Rishbala FF- A Twist Of Fate -Chp.15/Pg127-[05/10] - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Guys am sooo sorry for not updating since sooo long...am truly sorry! was really busy...had my exams and it was my cousins wedding to which i didn't really get time to finish the last few paragraphs of the update...but i also think i kinda lost a bit of interest in it that's why...but don't worry i will try to keep going.

P.S. i replied to your comments..and i think there are like one or two comments where i have given a few hints of what will come😉

guys also i have started to write new stories...well they were just random ideas which came into my mind which i started writing and let me tell you there are about 3-4 different stories. i have decided not to post them until i am just near to finish them so that you guys would not have to wait this long ever again.

so here goes Chapter 6...

Chapter 6

After the small encounter with the little girl they all were all

lead to a special table which was in a private area with a few

other groups of people sitting around tables. They seemed to

be there either for a meeting or just some groups who would

like to have a bit of privacy.

The waiter lead the group of five to their table, where just

after a short while someone joined them. All of them got up

with smiles to greet him except Madhu who did get up but was

confused who that guy was. He was just about RK's height,

well a few inches taller and also had a very well built up body.

The stranger was wearing very formal clothes to which Madhu

guessed that he must be the friend they all wanted her to meet,

the owner of this cafe. As they were all just greeting each other

and hugging as if they were meeting after years they completely

forgot about Madhu who was just awkwardly standing there

rubbing her left arm with her right hand looking anywhere but

them. When she turned towards them, to her amazement she

saw Trishna giving that stranger a kiss on the cheek and him

interlocking his fingers with her and giving her a sweet smile.

Madhu couldn't help but smile at the sweet couple in front of

her eyes.

"Oh sorry Di, we totally forgot about you..." said Anjali gaining

her attention aswell as brought the others to pay attention

towards her.Madhu just smiled back not knowing what to say.

"Well Madhu meet Arjun...he is the one we wanted you to meet.

And Arjun this is Madhubala, a very old friend of mine and

Trishna's older sister..." Madhu wanted to correct RK, step-sister, but kept quiet. She didn't know why but she just did,

guessing not wanting to be to bitter in the joyful environment.

"Hey Madhubala," he said breaking her out of her thoughts.

"Hey...and please call me Madhu" she replied with a smile

"Trish you never told me that you had an older sister! And how

come i have never meet her?" he said turning to Trishna with

a confused look. The question also got RK wondering, how

come he didn't know that Shamsher Uncle had another daughter

and that too Madhu. They had never mentioned her name or

anything related to her before in front of him...

"Well i have always lived in London as our parents had separated

when we were really young, that's why" Madhu quickly replied

as she could tell by Trishna's face that she didn't know what to

say, "...and well i just came her to meet them all," she

continued. She always had been straight foreward with her

answers, furthermore she didn't want anymore questions

regarding that topic but Rishabh made a mental note on asking

her about it. She looked at Arjun's face and he seemed to be

more than satisfied with her answer.

"Alright, so Madhu how's London?" he asked seating himself

down aswell as the others.

"Ummm...nothing really special to be honest; of course except if

you are a person who likes wasting their time in front of a

palace or so.." she said with a shrug

"Hey! London is awesome ok! Full of People and different

colours of life.." argued back RK.

"Lets be honest Rishabh, there is nothing really special"

"Madhu it's such a historical place!"

"Ha! Historical'? As far as i remember you hated it! And if i

remember you always used to find excuses not to attend that

class or even bunked them!" RK had no words..it was all true..

he still hated history.

"Well..umm..the people...yeah the people...would you get such

a range anywhere else?" he said raising his brows.

"You mean you wouldn't get such a range' of different food...

after all that's what you always cared about.." she said with a

teasing smirk. All burst out laughing at him while e went

completely red.

"Di stop being mean to my Superstar.." Anjali said putting on a

straight face "...even though i miss those chubby cheeks to pull

at!" and once again Laughter could be heard.

"You guys are coming for the party tomorrow right?" asked

Arjun as they got ready to head back home.

"Of course yaar! It's your Dad who is hosting it so i have to!"

replied RK. Arjun's Dad was a very well known business man

and also had supported RK a lot in his struggling years.

"And Madhu you are coming too...and don't even try making

excuses...your whole family is coming" she had no other choice

than to agree, over the last few hours she did make out that

Arjun can be quite stubborn.

They all were sitting in the lounge when the five entered; all

laughing and chatting.

"How was lunch guys?" asked Roma gaining their attention

"Fab! Di revealed so many secrets of Superstar.." Anjali said

giving her mother a hug then seating herself next to her. Madhu

noticed Deepali giving them all angry glares...well why wouldn't

she be angry? They all did leave her...

"You know i really hate you for saying all those things..."

whispered Rishabh into Madhu's ear..

"It's not like i Love you.." she whispered back

"You never know...you might just do fall for me.." he said back

giving her a sexy wink, where as she gave back a puking face.

"Madhu beta...come sit with me here.." said a voice making

them turn towards him. Just his voice managed to boil up anger

and hate on her face. How many times did she have t tell him it

is Madhubala!?!

She completely ignored him and turned her head away which

landed on Trishna just making her fury within her worse.

"Madhu?"

"Shamsher stop calling her MADHU!" said Rohan loudly. He very

well knew that it was making her angry and als hurting her

somewhere deep down.

"She is my daughter Bhai!"

"She has told you so many times already that she doesn't want

you calling her that!"

"Bhai please...this matter is between Father-Daughter and i think it also should stay that way!"

"Stop calling me your daughter Mr.Malik! I have already told you

i don't have a father! And whatever Rohan Uncle is saying is

what i want which i have already told you many times..." she

said in fury.

Saying that RK was Shocked, amazed, surprised would all be

and understatement. Never in his life had he ever even

imagined Madhu being this harsh, that too towards her father.

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so guys how did you like it? Hope you enjoyed..

And guys i just wanted to let you know that the real story has not started yet...i am still just showing you everyone's relationship with one another...also introducing some characters but there is still one character because of whom Rishabala's story will start and HE has not come yet..😉


please leave feedback and hit the like button

Edited by lubzzxxx - 11 years ago
LoseYouToLoveMe thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
awesome ff dear!pls continue soon!& pls can u send me a friend request?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
interesting concept...love the family dynamics - can't imagine Malik cheating on Padmini.
So Madhu & RK are High school buddies - can't wait to read how they fall in love...

-Sona
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
Superbbb update... i loves madhu angry look in dis ff sooo muchhh...plzzz continue Soon...plzzz add a little twist like madhu got crush on someone rather then Rk...before she fall in love with Rk...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
NICE UPDATE LUBEEDA..! AND AFTER SO LONG ! I WAS WAITING FOR IT !

I AM LOVING THIS BUILD UP YAAR..! BUT I GUESS, ROHAN ISN'T NEGATIVE NO...
HMMM... SO "HE" WILL MAKE THEM REALISE THEIR LOVE.. HUNN...
UPDATE SOON..

I THINK THIS TIME I WROTE YOUR NAME CORRECTLY...! LOL..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
awesome ff..
do pm me when u update.plzzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
lovely update 😛 !! so RK and Madhu were never involved romantically ...even now they do look like just friends heheh !! Madhu is softening up towards Trish..is really nice !! somewhere i feel that Malik deserves what he receives from Madhu 😡 !! Very eager to see how rk and madhu's relationship is going to turn up😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
Nice update lubeeda, finally a update after so long, since now most of your commitments are over, pls try to update earlier, we will be waiting for the original start of the story, and a new character -he?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
arjun is a new entry - is he there for trishna
rk was surprised to see madhu being angry at her dad - he deosnt know the history yet
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update dear😊
trish and arjun r pair???
i think the whole family mwy try to get madhu to marry someone😊just a guess😉

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