OS: Chor! - Page 5

Originally posted by: krati5

oh wow... whole OS was incredible but the punch was last line. 'ab to Asad keh kar pukaro'😊

Haha thank you! Funny part is that Zoya still doesn't call him Asad in the show up till now!!

Originally posted by: Maliaa

Umm...
that was just amazing...

just today,, i came across ur os,,,
n still aftre 6 months of this episode i could cherish all the joy,,, thas the beauty of yo writing skills n ASYA...

Man! two lines which i loved most
1= Yahan na to koi chor hai aur na hi Tannu...
2= Ab to Asad keh kr pukaro...
loved it!!!
do you have any index??

Hello (: Thank you so much! That's really kind of you to say (: This was my first fiction piece on QH ever, so it's close to my heart and even more heartwarming to hear this from you (: I do have an index now, here's the link: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3663580

It's a sweet OS!! Absolutely lovely, and what I liked more is the ending where he asked her to call him Asad :)

Originally posted by: ..Breeze..

It's a sweet OS!! Absolutely lovely, and what I liked more is the ending where he asked her to call him Asad :)

Good one😊

Haha thank you, that does seem to be everyone's favourite bit (: Glad you liked it!!

Amazing OS

Originally posted by: aniiee

Ab toh muje asad kehke pukaro😆

Love it[L]

Abhi tak nahi karti!! Hahaha oh well :p Glad you liked it! (: