OS: Chor! - Page 3

Aewwwn that was school cute and the last lineee
Masha Allah loved it

superb👏👏well written

aww its such a cute update

I so wanted the seen of zoya barging into Asads room in QH to have ended at this note.. Whoa... But, that ain't possible.. Well written.. Dear.. Perfect!!!!

damn! dis was utterly cute! very very cute indeed! I could imagine every detail..so well described and it refreshed me too :) and yes Zoya barging again scene was wow..kaash the same would have happened in QH <3 but this was lovely

Originally posted by: pixie_n

damn! dis was utterly cute! very very cute indeed! I could imagine every detail..so well described and it refreshed me too :) and yes Zoya barging again scene was wow..kaash the same would have happened in QH <3 but this was lovely

and the line ab to asad keh kar pukaro!!<3 took my heart away..i really want to hear dis in QH😳

very nice OS.. like it

wow...awesome os!

Originally posted by: goingreen

Haha aw, thank you!! Yeah I wrote this secretly hoping that some parts would actually happen in the show, like Asad telling Zoya to call him Asad for goodness sake haha. Maybe one day (:

I have read it bfr but had no idea thou have wrote this.