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medha

@ToujoursPur

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Posted: 11 years ago

okay---getting a sculpture done is a fantastic and dangerous idea!

well written---but it lagged just a teensy bit i think. just my opinion.

but i love the way you write

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fanista

@fanista

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Posted: 11 years ago

FAb !!!!

as i say always , you are a killer

killed it !

nailed it !

ummm desires and all ...

i go thralalalalala after reading this 😊

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

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Posted: 11 years ago

tis was one hell of a work

it was a blend of evrything

it was seductive , desirable, alluring , inviting , sensual,

provocative , tempting n passionate .

just like a poet writes his poem straight from the heart

your write up are becoming more poetic rhythmic. seamless n in sync

the way you potrayed sharon

was fantasising about swayam

was very penned 😳

n the best part was sharon din even know his name

i luv it when you add humour in between such a intense script

ur writings keep me bewhitched to ur story

all in all a very faru update !!! 👏

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meenal singh

@swaron_arshi_07

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Posted: 11 years ago

i just loved this os
the intensity the emotions
everything was perfect the flow of the os was good
magical swaron
thanks for writing

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

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Posted: 11 years ago

different but quite wonderful and beautiful well written... loved it

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Yogini

@yogini64

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Posted: 11 years ago

superb concept... 😃

Quite unique n different... 😊

I was thinking... wats wrong with sharon... 😆

But her crush on swayam is quite a bit from sometime... 😛

This sculpture idea is great... n sensous... 😉

Ye swayam ke grandparents kaunse checkup pe gaye they vaise?? Subah tak bhi ni aaye... 🤣

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Abay

@ikki215

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Posted: 11 years ago

beautifully written OS 1 u nailed the emotions and the urges bang on

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

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Posted: 11 years ago

Read both the Os's

you truly nailed it

both of them were so different and unique in their own way..

the emotions were fabulous and so was the story

thanks for the PM

keep writing more

PS. sorry for the late comment

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Divya

@Winter_Falls

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Posted: 11 years ago

superb... 😃

another unique concept by you..i like it..

it was cute and romantic.. 😳

sharon is very naughty i must say.. 😆

every emotion in d OS nicely penned down..

just loved it.. 😊

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

The latest PlayingLove series One Shot being posted seperately.

Check, in case you haven't

SwaRon One Shot: Strip to Trip

^More to come and will be posted here itself. #hopefully.

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