AkDha OS ~ A Lovely Evening Part 2- SR - Pg12 - Page 15

Originally posted by: ...Arshaya...

me speechless!
I love my nanu for this chapter

Originally posted by: pupumon

Serial k AkDha SR ka toh pata nahi... But ur SR of AkDha was too sensual. It made me visualize line by line. This is what it happens when we get to read such brilliantly written stories! Ur a genius at FF... if u ever wanna shift from.chemistry plz become an author.. n keep giving us such marvellous write ups. I m just awake at such odd hours only to read this SR 😆

Originally posted by: dkorumilli

its just amazing 😊

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

😳OMG !!😳 😳OMG !!😳 😳OMG !!😳

⭐️⭐️⭐️MAAR DALA... SAB BACHO KO MAAR DALA.. GHAYAL⭐️⭐️⭐️

loooll.🤣..thanksss di..

👏👏ME YE PADNE KE BAAD GUESS KONSA GANA GA RAHI THI👏👏

BHIGE HOTH TERE...PAYASA MAN MERA... LAGE ABRA SA...YE TAN TERA...

TERI YE SR KA BHUGTAN AMIT NE KIYA LOL😆😆😆

rofl...🤣...kyun jeeju ki band Baja rahi ho...🤣\

😳MUJE KUCH BOLNE LAYAK CHODA KAHA... AESE AESE UPDATE DETI RAHI.😳..

MERE MUKH SE HASI JA HI NAHI REH... WHEN I WAS READING MY HUBBY WAS SITTING NEXT TO ME HE WAS LIKE... WHAT IS GOING ON... WHY I AM SO BLUSHING AND SMILING...

YAAR ISSE ACHI SR KESE HO SAKTI HAI... BAARISH MY FAVORITE...

PASSION BETWEEN THEM... YE SR KOI 70+ PADEGA TO USKO JACKPOT LAGEGA

KISI CHIJ KI JARURAT NAHI PADEGI... LOL... MERA CHATAK GAYELA HAI BACCHA...

MERA GUTTER MIND FULL ON ACTIVATED HAI...

thank you thank you thank you 😃😃 I m so glad u liked it..

I LOVED IT WAS PASSIONATE WITH INTENSE LOVE... THAT MAKES BEST SR... HOW CARING MY JALLU IS... AB MENE IS KO AB TAK 10 BAAR PADH LIYA HAI...

AKDHA MUJE PAR REHEM KARO...AHEMMM LOL😆😆

EK EK SCENE KO PIC KIYA HAI😆...I AM BLUSHING WHILE WRITING...

YAAR MENE SOCHA HINDI ME COMMENT LIKHU... TERI ITNI ACCHI SR PE KUCH KO ALAG KARU... SORRY FOR LATE COMMENT BUT THANK U FOR SUPER DUPER HOT HOT HOT PASSIONATE SR... ⭐️

😃AMAZING!!! MIND BLOWING!!! SUPERB SE BHI UPAR!!! U ROCK BABY😃

MY ROCKSTAR ROCKERZ NANU MY LOVE⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

MY ROCKSTAR ROCKERZ NANU MY LOVE⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

MY ROCKSTAR ROCKERZ NANU MY LOVE⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

MY ROCKSTAR ROCKERZ NANU MY LOVE⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

MY ROCKSTAR ROCKERZ NANU MY LOVE⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I love so much Bhavu di... You are such a wonderful darling...cant imagine my life without you my love... Thanks a lot for appreciating my work..our group ..our gang rocks...😃

Originally posted by: Pals2411

Oh dear Princess, such a beautiful piece of writing. Imaginative, sensual, engrossing and not the least bit explicit. The fear that Jo has, the way in which Jallu comforts her, were some of the emotions that were handled brilliantly in this part. However one thing that left me cracking and I am still laughing is how you mentioned that Jallu went for the final deed. 😆😆 Well, that was enough though😆😉😳 Great work dear👏