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Posted: 12 years ago

#651

Originally posted by: 1D_D3-Crazy
I hope nothing too bad happens
Nice promo
Waiting for the update

Let's hope that 😛

Will update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#652

Originally posted by: -Raj-
Oh wow!!!!!
What a promo man!!!
Super!!!
Happy new year!!!

Thanks

N same to u dear

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Posted: 12 years ago

#653

Originally posted by: rosyrkohli
waiting for an update 😛

Haw itni jaldi update 😲

Lol ok will try my best to update soon 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

#654

I hope you all liked the promo

Thanks to all those who commented and hit the like button

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Posted: 12 years ago

#655

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Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 12 years ago

#656

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Angel my dearest sister you write bloody awesome and i absolutely love it when you write emotional updates they're always a bomb...❤️ 🤗.

Starting with the update i loved Sam's pov this was the first time i saw Sam who is normally a prankster and a cool headed person display rage and more importantly it was for his bestie and i loved that part..👍🏼.

I loved the amount of care and affection Sam holds for Sharon and the bond which they share..😊. The little fighting sequence which you showed was good too and initially even i could'nt understand why Swayam was'nt reacting given the fact that he is a temperamental person by nature and then all my question were answered by Sharon and at that time my heart went out to Swayam he was punishing himself for subconsciously hurting his bff.. The entire sequence where you showed Sam and Sharon's pov was penned down very very beautifully by you their pain and their longing for each other could be seen easily by me...😊.

Then the part in the end where Swayam tells he will come back and clear everything makes me expectant of the next update so you better update soon gal warna woh headlines toh tujhe yaad hi hai..😆.

All in all an awesome update beautifully written..👍🏼.

Love,

Kashi..🤗.

Edited by sweet16cash - 12 years ago

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Divyana maheshwari

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Posted: 12 years ago

#657

Res/unres
awesome update.. Luved it.. Update soon

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ANMOL

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Posted: 12 years ago

#658

res

unres

wow its an aswom update loved it. ...

this stry bcms more intresting...

waiting 4 nxtg update...

update soon
sry 4 late rply

Edited by swaronlove001 - 12 years ago

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rosy kohli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#659

it was short but substantial

as a writer you definitely know how to catch the interest of ur readers

bohot sahi tym phe chapter ko end karti ho

i liked the way you potrayed sam's feelings

as a true frn he was concerned about sharon

n sharon knowing swayam so well she understood

why he was behaving weirdly

i loved the way you showed sam - sharon bond thr

but the best part was tat swayam had heard everything

n he knows wat sharon feels for him

eithr its gonna be awkward for the two

or swayam will confess in the end

but i m waiting for swayam's pov

do write more looking forward to ur updates 🤗

Edited by rosyrkohli - 12 years ago

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Nikki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#660

Nice update :)

I don't really like the way Sam reacted I know he's her best friend but he was too possessive it was kind of like their going hit or something but I hope he doesn't cause any problems for SwaRon

I loved a how you showed Sharon's POV

I really want to know what Swayam was thinking at the moment

Please update soon :)