SwaRon OneShot Gallery#PlayingLove (New OS- Casual Encounter) Page4 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
that was a superb and fabulous os... loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
shenz kya soch thi ho yaar
itna out of the box tha yeh os 😉
as a writer you have a very fine eye for detail
yu always write in a very compelling
narrative style in a intriguing form.👏
coming to ur os it had all the phrases of romance
passion , emotional , friendly teasing
but the best portion was swaron teasing each other
n the epic tunnel romance ☺️
it was a very refreshing ,creative,soul- satisfying read !!!


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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
edited pg-1..sorry for the delay
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
Shenzzz! :D
Awesome OS yaar! :) Write more...and i'll read them when i get time! :D
And i know how Mumbai ke local trains are...coz i travel in them when i come to Mumbai! :D
P.S.Sorry for short commentt!! :(

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Short and quick replies:



@Fanista: Thanks a lot.. And I am glad I could make you all happy, but that's just the beginning.

@Nuts_Shantanu: Sorry, I don't know your name. But thanks.

I am glad you people liked it.


@Nishi: thanks to you.. I know many people are aware about local trains..


@medha: Thanks. I guess you interpret my works really well.


@deepika di: You don't need to be sorry because anyways, I even love your reserved comments as well.

Because then it's like a promise that you would come back and edit your comment And I know you would.

All I can say is thanks a ton, I am blessed by those compliments..


@Nidhi: Thanks.. I know people won't think of this in rational minds but when I witness it, I can 😛


@tannu_swayam: Even I have been witnessing those scenes, but on this couple it looks fabulously delicious. And thanks for appreciating.


@Isha: mujhe ideas bhi aisi jagah se hi aate hain.. People romance in public and when I havemy friends around, they don't spare a single incident to pass comments. Then automatically I have my mind working on such tracks 😳

Don't die, itne mein hi marr jayegi toh baaki ke kaun padhega?

Oh it seems good to have a fan! But main koi superstar nahi..


@AnanyaVruShan: thanks


@kashmi: thanks a ton.. but this is the effect of local as well as SwaRon!!


@Sanskriti: thanks. But I know all the trains are flooded with people these days.


@snehaswaron77; thanks. Simplicity is the best. And so are SwaRon!


@Aishu: Thanks yaar!


@Marium: God! I thought there was more to your lovely experience, lights off, laid on bed and all.. Are you serious? 4, you sure you wee awake at that time to read this? Because I never would have, not with my sleep on stake.

Anyways thanks for taking the pain and reading it. I just don't know how did you manage it.


@sweetdivy: Thanks. I know while imagining the entire One shot I was smiling. I just loved to visualize them like that.


@sweetdivyafrien: Thanks


@rosy: thanks. You make me smile throughout. Your comments are wonderful and a treat for me to write. But that's too much of appraisal.


@neeraj: Thanks for the read.


@Snehu: OMG!! Snehu! you are here commenting on my work. *bows down to you* thanks for sneaking out some time out of your busy schedule and giving it a read. And I really mean it. And like always I love your comments. 😃


sorry if I missed out anyone.

Edited by -shenz- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
Amazing OS 😊
I loved the way u write👏
Their feelings towards each other beautifully penned
Loved the flow of OS

Sorry but mujhe achi tarah se comment krna nhi aata
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing OS
I loved the way u write
Their feelings towards each other
beautifully penned
Loved the flow of OS
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Posted: 11 years ago
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WAnderfull update😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Totally fabulous writeup 👏
Beautifully penned down ⭐️
Different and amazing concept 👏

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