Newff-PyaarHiZindagiHai-prt1pg2-witAtwist

hi

i started a ff ages ago but ididnt turn out gud so i stopped writting it.

so im having anoutha attampt.....

out of my 4 ideas i chose 4 as most people wanted that

part 1 ---- page 2

luv sukhi

rate numba ( n easy way of leaving comments if in a rush or tooo lazy)

0-- ur wasting ur tym and mine😡
1-- is it ova yet! yh ! finally 😭 😭
2-- just like every otha ff nothing unique 😭
3-- a bit better 😕
4-- ur gettung the hang of it 😊
5--ur and expect 😉

note-- i wil post this at the end of every part just incase u forget

hey congrats for ur new ff
i dont mind whatever u write except that jai and pia shud not be a couple at any cost nor tarun and bani
so u think a story and write it as u want because everyone in this forum are fed up already with the real soap i mean jp's angel, bt's etc etc
so write smthg new which would please all ur viewers and u can a lot of applause...
hope u got my point
waiting for part1
make ur decision soon

i prefer version 4....let ur ff be only bout jai n bani n their romance 😳

2 or 4 for me....JP as a couple, unfortunately, I can't stomach 😕

bt

Originally posted by: cute & crazy

nice story jaan!! contd soon!
aur rahi baat title ki to.....ummmm.....let's see.....it can be....pyaar hi zindagi hai!! 😆 i dont think you'll like it but perhaps.....

hi i luv it

imve used ut lol

!!

still confused😕i will shoose later n start it

thanx everyone 4 ur suggestions

#4

i think that version 4 sounds very interesting!!👏

Please cont soon
thanks
sunju

#4 man they should start from the beging or 2 luv to see bani get revange on pia

4 because then Jai n Bani can be with each other, but have kids!!!