still blushing because if the last part.. You are one amazing writer.. U can make the heartless people like Jalal fall in love with ur Writings. Aaj kaal Akdha ki Bohot Yaad Arahi haina?? Issiliye itni romantic wali update likh diya..


Love the song... Banke titli dil uda.. This song is made for AkDha ❤️


Love u Yaar 🤗
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wow ...amazing os...wish the cv's would use their brains to come up with something half as beautiful.
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it was another beautiful OS nancy ...
The scene were very well expressed between them ..

Their passionate hug ! their kiss , their love .. it was all so beautiful
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Originally posted by: aanchal_c

wow ...amazing os...wish the cv's would use their brains to come up with something half as beautiful.

Awww Anchal jaan 🤗 Thank You so much re..You gave me such a heart touching compliment yar..love u 🤗 Thanks a lot!😳
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Awesome, beautiful,fantastic, very Romantic OS Namsss
😳 Wow!!!!!!!!!!😳
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wow superb os👏
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marvellous os dear and thnkx forr pm
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Awesome superb beautiful os 👏
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Loved it , very beautifully written ...wish we could see something like this... RT and PS would do an awesome job.

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