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jazz

@jazmeen

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Aewwwn that was school cute and the last lineee
Masha Allah loved it

Edited by jazmeen - 12 years ago

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-krrish-

@-krrish-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

superb👏👏well written

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Neha

@Asyalover

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

aww its such a cute update

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Dee

@Enchantress

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

I so wanted the seen of zoya barging into Asads room in QH to have ended at this note.. Whoa... But, that ain't possible.. Well written.. Dear.. Perfect!!!!

Dee

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pixie_n

@pixie_n

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

damn! dis was utterly cute! very very cute indeed! I could imagine every detail..so well described and it refreshed me too :) and yes Zoya barging again scene was wow..kaash the same would have happened in QH <3 but this was lovely

and the line ab to asad keh kar pukaro!!<3 took my heart away..i really want to hear dis in QH😳

Edited by pixie_n - 12 years ago

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goingreen

@goingreen

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: pixie_n
damn! dis was utterly cute! very very cute indeed! I could imagine every detail..so well described and it refreshed me too :) and yes Zoya barging again scene was wow..kaash the same would have happened in QH <3 but this was lovely
and the line ab to asad keh kar pukaro!!<3 took my heart away..i really want to hear dis in QH😳

Haha aw, thank you!! Yeah I wrote this secretly hoping that some parts would actually happen in the show, like Asad telling Zoya to call him Asad for goodness sake haha. Maybe one day (:

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Zaina

@CrazyForAshish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

very nice OS.. like it

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GrilledCheese

@GrilledCheese

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

wow...awesome os!

it was wonderful..loved it!

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pixie_n

@pixie_n

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: goingreen

Haha aw, thank you!! Yeah I wrote this secretly hoping that some parts would actually happen in the show, like Asad telling Zoya to call him Asad for goodness sake haha. Maybe one day (:

warmly welcome😳 yes it vil have to!<3 ur os has forecasted it😉😆