Rishbala FF- A Twist Of Fate -Chp.15/Pg127-[05/10] - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago
wow it was awsum
thanks for coming back
cont sooner plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
You write really good! The introduction felt like something in a real book. I think you should continue! Can't wait to read more.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Can't wait for the next one...excited :) :) :) You write really good!
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG!!!! This is amazing...i love surprises like this. I loved how Dips burned wid jealousy :) I am really loving your work...Continue.
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Posted: 11 years ago
One word...AWESOME!
😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am loving this chemistry between RISHBALA already! 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lwrimaforever

awesome ff dear!pls continue soon!& pls can u send me a friend request?


Thanx buddy😊
i think i already have sent u one and u also accepted so for the next updates u will be getting PMs

Originally posted by: sparikh

interesting concept...love the family dynamics - can't imagine Malik cheating on Padmini.

So Madhu & RK are High school buddies - can't wait to read how they fall in love...

-Sona


U c i just wanted to try something different...and just wanted Madhu to hate him so thought of this..😛 (even tho me too would not believe this..hehe)
yeah becos they r buddies i want to first just show the pure friendship relationship they have and then maybe that could develop into love...or something totally different! You never know...hehe😛
Thnx for liking my story 😊

Originally posted by: karamjeet

Superbbb update... i loves madhu angry look in dis ff sooo muchhh...plzzz continue Soon...plzzz add a little twist like madhu got crush on someone rather then Rk...before she fall in love with Rk...


To be honest i myself like that angry look...hehe😆
and don't worry for the twist part..you guys have something big in store...and the crush part well there is also something for that but not exactly the way you want it...sorry😊


Thanks you guys😊

Originally posted by: kg15

NICE UPDATE LUBEEDA..! AND AFTER SO LONG ! I WAS WAITING FOR IT !

I AM LOVING THIS BUILD UP YAAR..! BUT I GUESS, ROHAN ISN'T NEGATIVE NO...
HMMM... SO "HE" WILL MAKE THEM REALISE THEIR LOVE.. HUNN...
UPDATE SOON..

I THINK THIS TIME I WROTE YOUR NAME CORRECTLY...! LOL..



Am so sorry for the late update...
well yes Rohan is not a negative but for the realization part i don't know yet who will do that or if they would figure out themselves..

Lol and yh u wrote it correctly this time😆 you can give me a nickname if u want...i dont mind...for me everyone has their own s ur more than welcome to aswell😊









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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: cool_sri

awesome ff..

do pm me when u update.plzzz


Sure i will😊
Thanx for liking it

Originally posted by: .Shree.

Lovely Update ❤️


Thanx buddies😊

Originally posted by: aDarkAngel

lovely update 😛 !! so RK and Madhu were never involved romantically ...even now they do look like just friends heheh !! Madhu is softening up towards Trish..is really nice !! somewhere i feel that Malik deserves what he receives from Madhu 😡 !! Very eager to see how rk and madhu's relationship is going to turn up😳


Yep they were never involved romantically and never also had those kind of feelings for each other...and i also want to continue this for some time...just to show their relation..
Yes am making Madhu also soften up towards Trish which hopefully would lead to something good😉
And regarding the father dauther relation i dont even wanna Madhu soften up towards him...he deserves it😳
P.S. me too waiting for the Rishabala story to actually start😛

Originally posted by: uma88

Nice update lubeeda, finally a update after so long, since now most of your commitments are over, pls try to update earlier, we will be waiting for the original start of the story, and a new character -he?


am sooo sorry for the late update..now will try to update fore frequently😊
well btw the of that he ...well he had been mentioned before😉

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

awesome update...arjun is nice...

Originally posted by: punam2712

arjun is a new entry - is he there for trishna

rk was surprised to see madhu being angry at her dad - he deosnt know the history yet


guys arjun is just like a small character...nothing important...well as of now...
and yes RK does not know her History...yet

Originally posted by: meiejrishbala

nice update dear😊
trish and arjun r pair???
i think the whole family mwy try to get madhu to marry someone😊just a guess😉


Nice guess...well u have to read on to find out...hehe
and yh they both r a pair but will not be that important..



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Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

wow it was awsum

thanks for coming back
cont sooner plz


sorry for the delay...
thanx for liking it and yes will try updating regularly now😊

Originally posted by: jankipatel22

You write really good! The introduction felt like something in a real book. I think you should continue! Can't wait to read more.


Thanx for the compliment😃
Means a lot to me

Originally posted by: jankipatel22

Can't wait for the next one...excited :) :) :) You write really good!


Thank you sooo much😃

Originally posted by: jankipatel22

OMG!!!! This is amazing...i love surprises like this. I loved how Dips burned wid jealousy :) I am really loving your work...Continue.

Originally posted by: jankipatel22

One word...AWESOME!
😛

Originally posted by: jankipatel22

I am loving this chemistry betweenRISHBALA already! 👏


Thank you again sooo much...u have no clue how much ur comments r making me smile😃

Originally posted by: cool_sri

waiting update soon...


Updating...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey guyes...so here goes the next update...there is also a flashback included😊


Chapter 7


"Madhu?"

"Go away Rishabh...i want to be alone!" I really did. Seeing that

man in front of me rose anger from within. I Hate him. Seeing his

face made me remember all the suffering my mom went through.

It was all his fault, the tears, the fake simile she used to put on,

the breakdowns, my never ending questions which i always asked

her when i was young, all that pain because of that man!


"Madhu.."

"I said go away!" He didn't. And i know he wouldn't either...he

never did. I could hear his footsteps progressing my way and then

he knelt down in front of me.

"Madhu? You are crying?" I was? He had said that with so much

concern in his voice that all i could do was look up at him.

Questioning yet pain, concerned filled eyes was all i could see.


He moved his hand forward and wiped away the wetness of my

cheeks which i had totally forgotten of because of his intense

eyes.

"Are you ok?" i nodded.

He took my hand from my lap and held it, trying to console me,

he held it in both his hands sill looking at me. Then sighting he

stood up and sat next to me on the bed so that we were

touching shoulders. After a few minutes of silence which

seemed like hours he spoke up.


"Madhu...what was that downstairs?" remembering it just made

me angry again.

"Madhu answer me.."

"Rishabh just leave.."

"No Madhu not until I get my answer!" he raised his voice...not

much but a bit. I didn't answer..

"Madhu, i have never seen you like that! Huh? What was that...

is that a way to talk to your father?"

"Ha...Father.." i said with disgust. He looked at me in shock

"What has gotten into you? You were never like this...care to

explain?"

"Why don't you go and ask that so-called-father-of-mine?"


"Since i have been here...i have never seen you here, nobody

even ever mentioned you! And i also know that when i was in

London you never came here either.." he looked at me, "..and i

remember you always talking to me about your father...how

much you wished to see him..how much you love him...how

much you wished to even know his name! So what's the problem

now Madhu!?! Why so bitter?" he finished. I could see the

confusion on his face.


"Rishabh some things are better not to be talked about..." i

didn't wanna speak about it. I knew if I would, it would hurt.

Always even in front of mom i kept myself strong, for her.

Never even really questioned about things when i learnt my

father's truth..i knew it would hurt her as well as me.


"Stop it Madhu! I thought you always told me everything but i

was wrong you never really even back then told me everything

now aswell your hiding stuff from me!!"

"What!?! What did i hide? I always told you everything!! Come

on tell me..." God this guy..i always shared my secrets with him

...my dreams...my thought, feelings...my pain...my crushes...

hell even when i started my periods!!



"How am i suppose to know what you didn't tell me? You should

know! You are the one who hid stuff!" Is this guy being for

serious? I just looked at him in awe! He has lost it and that is

for sure...

"You got to be kidding me! How can you accuse me of hiding

stuff from you when you yourself don't know what i hid!!"

"Oh yeah? Then what about Trishna? You never told me you

had a sibling!" OK this guy has officially lost it!


"Oye i never even know my Father's name back then and you

expect me to know about that girl?" i shouted. I was loosing it...

he was being so unreasonable and just couldn't stop blaming

me.

"Girl? Madhu was is wrong with you? She is your sister!" he

shouted back.

"She is NOT my sister!" i said stressing it out still keeping it a

bit low. I didn't want anyone to hear us. He looked at me

shocked yet had a some confusion in his eyes.

"Only because you haven't lived with her doesn't mean she is

not your sister.." he said in a frustrated tone yet had some

calmness to it.

"Rishabh you don't understand.." i said sitting back down onto

my bed putting my head in my palms.


"Make me understand then...please Madhu tell me what is

troubling you..." he said as he sat down in front of me. I knew

he was worried, he cared. I wanted to share everything but

didn't know how, we hadn't meet since years...was it still the

same between us?

"He...he cheated on her.." i let out. Tears rolled down my cheek.

"Wh..Who?" i remembered back to the day she told me

everything...just a few days after Rishabh had left...i was 16.


It had been 4 days since he had left...my best friend...my Rishu.

I took off my glasses and rubbed my eyes, they were red...i

knew it. Since 4 days i hadn't really talked to anyone and spent

most of my time in my room, crying and remembering old

memories. His departure didn't hurt me that much, it was just

the fact that he didn't even tell me the reason just said it was

urgent and something related to his parents. I was worried,

hoped that nothing bad happened...he really loved his parents

especially his dad.


Whenever he talked about his Dad it reminded me of mine...

who was he? I really wanted to meet him...be pampered by

him...be his little princess. But all that was far away from me.

Didn't he ever want to meet me? I also had stopped asking Maa

about him after the age of 11 or 12. Once i started seeing her

pain i could understand something was wrong but what? I

nerver knew. But still i always wished to see him...to be with

him...for him to return to us. Seeing all my classmates from a

very young age having fathers always made me upset. Maa

didn't know but i had many times also cried myself to sleep

just wishing he would be here. Be at those parent teacher

meetings...be the first one to wish me on my birthday...be the

one scolding me if i did something wrong...but he never was.


I needed answers! I felt so incomplete and also with Rishu

gone now. Who was he? Where was he? Why wasn't he with us?

Why could i always see the pain in Maa's eyes if someone

asked her about her husband? Could i ever meet him? Didn't he

want me? There were so many questions filling my mind that it

gave me a headache.


Precap-- Flashback continued...

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